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1/28/2010 I like oranges and peaches and kiwis and mangoes; I basically like every fruit.

I play sports all four seasons, soccer in spring, baseball in summer, football in the fall, hockey in winter.

1/14/10 Brendan doesn't want anything returned but Time and Sports Illustrated，the two magazines that he gave to his students.

The pipe burst during the morning; during the afternoon, Dad found a plumber to repair it.

1/6/10 It was really cold: there was a lot of snow. moreover, I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. NOT Living in the PC bong, sledding,and talking are activities that I did. I had a lot of fun. I'm going to punch Kyu to relieve my stress. Kyu: Ouch! What was that for?

January 6, 2010, WED. 1. Sentence Review -- ON your DOL page, write a short paragraph about snow, your vacation, your new haircut. . . Use four of the sentence structures we've covered in The Art of Styling sentences. Identify the pattern numbers. I leave; I cry (#1). As I stepped into the Taiwanese airport,I recall my memories in Taiwan. There were many things I've done: I've went to the Frolic, the movies, many people's houses,the night market, and so on (#3,4). Memories, or tears, or delight, I do not know what came first (#4a). It was a good trip that made my break a memorable one.

Friday, December 4th 1.I do not think it is good because in the process of linking ideas, it seems to have some useless junk in it.

Robert Mondavi's father, Cesare, came from Sassafarento near Ancoa, on the Adriatic coast of the Marches. Not a particularily rich or fertile part of Italy even now, not, except for Verdicchio, much of a wine-growing region, and a good deal less so. IIn 1883, when Cesare was born, the son of a large simple family and possibly the first member of it, to be able ti sign his name. Cyril Ray, "Robert Mondavi of Napa Valley".

2. It seems natural with all the commas and semicolons. Wednesday December 2nd

1. intro, body, conclusion 2. Pizza, hamburger, bacon

1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there; and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) 4. The abbe now spoke up; "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ." Commas help to relate two totally related idea whereas semicolon links two sort of related ideas to convey a bigger one. Paraphrase: pattern 1: The idea of two similar sentences should be put together. pattern2: Make the first clause choppy and interesting. pattern3: The Second clause should be much more specific than the first one.

1. The test was so easy

2: now they work on the snd and 4th week of every month. (to have weekdays changed) 1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. 1. The book is awesome; my reading skills, not. 2. Candide was kicked out of the castle; then, the town.

Pg 14 #3-4 3. Denmark is a beautiful place with much nature reserved; Ireland and Scotland, much greener. 4. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; not only for the meal, but for the toys they get; to hang out.

Pg 11 Group 2 The tiger should have more room; he looks restless, and he is really big. Pattern 1 Group 1 QP

Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title As I read the last act of //Romeo and Juliet//, there was a character that i liked a lot; though i liked all the characters, I liked the apothecary. Apothecary, a model of a poor person of that age, was an interesting character because the apothecary contains some very humane characteristics. First, his kind and caring side is stopping him to sell his deadly potion. He knows that someone will probably die if he sells the potion. Second is the fear. He is scared that he might get caught fro doing such an dangerous act. And finally, the last trait is the greed of human. Despite of the two characteristics mentioned above, the greed seems to dominate the person's mind. I think we can learn from the apothecary, that one careless act done by greed can result in such a tragic event.

Day 22: DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause Though I am a man, I cry when I see heart touching movies. 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book Did you read the book //Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone//? 3. Don't use double negative. Don't never play in the rain. 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom Mom, I got an hundred for the test! 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot It is all right to have a lot of close friends as long as you are academically steady. 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first Eiffel Tower, the building in Paris, is a model of modern architecture. 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of

Day 19: 1. Sgt. Spiker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-Seven division personnel are from Busan? 2. After you have drawn a map showing the rout from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading //Romeo and Juliet//.

Day 18: 1. "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning the article in the magazine __// Outdoor Life //__, which is about camping in the Catskills Mountains?" 2. Nobody in my family went to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting, __//The Blue Guitarist//__. Day 15

We went to Brendan's house on Fort- sixth Avenue for the October Party.

The portrait "Mona Lisa", painted around 1503, is considered the best painting that Da Vinci completed.

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. That dog there has bitten several mail carriers; his owner would do well to keep him chained, don't you think? (all one sentence)

2. The boat, __Roman III__, isn't located over there by the way sunk two years ago.


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Day 12 Tybalt's perspective: Ugh, that young brat! How dare he come to our family's party? My uncle too! How come he would not let me get him out of the party! Only if the party was at my house... I would have ripped that midget Montague apart! Hah! Verona brags about him, a Montague? Thus a shame to us Capulets, I should get rid of him the next time I see him ERR. **LOVE THE VOICE AND ARROGANCE IN THIS.**

Day 11 (Sonnet define and example in scene five) Sonnet
 * one of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe. It has a strict rhyme scheme and specific structure. Also it is clearly shown in Shakespeare poem.(ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14 line, 10 syllables in each line)

Pg. 57 Tybalt: Patience perforce with willful choler meeting ................................ Juliet: Then move not while my prayer's effect I take

Reflection Sheet of "The Single Shard"

When I first chose this book, people laughed at me for choosing such an easy book. Yes, easy it is, but it is still a very good book. I am almost at the end, and I feel that I learned many things from the book. I liked the main character, Tree Ear a lot, because he's courageous and warm hearted. I was so puzzled until now why it is called the single shard, but now that I read the part of the single shard, I understand the meaning of the importance of the single shard. It not only shoes Min's skills in making pottery, it also shows Tree Ear's courage. **YES, SO OF COURSE THERE IS THE LARGER METAPHORICAL MEANING WE SHOULD BE TAKING FROM THE ENTIRE BOOK.**

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?" 2. The Students sold many pizzas, the trip didn't cost them too much. = Because the students sold many pizzas, the trip didn't cost them as much.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. I had my choler goozed out when I was augmenting medicine on my wound. **AUMENTING the MEDICINE. THE WORD ISN'T QUITE THE SAME AS INCREASING.**

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My sister doesn't always have have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Day 5: 8/ 21/ 2009 1. Terry rung the bell at the gatehouse, but no one answered, so he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus in twenty seconds and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks sooner.

Day 4: 8/ 25/ 2009 1. "The play Romeo and Juliet was written by Shakespeare," Jin Hee state, "It is considered one of the poet's best." **YOU DIDN'T FULLY CORRECT THIS.**

2. "When will you teach me to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler, "Must i wait another six month?" **WHY THE MISTAKES?**