Narrative+Writing-Hyun+Sun+P.

Part II: Prewriting
List 5 events of significance in your life. -doing community service (in which caused me to have a thankful mind about my life) -going to Canada by myself to visit and meet my friends -getting a surgery in Japan -when my brother told me that there was no santa clause and made me depressed -when I heard my old dog had died 3 years ago and my mom never told me about it

List 5 moments that last no more than 5 minutes where you had an aha or you didn't realize at the time the significance. -scuba-diving in Guam -the day when I saw my "ahjuma" and never knew that it was going to be the last time that I would see her -the first time I participated in a competition as a cellist -when I had to choose a choice between two dogs as my pet -choosing between two instruments: cello or flute

Choose two of those events and free write for 4-6 minutes about each of them. Choose one of the events and add setting and dialogue.

Choose an event (either the ones you brainstormed with or another one) and answer the following questions:

What is the thesis? -The new challenge has given me an important lesson about nature: how I should be thankful of the beautiful surroundings!

What is the significance (one sentence)? -The significance of this event is the realization of the importance of air; and a glimpse of the beautiful "under-world"

What is the setting? -the car (only a little time), getting ready for scuba-diving, underneath the ocean, back on land

Write one sentence or phrase for each of the senses (taste, touch, smell. . .) -(I'll just write these sentences while I'm writing the essay...)

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