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1/14/10

1. Brendan wants nothing returned, but //Time// and //Sports Illustrated//, the two magazines he gave to students.

2. The pipe burst during the morning; during the afternoon, Dad found a plumber to repair them.

1/8/10 It was freezing, I couldn't feel my fingers, and earlier my pet bunny, Jay Ahn, stuffed snow down my pants. I ran through the city streets, where obnoxious taxi drivers ran red lights. I ran, through a crowed, an endless number of people. I didn't know how much longer I can take it, I longed for warmth so bad I got colder each second thinking about it. People walked passed me with steaming hot coffee, making me want to take it and poor it on my face. Finally, I made it to my apartment door. I opened the door, but it wouldn't budge. I tried harder, and harder, and started kicking it, still... nothing. I then saw a sign saying pull and I opened the door and felt the heat of the over head heater pouring down onto me.

It was cold; there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did. Although, I didn't go anywhere for vacation, I traveled to my dreams. Lots of stuff happened, Kyu wouldn't shut up because whenever I see him he just talks about how annoying and stupid he is.

1/6/10 It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did.

sentence 1: Pattern 3 sentence 2: Pattern 1 Group 1 sentence 3: Pattern 2 sentence 4: Pattern 4

12/4/09 Kyu and I decided that it's not good because it links information poorly.

Robert Mondavi's father, Cesare, came from Sassafarento near Ancona, on the Adriatic coast of the Marches. It's not a particularly rich or fertile part of Italy even now; except for Verdicchio, it is much of a wine-growing region and a good deal less so, in 1883, when Cesare was born the son of a large, simple family and possibly the first member of it, was able to sign his name. 12/2/09 1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion.

2. Pizza, mango's, ham are my favorite foods.

Monday, Nov. 30 //Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. Three simple sentences 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. Compound sentence 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there; and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) Pattern 1 4. The abbe now spoke up: "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." Compound sentence

11/23/09 Paraphrase: pattern 1: Statements should be closely related. pattern2: Must have specific words in the first clause. pattern3: The second clause must explain or go into detail about the first clause.

1. The biology test was easy: the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they need a break every now and then.

11/16/09 1. Read pages 15 and 16, then close the book. Explain to a partner the rule. Partner, listen first (when they are completely finished), correct or add to what the person said. Be prepared to present to the class (it would be the person who didn't share the first time).

1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom language; the bud action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly; and sprightly, to the store Yunji lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. He is funny; the other guy, annoying. He was loud, him, quiet.

Pattern 1C Group 2 The tiger seems restless;he is really big, he should have more room.

Pattern 2 Egypt and Iraq is very plain; Ireland and Scotland, much greener. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; teenagers, Burger King.

11/5/09 Pattern 1 - Group 1 The girl looks happy. She has a new car. Her brother has one too. The girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has on too.

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October 15 Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title

Last night I finished reading __Romeo and Juliet__, the play. S"dead", she is buried in the family tomb, Romeo comes, and thinking she is dead kills himself, and then Juliet wakes up finding Radly, Romeo and Juliet both die. Many things happen to Romeo and Juliet during the the part I read last night; Juliet is found omeo dead, so she stabs herself with her dagger.

October 13 DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause - Something that describes a verb, how, when, where - Until morning, I will sleep.

2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book - Big productions need to be recognized that they are big so we underline or italicize them - __Family Guy__ is a very funny tv show.

3. Single vs. double negative - Don't use two negatives - Don't not go to the concert.

4. When to capitalize grandma or mom - If you call your relatives by these names and use them as names they need capitals - Grandma said we can go.

5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot - some of them have different meanings - The science test wasn't alright (ok), but the math test was all right (correct).

6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first - When talking about a noun first, you have to put commas before it - "Billy, what is our homework tonight?" said Bob.

7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second

8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of

October 8 1. "Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh Division personnel are from Busan?"

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading __Romeo and Juliet.__

October 6 1. "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine __Outdoor Life About Camping in the Catskill Mountains?__"

2. No one in my family has ever went to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting __The Blue Guitarist.__

September 18 1. We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party. 2. The portrait __Mona Lisa__ was painted around 1503. It is considered one of the best paintings that da Vinci completed.

September 16 1. That dog has bit several mail carriers, his owner should keep him chained, don't you think. 2. __The Boat Roman III__ by the Way Sunk, two years ago wasn't it located over there?

September 11 Romeo: 'Tis night be so beautiful. As our lips prayed together, you are the love of my life,although I am a Montague and you Capulet, my love for you is too great. **A NICE START. GOOD HOW YOU USE THE LANGUAGE OF THE PLAY. NEED TO WORK TO EXPAND.**

September 9 A Shakespearean Sonnet folows the rhyme scheme of A B A B C D C D E F E F G G. It has 14 lines with 10 syllables in each line. An example is on page 57

September 7 I think this book is good. It is very interesting learning about Korean history/culture. I look forward to finishing this book. **AGAIN, EXPAND.**

September 2 1. "Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in you're paragraph, Richard?" 2. The Students sold many pizzas, and the trip don't cost them too much.

August 23 My temper was augmenting to choler. I don't know... **THIS WORKS.**

August 26 1. Because you're late finishing the job, you'll have to give the boys the video games to take to Hyun Suns house.

2. My sister doesn't always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send us presents.

August 24 1. "The play __Romeo and Juliet__ was written by Shakespeare." Jin Hee stated, "It is considered one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months?"

August 21 1. Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse, but when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus on Twenty-second and Hamilton Street, but we got off the bus two blocks too soon.