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Brendan dont want nothing returned but time and sports illustrated the 2 magazines that he give to them students Brendan does not want anything returned but __Time__ and __Sports Illustrated__, the 2 magazines that he gives to his students. the pipe bursted during the morning during the afternoon dad founded a plumber to repair them Because the pipe burst in the morning, Dad found a plumber to repair it in the afternoon. Jan 8 It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did. There was a lot of snow and it was cold. I had lots of fun playing outside with the snow. However, I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. Some activities I did were playing at the PC bong, going sledding and talking with friends. Jan 6 During the break I went to hagwons; sat and math. It was hard, boring, tiring. However, I think it helped me learn some new techniques about the SAT. On December 24th, Christmas Eve, I went to go watch the Nutcracker Ballet performed by a Russian Ballet group. The performance was amazing and alluring-- and stunning. Dec.4** ** My group, Connie In Sun and Michelle Park 1. Robert Mondavi's father, Ceasare, came from Sassafarento near Ancona, on the Adriatic coast of the Marches- not a particularly rich or fertile part of Italy even now, nor, except for Verdicchio, much of a wine-growing region, and good deal less so, no doubt, in 1883, when Ceasare was born, the son of a large, simple family and possibly the first member of it, I have read somewhere, to be able to sign his name
 * Jan 14

No, this is definitely not an effective style of writing because first of all, it looks like just a mass of random info that can overwhelm the reader. Some people think it's greatly effective to write long sentences, but sometimes it isn't a good way to write. It just destroys the writing. So the most important piece of this "passage" is that the person who wrote this was able to sign his name. However, the other information makes it look as if other parts of the so-called "passage" is more important.

Robert's father, Ceasare, came from Sassafarento, on the Adriatic coast of the Marches. Sassafarento is not a rich or fertile part of Italy, except for Verdicchio where they have wine-growing regions. When Ceasare was born as a large, simple family in 1883 and became possibly the first member of it, he was able to sign his name onto the land. **

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion. 2. Chicken, Pork, Ham are my favorite foods. Nov 30 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts but leave it o me. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe in Normandy I will take you there and if you have any diamonds for him he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) 4. The abbe now spoke up "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some fookish talk which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ."
 * Dec 2.

1. no pattern (simple sentence) 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there, and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) - pattern 1b 4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because I am imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." -  Monday, Nov. 23 1. Read Checkpoints on page 17, then paraphrase. a. Remember, a paraphrase is NOT copying, but putting in your own words. How to do this? Read it, put it aside so you don't see the original, write, then double check to make sure you didn't plagiarize or mess up the meaning. b. Try to use one of the patterns in your paraphrase. 2. Exercises 1 and 2 on page 17 Paraphrase: pattern 1 : The idea of two sentences should be put into one and should be related. pattern2 : make the first clause simple and vague. pattern3 : The second clause should be much more detailed than the first sentence.

Excercise 1 and 2 1. The test was very easy; the students all got A's on their papers 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: the workers need to come every day to work including saturday. Nov. 16, **** 1. Read pages 15 and 16, then close the book. Explain to a partner the rule. Partner, listen first (when they are completely finished), correct or add to what the person said. Be prepared to present to the class (it would be the person who didn't share the first time).

Nov 11 1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom language the bud action the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson Thought is the blossom, language the bud, and action the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji lackadaisically. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji lackadaisically 2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about // Candid e //. Candide and Pangloss had ideas; Candide, more about love; Pangloss, educational. Pattern 1 group 1 ** - The girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has one too.

The tiger seems restless. He is really big. He should have more room. **
 * Pattern 1 group 2
 * The tiger seems restless; he is really big, and should have more room. **

** Pattern 2 ** 3 . China and Korea is full with pollution; **Ireland and Scotland, much greener.** 4 **. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch;** to the moms, a disaster