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1.Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks too soon.

8/24

1. "The play, //__Romeo & Juliet__// was written by Shakespeare," Jin-hee stated, "It was considered one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin said with choleric intensity. "Must I wait another six months?"

8/26 - [Coordinating]

1. Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

8/25

1. The doctor identified his choler as the main problem of his sickness.

2. I augmented more books to my library with the money I earned. **YEA! MORE BOOKS.**

9/1 1. "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in you're paragraph, Richard?"

2. The students sold many pizzas; the trip didn't cost them too much.

__**Reflection**__

Overall, I am enjoying my book so far. Not like most books, my book is a Spanish book. Because it is in a different language, it makes it a bit interesting. My book talks about normal freshmen life, with relationships, food, school, grades, etc. It is quite astonishing, because the book reflects on student who goes to a Spanish school. I like my book, because I both learn more about Spanish schools, and daily Spanish student life. My book is a fictional story, however, it is interesting, because it takes part of a non-fictional locations and characters on our age. In addition, my book is about 150 pages. The thing that I learned over this book were the daily life issues of teenage lives. I was able to learn about daily teenage lives in Spain. I learned their different customs, what kind of a man is romantic, and what foods Spanish teenagers enjoy eating.

__**Defintion: Sonnet**__ 1. A poem of 14 lines using any formal of rhyme schemes. It also consists of 10 syllables, as well as a pattern with A-B-A-B-C-D-C-D-E-F-E-F-G-G of rhyming.

2. __**Example Sonnet-**__ pg. 57 (Lines 104~111).

__**Journal Writing**__ __Romeo__ Today, I went through the most extraordinary day of my life. Tonight, I have created a sin, yet, the it was a special sin that I can never forget. As I kissed her, my heart was pumping fast as wind. My hands are trembling because I miss her so much. I want to see her again... But did I create a sin? Was it a reasonable kiss for me to make as a Montague? I mean...I kissed a Capulet! I hope there are no punishments for this... But on the other hand, it was worth it. I think I love her, and I miss her. **HE KISSED A CAPULET (HE'S MONTAGUE). OTHERWISE, I LOVE THIS. YOU EXPLORE A DEEPER ISSUE THAN JUST THE KISS.

10/10**

1. "That dog there has bitten several Mail Carriers; His owners did well to keep him chained, don't you think"? (all one sentence)

2. The boat //Roman III//, by the way, sunk two years ago. Wasn't it located other there?

9/18

1. We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party.

2. The portrait //Mona Lisa//, painted around 1503, is considered the best of many that Da Vinci completed.

10/6

1. Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine "Outdoor Life" about camping Catskills Mountains?

2. No one in my family has ever went to the art museum in chicap and seen Picasso's painting __The Blue Guitarist__

10/8 1. "Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?"

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading Romeo and Juliet.

10/13

Day 22:

DOL Review

1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause- Introduction words put comma for time and cause. Until school was over, Chris couldn't speak Korean. 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book- You have to Capitalize a specific copyright title of a series of TV, play, etc. __Romeo and Juliet__ 3. Single vs. double negative- One negative for sentences, double explains both negativity in the noun, and the direct object related to it. He did not take the quiz He did not take any of the quizzes 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom- An unknown character or a sibling is capitalized. The Grandma gave allowance to the Mom. 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot all right- talks about every components were all OK alright- Talks about it was OK, but not great. The answers were all right The answers were alright; he did not receive full credit. 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first -Chris, the oldest son, did not complete his homework.

10/15/09 After all of those nastiness and thrilling secrets of Juliet's plan happened, Romeo is staying in Martua, waiting for his love to come back. However, Juliet is still staying in the tomb, which appears to most of the people that she is dead. After that, Balthasar comes to Romeo and informs that the everything is all fine, however, recognizes that Juliet is dead; Friar Lawernece could not send the letter. Because he was in a cell, he could not retrieve the letter. Romeo, on this situation, now does not know the suicidal plan of Juliet, and gets a mental shock. Romeo then goes to a drug dealer to obtain a poison potion, and plan to die along with her. However, when he goes to the tomb to commit the suicide, Paris was there, and Romeo kills him during the duel. Then, Romeo kills himself, however, after that, Juliet wakes up. She could not accept the tragedy on his death, and kills herself. The story of //__Romeo and Juliet__// ended in a tragedy.

11/11/09

Pg. 11 The tiger is restless. He is very big; he should have more room.

Pg. 12 &13

3. All of the countries are green; Ireland and Scotland is green too.

4. All the children want to go McDonald's; they ate hamburgers and french fries.

DOL Art of Sentences

11/12/09

1. a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji lack enthusiasm.

2. a. Candide kissed her hand. b. Candide hid behind the screen


 * Checkpoint 1**

Paraphrasing- There are 3 patterns that consist different types of grammatical differentiations to each of them. All three of them consist of different punctuation changes, as well as different patterns to change the function of the sentence.

Pattern 1: It must take 2 closely related statements about the same idea, and the statemtents you do not want to be punctuated should be separated by 2 sentences.

Pattern 2: It must have a specific words from the first clause, and should be implied; but not stated in the second. If stated in the second, it would otherwise be no ellipsis possible.

Pattern 3: This pattern needs to consist a second independent clause in some form that it explains the idea mentioned in the first independent clause. However, this pattern should not be used with a colon unless the second statement is related to the first.

The compound sentences factors should be able to stay independent, while completing a full sentence as well.
 * Checkpoint 2**

1. The students studying overnight: the students all got A's in their papers.

2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: it confused many people with a new schedule.

1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you; sooner than throw you in the dungeon. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners: hereabouts but leave it o me. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there: and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) 4. The abbe now spoke up "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ."
 * Monday Nov. 30th Art of Sentences**


 * Wednesday December 2nd Art of Sentences**

Exercises example 1 & 2

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: Introduction, body, conclusion.

2. Chicken, bread, steak are my favorite foods.

1/7/09

My dad told me I should stop playing games, my friends dissagreed with this. (Pattern 1). The game was very exciting to me; I could not stop playing it. (Pattern 3) The game included many features: single player, multiplayer, as well as co-op mode. (Pattern 4)

1/6/10 It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did.

The weather was described simply in 2 words: ice, and snow. It was as if white meteors were falling down the sky. I had countless events of fun! However, I am sad; I didn't get any extraordinary presents like what I expected, and my brother did not get much as well. PC bang's addictive games, super fast sledding, are some of my unforgettable memories from my fun activities.

1/14/10

1. Brendan didn't want anything returned except his //Times// and //Sports Illustrated//, the two magazines that he give to them students.

2. The pipe burst during the morning through the afternoon; Dad found a plumber to repair them.