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Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title In Act 5 of Romeo and Juliet, Romeo hears the deadly news of Juliet's death, runs to find out for his own eyes. He says that he cannot live without Juliet and brings a deadly potion with him.

Day 22: DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause -Rule: when you have an introductory adverbial clause first, use a commma.When in the middle or end, do not need comma.

2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book - Rule: We should underline tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book - Example: I read __Siddhartha__

3. Single vs. double negative - Rule: We should not use double negatives - Example: Dont use no double negative

4. When to capitalize grandma or mom - Rule: Should capitalize grandma or mom when just used with no other person - Example:

5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot - Rule: the right side words should not be used. - Example: I will do it all right.

6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first - Rule: There should be a comma after a proper noun - Example : __Siddhartha, is a great book__

7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second

8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of

Day 17 1. Sgt spriker is it alright to assume that most of the twenty seventh division personnel are from busan

Sgt Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?

2. after you have drawn a map showing the route form coleridge ave to Highway 52 you may continue reading romeo and juliet. After you drew a map showing the route from Caleridge Ave. to highway 52, you may continue reading __Romeo and Juliet__.

Day 16 1. has mother spoke to she and kevin concerning an article in the magazine outdoor life about camping in the catskills mountains

Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine __Outdoor Life__ about camping in the Catskill mountains?

2. noone in my family has never went to the art museum in chicago and saw picassos painting the blue guitarist.

No one in my family has ever seen Picasso's painting __The Blue Guitarist__, at the art museum in Chicago.

Day 15 1. we went to brendans house which is located on forty sixth avenue for the october party.

We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth avenue for the October party. 2. the portrait mona lisa the portrait was painted around 1503 is considered the better painting of many that da Vinci completed. The portrait "Mona Lisa" painted around 1503, is considered the best of the many paintings that Da Vinci completed.

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence)

That dog there has bit several mailmen; his owner would do well to keep him chained, don't you think?

2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't

The boat __Roman III__ by the way, it sunk two years ago, wasn't it located over there?


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 * Journal Writing -- Write a diary entry from the perspective of Romeo, Juliet, or Tybalt about the evening. Take on their personality.**

**Juliet I have met a beautiful person, the love of my dreams today in the party. He had somehow found a way into my heart. And learned how to seduce me and kiss me. Not just once, but twice.** But it is devastating.. My love! is the only son of my only enemy. What shall I do?!
 * FUN INCLUSION OF THE WORDS FROM THE PLAY. LIKE HOW THIS IS ALMOST ITS OWN POEM.**

Day 11 (Sonnet define and example in scene five) Sonnet son net noun a poem of fourteen lines using any of a number of formal rhyme schemes, in English typically having ten syllables per line

Not a Sonnet A: O, she doth teach the torches to burn bright! B: It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night A: As a rich jewel in an Ethiop's ear B: Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear. A: So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows B: As yonder lay o'er her fellows shows.

Proper Sonnet A: If I profane with my unworthiest hand B: This holy shrine, the gentle sin is this: A: My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand B: To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss

Day 10 (Journal Entry) My Book : How the Garcia Girls Lost Their Accents.

This book has many fun episodes. Each episode has a different family members point of view. The very interesting thing about this book is that time goes backwards. It goes from 1989-1956. The family members are Carlos-the father- Laura- the mother- in the order of age the daughters; Carla, Sandra. Yolanda, and Sofia. The author says the rd daughter, Yolanda expresses and partly shows how she has grown up. **I'M GLAD YOU ARE DOING OKAY WITH THE TIME SEQUENCING.**

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. "Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in you're paragraph, Richard?"

"Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph Richard?"

2. The Students sold many pizzas, the trip don't cost them too much. Because the students sold many pizzas, the trip didn't cost them as much.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. Sarah's choler mood made my temper to augment. **IT WOULD SOUND BETTER TO SAY IT "AUGMENTED YOUR TEMPER." HOWEVER, THE SENTENCE WORKS.**

My choler mood augmented when Ducky shouted at me **GOOD.**

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house

Because you're late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun sun's house.

2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents

My sister does not always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Coordinating

Day 5: August 24 1. The play romeo and juliet was written by shakespeare jin hee stated and is considered one of the poets best

"The play 'Romeo and Juliet,' was written by Shakespeare," Jin hee stated, "It is considered one of the best poets."

2. when will you learn me to drive austin asked in exasperated choler must i wait another six months

"When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in an exasperated choler, "must I wait another six months?"