DOLQ1+Bobby+C.

Day 1 1. Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse; when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-Second and Hamilton street; unfortunately, we got off the bus too blocks too soon.

Day 5: August 24 1. "The play //Romeo and Juliet// was written by Shakespeare," Jin Hee stated, "and is considered to be one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months?"

Day 6: August 25 1. Because you're late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My sister doesn't always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Day 7: August 27 "We shall augment the efficiency of the surgery by using machine surgeons," Derek daydreamed lazily to himself, before his baby son broke his exhaustion induced stupor in a cry of choler. **NICE SENTENCE**

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard? 2. The students had sold many pizzas; the trip didn't cost them too much.

Day 10 [|Reflection]

Day 11 Sonnet- 14 lines, 10 syllables each. Rhyme sceme- ababcdcdefefgg Lines 104-118 "If I profane with my unworthiest hand..."

Day 12 That miserable, little rat of Montague! To wander around //our// party is the greatest, insufferable arrogance. I will not stand for this while I yet live. Fair Romeo will rue the day he humiliated Tybalt of Capulet. The malignancy's disgusting brashness got me kicked out of my own family's party! **FUN PLAY WITH VOCABULARY 10/10 TO DAY 12 Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. That dog has bit several mail carriers; his owners would do good to keep him chained, don't you think? (all one sentence)

2. The boat Roman III, by the way, sunk two years ago and wasn't located for another three. **

Prologue: Now Romeo's old love for Rosaline has expired while his new love for Juliet is flowering. Rosaline, who Romeo would have died for in his love, now looks horrendous when compared to Juliet. Now Romeo is in love with Juliet, both of whom find the other physically attractive. However, with Juliet, who aught to be his enemy, he must find favor if he wants her to brave the dangers of their love. Because of their feud, Romeo may not be able to marry Juliet as he would have under different circumstances, and Juliet will find it difficult to meet him given her family. However, their love will grant them the dedication to find time and brave the dangers for the promise of their love.

Day 15 1. We went to Brendan's house on Forty Sixth Avenue, for the October Party.

2. The portrait "Mona Lisa," that was painted around 1503, is considered a better painting of da Vinci's.

Day 16 [|Promptbook Comparison]

Day 18 1. Has mother spoken to Kelvin and her concerning an article in the magazine //Outdoor Life// about camping in the Catskills Mountains?

2. No one in my family has not gone to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting "The Blue Guitarist."

Day 19 1. Sgt. Spiker, is it al' right to assume that of the Twenty-seventh personnel are from Husan?

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Colebridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading //Romeo and Juliet.//

[|Act 3 Notes]

Day 22 1. Write the adverb followed by a comma and finish the sentence- Judiciously, he spread the candy upon the fround for the little spiders. 2. All tv series, tv episodes, movies, short stories, plays, and books must be either underlined or italicized. When typing, it is considered more appropriate to italicize, but one can do either- Did you see last night's episode of //House//? 3. One should never use a double negative, instead opting for the positive- You don't not know negatives. / You do know negatives. 4. Capitalize grandma or mom when using it as a nick name, rather than a position- Hey, Mom, could you pick me up from school? / Is Andrew's mom going to pick him up from school? 5. Alright, irregardless, and alot are incorrect, while all right, regardless, and a lot are correct- I think bowling makes the perfect party, regardless/irregardless of the occasion. 6. Place a comma after the proper noun- This is Bobby, a traveling street vendor. 7. Do not use a comma- This is the traveling street vendor Bobby. 8. Should have is proper, should of is rounded- I should have written, "should have," on my essay; I would have gotten 100%!

Day 23 The first scene is so very tragic. Romeo is bouncing up and down with anticipation for news of Juliet, his love, when he receives the news of her death. In a fit of rage and sadness, he rode back to Verona to die with her. //Romeo and Juliet:// sad stuff, man. He goes to her, kills Paris, and proclaims how Death hath not yet taken her beauty; the fact kills him. Oh, Friar Lawrence, if you had hurried up, perhaps Romeo would not have died. Perhaps, if you had not been frightened by spirits, Juliet would have lived as well. Imagine the jubilation of the scene if Juliet had woken moments earlier, for as she herself said, the blood was still warm within Romeo when he was taken.

Day 24 Two of the most noticeable, if not the most important, changes were the exclusion of Paris at the grave and the addition of a second funeral for Romeo and Juliet. The funeral I imagine was added to provide a more suitable amount of denouement, while the fight scene was removed either because of time constraints or because it was seen as unnecessary or out of place with the tragic scene. The addition is a nice touch, i think. It makes it end less suddenly.

Pattern 1, pg. 11 Group 1: The girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has one too. Group 2: The tiger seems restless and really big; he should have more room. Pattern 2, pg. 14 1. Going to carnivals makes me happy; James Bond movies, campy. 2. James Bond movies make me feel excited; violent movies, uncomfortable.

Pattern 1b, pg.11 Group 3: Fettuccini is a delicious pasta, and it is a favorite dish in many European countries; it is often associated with Italy, but a person who like fettuccini is not always Italian. 3. Britain and New Jersey are very drab, Ireland and Scotland, much greener. (Ryan Tae Checked) 4. All of the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; all of the adults, Burger King. (Ryan Tae Checked)

November 11 a. Thought is the blossom; lange, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically. c. The Bulgars burn villages with gusto; the Abars, the same way. d. Cunegonde wants to be a scientist; Candide, her husband.

November 23 Pattern 1 is used to conjoin two statements that elucidate the same topic; they needn't be defined as two separate sentences. Pattern 2 has some words in the first statement that are only implied in the second statement; Pattern 1, two full ideas. Pattern 3 has two statements: one is a broad idea, and the second clarifies or explains the first. 1. The class average was higher than expected: the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they allow you to work at home.

November 24 I believe that the argument regarding constant warfare as the case for this not being the best of all possible worlds is not the best, as it does not hold much water against the arguments of the late, great Pangloss. He'd argue that it is only through this constant warfare that the world is made to be the best, for the deaths of those men and women who will be killed in the slaughter were just another step towards the greater good. The argument fails to take into account why it is exactly that warfare is considered to be explicitly bad. From Pangloss's point of view, warfare is an explicitly good thing because this is the best of all possible worlds, so warfare must be something that makes it the best.

November 30 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. (Sentence) 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. (Compound Sentence) 3. I have a brother in Dieppe in Normandy; I will take you there, and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (Pattern 1B) 4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ." (Complex Sentence)

December 2 1. An essay usually has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion. 2. Spaghetti, bananas, lucky charms are my favorite foods. 3. Hardened, bruised, exhausted, the winner left the stadium feeling great.

Verily, the armies of the world converged on Rio de Jianaro, ready to end this absurd chase once and for all. “We’re almost there; high tail it!” shouted Steven. “Xenophobia! You’re actions towards a member of another species suggest nothing but xenophobia, Captain,” their Hippolion captive exclaimed. “Zounds! Attack helicopters to the northeast, Captain!” announced James. “Beside that dumpster, get down!” Covering their heads with their arms, they sought shelter from the helicopters behind the dumpster. “Damn, Captain, what are you doing? Explain your brash actions right this moment!” the Hippolion demanded. “Filing papers away as a secretary, that’s your job, eh? Go take an actual look at those papers you’ve been working with, and I think you’ll see that your boss is trying to take over the world. He’s been collecting data, analyzing, consulting, scheming.” Instantly, once the sentence had been spoken, Steven rocketed out from behind the dumpster and in through the nearest window, with James and the Hippolion shortly behind. “Just down this elevator I know we will find his secret lair,” said Steven, entering the elevator and pressing the button for, “secret lair,” as he did so. “Know? Look, Captain, I’ve worked in this building my whole life; there’s no secret lair underneath it.” Moments after the completion of this claim, the doors opened upon a massive catacomb and speakers announced, “Now, it seems as though you’ve figured me out, eh, Captain?” “Observe me, schemer,” shouted Steven, “and see that I come with the backing of the Time Lords; you shall reveal yourself to me or be destroyed.” “Perhaps,” said the schemer, as he materialized before them, “you wish to arrest me, Captain. Question me!” “Rules mean nothing to me at this point, and I am taking your fate into my hands.” “Stupid child, you cannot work outside of the wishes of the people! This is what I deserve?”  “Undeniably so,” said James as Steven ended the schemers plans, forever. January 6

Christmas was very fun this year. From my grandparents, I received clothes; from my cousins, a camera (Pattern 2). Cousin Teddy started crying; he didn't want to eat the broccoli (Pattern 1). The whole celebration was joyous, hilarious, memorable (Pattern 4). I love having Christmas at my grandparents: it's über fun (Pattern 3).

1. A conversation with one Mr. Hawley. 2. A conversation with Ma and Pa regarding Pa's new job.

January 8 1. I got my hair cut to about 5cm; went to hakwons; went skiing.(Pattern 4) My haircut was very simple: It wasn't very obvious at all.(Pattern 3) My mom told me to cut about 10cm below my ears; my brother said it's the same. (Pattern 1) The barber wasn't very good, so mom yelled at him. However, he refused to give us a refund, but we called his manager.

2. Most of my friends told me that they enjoyed the vacation even if it was short. //Jinhee went to America; Michelle went to Guam; Hyunsun stayed at home.// (Pattern 4) However, I really couldn't enjoy my vacation because I still had some work to do. To me, the whole winter vacation was very quick and was scheduled with lots of events. //There were no homework assigned during the break; however, I had work to do.// (Pattern 1a) There were secret missions that I had to undertake. Christmas wasn't going to save itself from the maniacal raving of an insane lunatic bent on Santa's destruction.

3. A lot of things have happened during winter break. I ate rice cakes; my sister ate chicken. (Pattern 1) For me, the rice cakes were delicious; for my sister, horrible. (Pattern 2) I thought the rice cakes were delicious because they were chewy, sweet, soft. (Pattern 4) On the other hand, the chicken tasted terrible to me: it was tough and flavorless. (Pattern 3) Nonetheless, everyone enjoyed their Christmas meal and went home with bright smiles on their faces.

1. the pipe bursted during the morning during the afternoon dad founded a plumber to repair them

-> The pipe burst in the morning; in the afternoon, dad found a plumber to repair it.

2. ryan don't want nothing returned but time and sports illustrated the 2 magazines that he give to them students.

-> Ryan doesn't want anything returned other than //Time// and //Sports Illustrated//, the two magazines that he gave to the students.