R&J+character+essay+rough+draft-JennyK

In conclusion, __Romeo__ is **responsible** for both of __Juliet__ and __his__ deaths because __he__ was //irresponsible// and //quick-tempered//. If __Romeo__ __had__ a right choice and **acted** with __his__ best thought, __Juliet__ and __Romeo__ could __have__ __had__ a happy ending instead of __having__ a //**depressed**// ending with both of their deaths. If __he__ did not //**assassinate**// Tybalt, __Romeo__ would have not **gotten** a punishment, which said that __Romeo__ was //**excluded**// from __his__ own village, from the Prince. If __Romeo__ **made** a choice of **staying** at Mantua, instead of **going** straight to Verona, __he__ could __have__ **gotten** a letter or a message from Friar Lawrence. Finally, if __Romeo__ did not **bring** any poison or did not **think** of **dying** for __Juliet__ at the end, __he__ could __have__ **seen** __Juliet__ **waking up** or __he__ could __have__ **seen** Friar Lawrence there. This is the reasons why __Romeo__ is **responsible** for both of __Juliet__ and __his__ deaths.
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__*underlined words__- repeated words //*italicized words//- cool words //***bold and italicized words**//- cool words that are verbs -fixed paragraph ** In conclusion, Romeo is responsible for both of Juliet and his deaths because he was irresponsible and quick-tempered. If Romeo made a right choice and acted upon his best thought he could come up with, he and Juliet could have had a happy ending, instead of having a depressed ending with both of their deaths. If he did not assassinate Tybalt, he would have not get punished for it, which made Romeo get excluded from his own village, from the Prince. If Romeo made a choice of staying at Mantua, instead of going straight to Verona, he could have received a letter or a message from Friar Lawrence. Finally, if he did not bring any posion or did not think of giving up his life because of Juliet at the end, he could have seen her waking up from her deep sleep or Friar Lawrence coming in to look for both him and her. This is the reasons why Romeo is responsible for both his and her deaths.
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