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Day 4: August 21 1. terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left in disgust Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse, but when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets unfortunately, we got off the bus two blocks too soon.

Day 5: August 24 1. The play romeo and juliet was written by shakespeare jin hee stated and is considered one of the poets best "The play __Romeo and Juliet__ was written by Shakespeare." Jinhee stated, "It is considered on of the poet's best."

2. when will you learn me to drive austin asked in exasperated choler must i wait another six months "When will teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperted choler, "Must I wait another six months?"

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house Because you are late finishing of the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house. 2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents My sister, she doesn't always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. Sarah's choler mood made my temper to augment My choler actions made other augment people to laugh really loud at me. **BECAUSE CHOLER IS A NOUN AND YOU HAVE IT IN THE ADJECTIVE POSITION, THE WORD WOULD BECOME CHOLERIC. THE SENTENCE COULD BE WRITTEN AS -- MY CHOLERIC ACTIONS AUGMENTED PEOPLE'S LAUGHTER. CREATE ANOTHER SENTENCE AFTER READING SOME OF YOUR CLASSMATES.** I don't like people who likes choleric actions, their characteristics are just strange.

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. "Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in you're paragraph, Richard?" "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?" 2. The Students sold many pizzas, the trip don't cost them too much. = Because the students sold many pizzas, the trip don't cost them as much.

Book Reflection Dear Me

I am starting the book called LIFE OF PI. I am reading the first part which talks about the author himself and the things about zoology and thesis of it. He says he like sloths, I didn’t understand why he likes that slowpoke. It is slow, dumb, and lazy. I think animals like narwhale or flying squirrel is much cool. He says that sloths are peaceful and relaxed, it sometimes fall off from the branches but it still survives because of the color of their fur which is brown in dry season and green in wet season. I think this book is going to be interesting because I actually have many interests in animals. I like the cover too, it is cool that a tiger is on the top of the ice burg with a person in the middle of the Sea. **NICE REFLECTION. SHOWS YOU ARE BEGINNING TO INTERACT WITH THE BOOK.**

Day 11 (Sonnet define and example in scene five) Sonnet
 * one of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe. It has a strict rhyme scheme and specific structure. Also it is clearly shown in Shakespeare poem.(ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14 line, 10 syllables in each line)

In page (pg.53 and 57) A: If a profane with my unworthiest hand B: This holy shrine, the gentle sin is this : A: My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand B: To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss
 * Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much,
 * Which mannerly devotion shows in this;
 * For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
 * And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss ....

1. Journal Writing -- Write a diary entry from the perspective of Romeo, Juliet, or Tybalt about the evening. Take on their personality.**
 * Day 12: Sept 11

1. Perspective of Tybalt Romeo is too passionate and have such a good manner. He is very handsome but also have some bad sides, he says he will never love anyone and there will be no one who is prettier than his first love, Rosaline. But he actually falls in love with Juliet and changes his mind so easily. Also Juliet, is too blind about what it is going on between the Capulets and Montague. She should have known that he was a capulet and she must have left the place before Romeo sees her but she actually danced with her soldier around him and attracted him purposely I think. **GOOD POINT ABOUT THE BLINDNESS. YOU HAVE THE SOUND OF TAKING ON THE OLDER BROTHER ROLE, SO FRUSTRATED WITH THE YOUNGER SIBLING. LOOK AT YOUR PARAGRAPH. YOU ARE MISSING YOUR COMMAS WITH COMPOUND SENTENCES AND CONJUNCTIONS. COPY THIS, THEN CORRECT YOUR MISTAKES IN ANOTHER COLOR. THEN I WILL CHECK AGAIN NEXT TIME. IF YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT I MEAN, PLEASE, PLEASE ASK.

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1. Perspective of Tybalt Romeo is too passionate and has a good manner. He is very handsome but also have some weak points, he says he will never love anyone and there will be no one who is prettier than his first love, Rosaline. But he actually falls in love with Juliet and changes his mind so easily. Also, Juliet is too blind about what it is going on between the Capulets and Montagues. She should have known that he was a Capulet. She should have left the place before Romeo found her but she actually danced with her soldier around him and attracted him purposely, which is I think.

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence) "Their dog had bitten several mail carriers. So don't you think its owners should keep him chained to do good?" 2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there "By the way, wasn't the boat Roman III which sank two years ago located there?"

Day 15(No Ms Porter day- Hongkong) 1) we went to brendans house which is located on forty sixth avenue for the october party. We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party. 2)the portrait mona lisa the portrait was painted around 1503 is considered the better painting of many that da Vinci ompleted. The portrait //"Mona Lisa"// painted, around 1503, is considered the best of the many that da Vinci completed.

Day 18 1) has mother spoke to she and kevin concerning an article in the magazine outdoor life about camping in the catskills mountains Has Mother spoken to Kevin and Her concerning an article in the magazine //Outdoor Life// about camping in the //Catskills Mountains'?// 2)noone in my family has never went to the art museum in chicago and saw picassos painting the blue guitarist No one in my family has never went to the art museum and seen Picasso's painting //The Blue Guitarist// in Chicago.

Day 19 1)Sgt spriker is it alright to assume that most of the twenty seventh division personnel are form busan "Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personal are from Busan?" 2)after you have drew a map showing the route from coleridge are to highway 52 you may continue reading romeo and juliet "After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading //**Romeo and Juliet**//." Day 22: DOL REVIEW DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause When having introductory adverbial clause sentence there must be a comma which follows it. ex)When I was young, I used to live there. 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book When you are mentioning the things which are listed up, you must italicize or underline the title of these. ex)I read the book called //Romeo and Juliet.// 3. Single vs. double negative Single negative means that the term of the sentence is negative but double means that it is positive by saying negative term twice and canceling the negative term and creating a positive term. ex) single: I am not sleepy. We shouldn't use double negative: no example haha 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom when you capitalize your mom as Mom it has symbolizing effect saying my Mom and not a just mom. ex) "Mom, I am hungry" 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot all right is correct, not regardless should be used, a lot is correct ex) This is not regardless. A lot of people came to my house. It will be all right. 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first You must put the comma after the proper noun.

7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title

After reading the whole story I felt somewhat achieved. When I was reading the end of the //Romeo and Juliet,// it made me sad by the tragic story. Juliet drank a sleep potion and no one would know if she died or not. However, Romeo still heard the news that Juliet was dead, seemingly, he went back to Verona jumping up and down with fear and astonishment. I thought //Romeo and Juliet// was romantic and peaceful; I read the other version of the //Romeo and Juliet//. I was surprised that they both die in a depressed mood. It was pleasant to finish the story but it made me a little saddened with the tragic event that those two die.

Pattern 1 Group 1 The girsl looks happy. She has a new car. Her brother has one too. The girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has one too.

Day1 The tiger seems restless, but he is really big; he should have more room.<<what was in DOL(just to learn)
 * Art of Sentence:**

3. England and Wales are very icy; Ireland and Scotland, much greener.<<what was in DOL(just to learn) Eygypt and Africa is very plain; Ireland and Scotland, much greener<<Mine 4. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; teenagers, Lotteria.<<what was in DOL(just to learn) All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; adults, subways.<<Mine

Day2 1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. Mademoiselle Cunegonde had interest in science; Candide, metaphysics. Tavern men helped Candide out of deceit; Jacques, out of compassion.

Day3 **Monday, Nov. 23** 1. Read Checkpoints on page 17, then paraphrase. a. Remember, a paraphrase is NOT copying, but putting in your own words. How to do this? Read it, put it aside so you don't see the original, write, then double check to make sure you didn't plagiarize or mess up the meaning. b. Try to use one of the patterns in your paraphrase. 2. Exercises 1 and 2 on page 17 1) If you read all the three basic constructions, you should know how to compare and find differences between them. 1,2, and 3 are not only the ways to punctuate the sentence. Words must perform different functions and sentences do same things. 1 should make two of statements about the same topic which you don't want to punctuate as separate sentences. 2 must have words or a word which is implied at first but not implied after.It is detailed and not general. 3 must have another independent clause which explains the topic stated before. This pattern should not be used unless the statement is related to the first one.
 * 1 . The math homework was very easy: the students all got A's on their papers.
 * 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they were tired of going to work everyday including Sundays.

2) 1. English teacher was very generous: the students all got A's on their paper. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they are going to work also including the weekends since they lacked of money.

Monday, Nov. 30 //Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. "Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner;2 than throw you in the dungeon." 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners' hereabouts, but leave it to me. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe in Normandy; I will take you there and; if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) 4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some fool ish talk which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ."

Wednesday Dec 2 pg 23/ 1,2 1) An essay traditionally has major three parts: introduction, body, conclusion. 2)Sushi, kimchi chigae, and fried chicken are my favorite foods.

Dec 4 Friday The sentences if they are shortened are much more simple and clear for people to read and understand. If it is complex and long they won't probably get what the author is trying to say. As simple as possible sometimes makes a good sentence than any others.

December 9th Wed 3.Cheered, excited, and exhausted, the winner left the stadium feeling great

2010/1/6 1. Sentence Review -- ON your DOL page, write a short paragraph about snow, your vacation, your new haircut. . . Use four of the sentence structures we've covered in The Art of Styling sentences. Identify the pattern numbers. What I did for vacation I had spent, I had vacation.(1) I had spent my vacation in my home and academies. If there was one thing that I did for good was going ski and snowboarding. To talk about that special day that I could play, I learned snowboarding for the first time. I know how to ski and ski well but I was interested in snowboarding. I just thought I should learn it whenever I can because there will be a lot of time for me to ski and snowboard. Also snowboarding looked cool to me. However, learning at the very first time for me was really exhausting and tired. Now I can board in enough slope but I can't go further as where I ski on. Also in academies and home I studied. Most of the times when I get back home I went to exercise, play with friends, and spend my leisure time. It was good for academic and also relaxing part so I feel good about this vacation.

[|2010/1/8] 1/6/10- JOE's It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did.

2010/1/14 Brendan don't want nothing returned but time and sports illustrated the I magazines that he give to them students. Brendan didn't want anything returned except time and sports illustrated, the I magazines that he gave to his students.

The pipe burst during the morning during the afternoon dad founded a plumber to repair them. The pipe burst during the morning; during the afternoon Dad found a plumber to repair them.