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Day 4: August 21 1. terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left in disgust -Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse; when no one answered, he left in disgust. 2. i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon -My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-Second and Hamilton streets; unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks too soon.

Day 5: August 24 1. The play romeo and juliet was written by shakespeare jin hee stated and is considered one of the poets best -"The play // Romeo and Juliet, // was written by Shakespeare," Jinhee stated, "and is considered one of the poet's best." 2. when will you learn me to drive austin asked in exasperated choler must i wait another six months -"When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months?"

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house -Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give our boys the video games to take it to Hyunsun's house. 2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents -My sister does not have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. -His choler had augmented when he heard about the news. Day 9: 1. arent their alot of quoted passages in youre paragraph richard - "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?" 2. the students had sold many pizzas the trip doesn't cost them too much -Because the students sold many pizzas, so the trip don't cost them as much.

Journal: September 7th, 2009 -Since I forgot to bring my book //The Kite Runner//, I read a book called //The Native Speaker//. I was only able to go up to the first chapter; however, I was able to see a lot from the character. In the chapter, the author (main character)'s wife has left him because the wife thought that he was not a good husband. According to the husband, he sort of admits that he did not spend time with his wife that well; he was usually working on his works while the wife wanted to communicate. When the wife went on a "trip," she gave him a poem that looked like a "love" poem. However, it was not the truth; she wrote bad comments about him in the poem. It was interesting how the author did not get mad as he should have been even though his wife had left him. From this short section, I was able to tell that this author is very calm and not "hot-tempered." **DO YOU LIKE THE BOOK?**

Journal: September 9th, 2009 -A sonnet is a poem that has 14 lines and has 10 syllables from each line. It also has a rhyme scheme such as using a, b, c, etc. From act 1 scene 5, when Romeo speaks on line 48~60, there is a clear sonnet because it contains a rhyme scheme at the end and it has 10 syllables per line.

Write a diary entry from the perspective of Romeo, Juliet, or Tybalt about the evening. Take on their personality.(September 11th, 2009) -Juliet's perspective: Today, our Capulet's have held a enjoyable party this evening. There were mouth-watering foods and gorgeous people who wore their suits and dresses. At one moment, I was able to enjoy the most beautiful event in my life; meeting a guy named Romeo. We were sort of "love in first sight." Romeo looked beautiful; it made me feel very happy. As we got to know each other, I was able to notice that Romeo was a very sweet guy. However, this moment had not lasted long until my mother called me along; the nurse had interrupted our conversation. Even though I was only able to spend a little time with Romeo, I want to meet him someday again and talk more about ourselves. **FUN HOW YOU MENTIONED THE FOOD AND OUTFITS. THIS IS EXACTLY SOMETHING JULIET MIGHT WRITE IN HER DIARY.

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DOL Day 14 1. that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence) -Their dog has bitten several Mail Carriers and his owner should keep him chained, don't you think? 2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there -The boat, Roman III, sank two years ago was not located under there. DOL Day 15: September 18th, 2009 1. we went to brendans house which is located of forty sixth avenue for the october party -We went to Brendan's house, which is on the Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party. 2. the portrait mona lisa the portrait that was painted around 1503 is considered the better painting of many that da vince completed -The portrait // Mona Lisa //, around 1503, is considered the best of the many that da Vinci completed. DOL Day 18: October 8th, 2009 1. sgt spriker is it alright to assume that most of the twenty seventh division personnel are from busan -"Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?" 2. after you have drew a map showing the route from coleridge ave to highway 52 you may continue reading romeo and juliet -After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading // Romeo and Juliet //.

Day 22: 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause -a comma is placed after an adverbial clause when this is in the beginning -ex. After I was done with my homework, I slept! 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book -all of these factors that have a specific name should be underlined or italicized -ex. The book that I read is called //The Kite Runner.// 3. Single vs. double negative -it is very uncommon to use double negative; it is usually right to use the single negative instead of double negative -ex. single: We don't have any homework! (single) double: We don't have no homework! (double; which is wrong) 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom -You either capitalize grandma or mom if it's the first word of the sentence OR if it's used as a name (referenced). -ex. My mom is picking me up after school. Grandma is picking me up after school. 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot -all right=X/alright=O; alot=X/a lot=O -ex. Your pictures are all right. Is it alright to take pictures in our class? 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first -The commas are placed after the proper noun and then the appositive -ex. Ms. Porter, an English teacher in KIS, is the best teacher ever! 7. commas with an appositive with the proper noun second -a comma is placed after an appositive (opposite of #6) -ex. A big red dog, Clifford is the main character from the TV Show, //Clifford//. 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of -should of=X/should have=O; should have basically means that you are wishing for something -ex. I should have asked for an extra credit so that I can raise my grade up!
 * DOL Review**

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title -From //**Romeo and Juliet**//, Act 5, many tragedies happen. **When Balthasar, Romeo's messenger, brings him a message about Juliet's death, he panics.** **After he has heard the news, he rushes to the grave where Juliet is located.** **When Romeo arrives there, Paris is also there weeping about Juliet's death; they cannot control their behavior and start to fight.** Paris eventually dies because Romeo stabs him. Romeo drinks his poison and dies beside Juliet. **When the Montagues, part of Romeo's family, and the Capulets, part of Juliet's family comes to the tomb, they somber about their children's death.** The Prince comes and figures out what had happened by the conversation that he has with the Friar. Fortunately, even though they were rivals before, they were able to have a better relationship by Romeo and Juliet's death. (the bolded ones emphasizes the grammar skills a-d.)

Day 24: Compare and contrast Overall, I personally think that the story and the movie were mostly similar; however, it was different in a way. For example, when the servant brings Romeo the news about Juliet, I thought Romeo would not be in such place, but rather in a place where his house is close by. For Juliet's death scene, it was interesting to see the customs of the people; they threw roses to her body. I thought there would not be a significant event, but it was interesting to see. The tomb inside looked very creepy. Even though I expected the tomb to be scary, I did not really imagine having skeletons in the tomb!!! Also, the book did not mention about Romeo buying the potion; however, I think this was very important because the audiences would not understand how he suddenly got the poison and drank it. Lastly, it was also interesting to see how Juliet was so brave enough to kill herself. I already assumed that she would be brave from the book because she was killing herself, but the movie seemed even braver! From the discussion: Friar Lawrence leaves "reluctantly;" Prince and Romeo's fighting scene did not make an appearance

Day 26: The Art of Styling Sentences Pattern 1, page 11 Group 1: -The girl looks happy. -She has a new car. -Her brother has one too.
 * The girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has one too.**

Day 28: The Art of Styling Sentences Group 2: -The tiger seems restless. -He is really big. -He should have more room.
 * The tiger seems restless; he is really big, and he should have more room.**

Pattern 2: Compound sentence with elliptical construction Examples
 * 1) 1 Going to carnivals makes me happy; //for Jennifer, boring//.
 * 2) 2 //Watching comedy movies are fun//; violent movies, uncomfortable.

November 9/10

Group Three: -Fettuccini is a delicious pasta. -It is a favorite dish in many European countries. -It is often associated with Italy. -A person who likes fettuccini is not always Italian.
 * Fettuccini is a delicious pasta, it is a favorite dish in many European countries; it is often associated with Italy, and a person who likes fettuccini is not always Italian.**

Exercise 4: All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; I, Lotteria. (Christine checked it :)) Exercise 3: Korea is a "green" country where they recycle everyday; Ireland and Scotland, much greener. (Christine checked it :))

What have we done so far? Read Chapter 1. If you haven't read it yet, please do so. Exercises with Pattern 1. - From Chapter 1, we learned about the sentence structure. There were four different kinds of sentences: Declarative, Interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory. There are three kinds phrases: prepositional, participial, and infinitive. For the independent and dependent clause, there are different types of sentences that are simple, compound, complex, or compound complex. Also, the sentences can be divided into different parts such as subject or verbs.

November 11

1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom language the bud action the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson -Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store Yunji lackadaisically. -Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. -Voltaire wrote Candide in order to support the Enlightenment; others, opposed. - The army marched gallantly; Candide, weakly.

November 16th

1. Read pages 15 and 16, then close the book. Explain to a partner the rule. Partner, listen first (when they are completely finished), correct or add to what the person said. Be prepared to present to the class (it would be the person who didn't share the first time).

Pattern 3: this is a compound sentence; there are two independent clause. the first one gives the idea and the second independent clause gives an example. It uses the colon to distinguish the two sentences.

Checkpoints on page 17: For pattern 1, contains two related statements that have the same idea: it cannot be done in two different sentences. For pattern 2, it needs to have a word that describes the first sentence: the second sentence does not include the word or else "no ellipsis is possible." For pattern 3, the second independent clause has to be related to the first: a colon is not used unless the second statement is related to the first.
 * Monday, Nov. 23**

Exercises 1 & 2: 1. The whole class put a lot of effort into their essays: the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: the work week is going to be on November 23rd.

November 24th, 2009-Journal

Candide: Key Question-James The world cannot be the "best of possible worlds": the issues with war and money makes it impossible. There are "rays of hope" that were mentioned in Candide; Cunegonde, for Candides love; and Sheep, for Candide's wealth.

Monday, Nov. 30 //Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. - no pattern (simple sentence) 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. - 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, in Normandy; I will take you there, and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) - pattern 1b 4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because I am imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." -

December 2nd, 2009: The Art of Styling Sentences
 * 1) 1 An essay traditionally has three parts: introduction, body, conclusion.
 * 2) 2 French-fries, pork, chocolate are my favorite foods.

December 9th, 2009 Creating 26 sentences by the "alphabetical order"

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A dog was searching for a bone. Bones were a treat to the dog and so, Bob, the owner tried to help him. Cruelly, the dog had bit him. Digging for the bone took a long time for the dog. Eating the bone was a lot of fun for the dog. Flourished with happiness, the dog runs up to the owner again. Guessing that the dog had eaten the bone, the owner tries to pay back the injury that he had got from the dog. He tried to figure out a plan to pay him back. In the dog's bowl, there was no food for him to survive for the last five hours. Jabbing the dog did not help him to lose Bob's temper. Kicking the dog did not help Bob to lose his temper. Laughing at the dog also did not help him to lose his temper. Mimi, the dog, wondered why Bob was so mad. __Not knowing the situation, Mimi started to run around, played fetch, teared clothes.__ On the couch, Mimi went to sleep after the whole "chaos". Peaking through the door, Bob decided to begin his planning for revenging on Mimi. Questioning himself whether or not this would work for the dog to obey him, he began his plan. Running to the yard, Bob took out the bones that he had buried for Mimi before. __Silently, worked.__ Taking all the bones out of the ground was a had process. Unaware of Mimi, Bob kept on working. "Victory!" Bob claimed himself after finishing the process. Without getting the attention of the owner, Mimi ran to Bob. Xeriscaped regions were always easy for Mimi to run; in which made her faster to reach Bob. Yearning to bite Bob, he bit when he got close to Bob. Zealous Mimi was excited that he was able to gain the final victory for the "game"!======

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January 6, 2010, WED. 1. Sentence Review -- ON your DOL page, write a short paragraph about snow, your vacation, your new haircut. . . Use four of the sentence structures we've covered in The Art of Styling sentences. Identify the pattern numbers.======

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(Pattern 1A) On the first day of the winter break, I pierced my ears; however, it hurt a little. (Pattern 4) I did community service on one of the days during break, Christmas, 27th. (Pattern 2) The other kids played different instruments; my brother, clarinet; I, cello. (Pattern 3) By doing community service, I learned an important lesson: sharing on Christmas day can be an awesome way to spend the holidays. (No Pattern) Overall, my winter break was very enjoyable!======

Jane's: I got a haircut about 5cm; went to hakwons; went to skiing.(Pattern 4) My haircut was very simple : Not very showing which no one notices.(Pattern 3) My mom, told me to cut more about 10cm below my ears, My brother, said it's same. (Pattern 1)

I got a haircut about 5cm; it was pretty much a simple haircut. My mom tried to force me to cut more, Even my brother said that he couldn't notice the difference. I wondered if my friends would even notice the haircut. But Besides the whole "haircut event", I went to hakwons, ski, shopping. Overall, I had a nice break with my family. I hope that I could have another enjoyable break next time!

January 13th, 2010

the pipe bursted during the morning during the afternoon dad founded a plumber to repair them -The pipe burst in the morning; during the afternoon Dad found a plumber to repair it.  ryan don’t want nothing returned but time and sports illustrated the 2 magazines that he give to them students -Ryan doesn’t want anything returned but Time and Sports illustrated, the two magazines were gave to the students. 