Essay+Comments+9FJ

__**Narrative Essay**__

I have read over the comments, and I agree with all of the comments. There weren't many comments, but for the ones there were I agree with them. I also thought that this essay was more of a blog entry or an experience report rather than a reflection with a special moral. I wrote like this because I got too into writing about the amazing experience itself that I forgot to write the reflection part. I also thought that this essay was kind of too long, considering the word limit was almost half of what I wrote. Overall, the essay was a good blog entry but lacked the elements of a narrative essay.

__**Characterization Essay**__

Once again, I agree with the comments. I kind of disagree with the "too many quotes" comment, but I understand how the reader can see that. I agree that I took a side and made it clear of that, but the essay was still an in-between essay with kind of this and kind of that all over it. I also did not know two hyphens make a dash, so I learned something new!