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Sentences exercise

01-14-10 1. Brendan doesn't want anything returned, but __Time__ and __Sports Illustrated__, the two magazines that he gave to the students. 2. The pipe burst during the morning; during the afternoon, Dad found a plumber to repair them.

01-08-10 revising Joe's writing It was cold: there was a lots of snow. I had a lots of fun. However, I was sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. Going to PC bang, sledding, and talking were the most of the activities that I did during the winter break.

12-09-09 A-Z Story. “Wow, I don’t know how that nail got stuck in my leg, now that I see my...” said Annie. “X-ray,” continued the doctor. “Yes, thank you, Doctor Kim,” she appreciated the doctor and shouted, “Zero percent of the population would have a nail stuck in their leg!” “Ah, You’re wrong about that. Because some people have something stuck into there leg, arm, etc.,” said the doctor. “Can’t you get them out?” asked Annie. “Duh, but sometimes, it’s impossible,” answered the doctor. “Eh? Fine then! Get the nail out of my leg!” shouted Annie. “How about calming down and be joyful? It’s not like the nail will disappear just because you’re upset,” asked the doctor. “Joyful? Kim, you are insane! Let me act and do what I want to act and do. My, oh my, just fix my leg!!” yelled Annie. “Not if you wouldn’t calm down,” said the doctor. “Ok, fine. Please get the nail out of my leg, Doctor Kim. Quit talking and let’s get the surgery go on,” begged Annie. “Rest for a minute. Sign this perfect, nice, beautiful contract which requires you to do ALL of this followings:

10-15-09 In act five of //Romeo and Juliet//, one of Shakespeare's famous plays, Romeo heard about the death of Juliet. Romeo expected a letter from Friar Lawrence about Juliet's death, but because the letter didn't get to Romeo, he believed that Juliet died. Romeo then hurried up to Verona and he met Paris there. He and Paris had a fight and Paris was killed by Romeo's sword. Romeo laid Paris beside Juliet because it was his wish and he drank the poison to follow Juliet. Juliet woke up right after Romeo's death and found out that Romeo killed himself with the poison. With Romeo's sword, Juliet killed herself, too, to follow Romeo.

10-13-09 DOL 1. **Comma with an introductory adverbial clause**- always use comma after during..., after..., etc (adverbial clause) - During the summer vacation, I visited my grandparents. 2. **Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book**- always italicize a long piece of art, etc. - We are reading //Romeo and Juliet// in our English class. 3. **Single vs. double negative**- use single negative because double negative doesn't make any sense and it is bad - No one in my family ever went to that museum. 4. **When to capitalize grandma or mom**- capitalize because it is used instead of the name (don't capitalize if it is "my mother") - I asked Mother where my shoes were. 5. **all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot**- use correct version: all right, regardless, and a lot - Is it all right to eat this? 6. **commas with an appositive with the proper noun first**-comma is placed after the proper noun, then appositive is placed - Mrs. Porter, my English teacher in KIS, is the best teacher. :) 7.**commas with an appositive with the proper noun second**- commas is placed after the appositive - Our book for English class, //Romeo and Juliet//, has a theme of love, but also has some fight scenes. 8. **Enunciation -- should have rather than should of**- should have is the correct English - You should have finished your homework by now.

10-08-09 1. "Sgt. Spiker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?" 2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading //Romeo and Juliet.//

10-06-09 1. "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine //Outdoor Life// about camping in the Catskills Mountains?" 2. No one in my family went to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting //The Blue Guitarist//.

09-18-09 1. We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party. 2. The portrait //Mona Lisa//, painted around 1503, is considered the best painting of the many that da Vinci completed.

09-16-09 1. Their dog has bitten several mail carriers; his owner would do well to keep him chained, don't you think? 2. The boat //Roman III,// by the way, sank two years ago; wasn't it located over there?

10/10

09-11-09 I just met a beautiful woman in the whole world. I saw her at the mask party tonight and I think I'm in love with her. After the dance, I went up to her and I kissed her. I don't think she doesn't like it. She went away for her mothers call and I asked the nurse who she was, and she was the daughter of the Capulet! Oh, I love the foe of my family, but I cannot stop my love. My heart desires for Juliet. **NICE USE OF THE LANGUAGE OF THE PLAY. CLEAR SUMMARY. TWO PLACES WHERE YOU ARE MISSING COMMAS. COPY THIS AND THEN CORRECT. I'LL CHECK NEXT TIME.** I just met a beautiful woman in the whole world. I saw her at the mask party tonight, and I think I'm in love with her. After the dance, I went up to her and I kissed her. I don't think she doesn't like it. She went away for her mother's call, and I asked the nurse who she was, and she was the daughter of the Capulet! Oh, I love the foe of my family, but I cannot stop my love. My heart desires for Juliet.

09-09-09 sonnet: a type of poem with rhymes arranged according to a certain definite schemes (Shakespeare used ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14lines, and 10syllables).

sonnet in scene 5: pg.57 (lines 104-117)

09-07-09 journal book: //Blind Willow, Sleeping Woman// The book is very interesting. I thought it was going to be so boring to read this book but it isn't. The book is very random. It suddenly goes to the past of the memory of the main character and comes back to the real life suddenly. This book is like a drama because for every chapter, the story changes like there is many different and new episodes for the drama. I think this book is a good work but it is very sudden and random. However, I really like the book overall and I want to keep reading this book. **YES THE RANDOMNESS TAKES SOME GETTING USED TO, BUT IT ALSO KEEPS THE READER INTERESTED.**

09-02-09 1. "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?" 2. Because the students sold many pizzas, the trip didn't cost them too much.

08-27-09 1. My choler mood came to augment because my brother kept bothering me when I was working on my homework that is due tomorrow. **YOUR PLACEMENT OF THE WORDS DON'T QUITE MAKE SENSE. CHECK OUT OTHERS TO GET A SENSE. NOTICE THAT YOU HAVE CHOLER IN THE ADJECTIVE POSITION (THE WORD IS A NOUN). IF YOU KEEP IT IN THE ADJECTIVE POSITION, CHANGE THE WORD TO CHOLERIC.** The choleric mood made my stress to augment.

08-26-09 1. Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

-coordinating conjunctions.

08-24-09 1. "The play //Romeo and Juliet// was written by Shakespeare," Jin Hee stated, "and is considered one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler, "must I wait another six months?"

08-20-09 1. Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse; when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks too soon.