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Sentence Pattern Work

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title

I think //Romeo and Juliet// last act is extremely interesting and fun. Juliet was asleep; she was in a deep sleep from drinking the potion. When Romeo arrived at Juliet's side with a poison in his hands, he found Paris there, too. While Romeo mourned Juliet, Paris triggered Romeo's temper and they fought. Before Paris died, Paris begged Romeo to let him lie next to Juliet. Romeo, a sad and lonely boy, drank the poison and also fell, dead. Later, Juliet woke up to find a dead Paris and her love Romeo, dead with a empty vial of poison in his hands.

DOL Review -- 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause Always place a comma after the adverb clause. Before the curtain fell, the actress bowed. 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book Titles of TV shows, books, etc. are supposed to be underlined or italicized. I want to see the TV series // Blue Blood // as quickly as possible. 3. Single vs. double negative Double negative is not good! Use single negative. D.N: Don't eat no junk food! S.N: She doesn't eat junk food. 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom When the term is used as a name "Mother told us to wait in the car, Sally!" "My mother went to the mall with my sister Sally." 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot All right would be when you're kind of asking permission, while alright is more like "okay?" "It's all right to say that I'm dating him, right?" "I'm going to date him, alright?" 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first There is supposed to be a comma after the proper noun, and after the appositive. Paris, a city of fashion, is located in France. 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second There has to be a comma after the appositive, but not necessary after the proper noun. A beautiful maltipoo, Penny is the puppy of // Gossip Girl // star, Blake Lively. 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of When you are "regretting" or wishing for another outcome, you use "should have" I should have told my parents that I would be late.

1.) "Sergeant Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-Seventh division personnel are from Busan?"

2.) "After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading //Romeo and Juliet//."

1.) Mother spoke to Kevin and her, concerning an article in the magazine //Outdoor Life// about camping in the Catskills Mountains.

--> Another way (question form)

"Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine //Outdoor Life// about camping in the Catskills Mountains?"

2.) No one in my family has ever gone to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting //The Blue Guitarist.//

we went to brendans house which is located on forty sixth avenue for the october party.

--> We went to Brendan's house, on Forty-Sixth Avenue for the October party.

the portrait mona lisa the portrait was painted around 1503 is considered the better painting of many that da Vinci ompleted.

--> The portrait "//Mona Lisa//" was painted around 1503, and is considered the better painting of many Da Vinci completed.

1.) that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence)

--> That dog over there has bit several mail carriers; his owners would do some good to keep him chained, don't you think?
2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there

--> The boat __Roman III__, by the way, sunk two years ago. Wasn't it located over there?
Diary Entry from the Perspective of Juliet (from the party)
 * YOU SEEM TO BE MISSING THE REFLECTION ABOUT YOUR BOOK; OTHERWISE, NICE JOB: 8/10**

Dear Diary, Oh, i met the most wonderful person! He was so charming and i certainly wanted to talk to him more! However, i also found out something shocking. He is Romeo Montague, my family's most loathed enemy's son! Oh, why must my first love come from such a hated family? It is so sad. I guess perhaps i must have to give up on loving him. It is impossible to love Romeo. My family would disown and kill me if i did such a dishonorable thing. Oh my goodness, the sky outside is beautiful. I think i'll go outside and think about my impossible love for a while. I hope the fresh air will help my sore heart. **OF COURSE FORESHADOWING THE NEXT SCENE. NICE.**

Sincerely, Juliet

DAY 2, 8/20/09 1. terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left in disgust


 * --> Terry rung the bell at the gatehouse, but when no one answered, he left in disgust.**

2. i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon


 * --> My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off the bus 2 blocks too soon.**

DAY 3, 8/24/09

1. The play romeo and juliet was written by shakespeare jin hee stated is considered one of the poets best


 * --> "The play __Romeo and Juliet__ was written by Shakespeare," Jinhee stated, "it is considered one of the poet's best."**

2. when will you learn me to drive austin asked in exasperated choleric intensity must i wait another six months


 * --> "When will you learn to drive?" Austin asked with choleric intensity, "must I wait another six months?"**

DAY 4, 8/26/09

1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house


 * --> Since you're late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.**

2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents


 * --> My sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.**

(coordinating conjunctions)

DAY 7 8/27/09

Write a sentence with choler and augment.


 * --> The house had a choleric atmosphere, which was caused by my mother's augmented temper.** NICE SENTENCE

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. "Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in you're paragraph, Richard?"


 * --> "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?"**

2. The Students sold many pizzas, the trip don't cost them too much.


 * --> The students sold many pizzas, so the trip didn't cost too much.**