Becoming Shakespeare revising

What did the author do well overall? This essay is well overall. I can understand Shakespeare's background information. Also she gives impact to audience. What could the author improve overall? If author state the main idea of paper more clear to the body part it will be perfect! **Ideas and Content:** 1. Does the author clearly state the main idea of the paper in the first paragraph? What is the main idea? Yes, the author clearly state her main idea. The author's main idea is theatre about Shakespeare. Explain why the main idea is or is not clear: The author has clear thesis statement. 2. Do the middle paragraphs develop / gives examples to support the topic / main ideas? Does each supporting paragraph develop one idea or example? Do any paragraphs need clarification or expansion? The middle paragraphs develop, the author keep gives Shakespeare's background information, examples, and what author feels. 3. Does the ending bring the paper to a satisfactory close? Explain how the ending works or does not work: The author wrapped up with clear conclusion. It is clearly explained and the ended. **Organization:** 1. Are there any parts of the paper that should be reordered? Explain: This essay is well ordered, but each of the body paragraphs need clear organizations. 2. Do the transitions in the paper work? Is there an over use of “and, so, but, then, or”? No the author didn't over use of "and, so, but, then, or." The author transitions in the paper work well done. **Sentence Fluency:** 1. Are there rambling and/or confusing sentences? No confusing sentences. 2. Does the author use a variety of sentence lengths? Yes, the author used variety of sentences length like commas, quotation, and etc. **Citing Sources:** 1. **Highlight all the in-text citations No in-text citations!** 2. Does the author use in-text citations for any information that is not common knowledge or is a direct quotation? 3. Are there any sentences or sections that don’t sound like the author’s work? 4. Does the author have a works cited list in MLA format? She need to works cited list.
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