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REFLECTION

We all did a good job acting as our characters. However we could have interpret it in our own way that nobody could have thought of and show the scene to the audience with better understanding of the scene. We could have added more action of each character to show the audience what's going in this scene. However, we did a great job saying the lines with enthusiasm. Also we could have prepared more with the furniture and decoration for the room that we were in for the play. Overall, our play was a success! If a member of our group didn't have so much lines in the play, they did the storyboard and character customs drawings to make all the work equal. Everyone contributed very well. Each member of our group did great job preparing for their own character and also did some work for the group! I did not have much lines in the play. However, I added actions of the Nurse to give the audience better understanding of Nurse's character and what she does in her daily life. Also I prepared most of the customs and also worked on custom drawing and decided what each character's custom was. We could improve on adding more actions for each character's while performing. Also it will have been really good if we memorized our lines! When we played our scenes and practice for the play, I learned what Nurse does in her daily life and how she acts in front of Capulet's family. Also I learned how Lord Capulet is a demanding father. He is very strong with his plans and opinions.
 * 1. Evaluate the performance of your group. What went well? What didn’t go well?**
 * 2. How well did you contribute to your group?**
 * 3. How well did you perform as an individual?**
 * 4. What could have improved your scene performance?**
 * 5.How did the scene performance help you better understand the play.**

Score Key: 5 = Outstanding **4.5 = Strong**  4 = Good 3.5 = Average 3 = More work needed 2 = Very weak 1 = Not acceptable

Sentence Patterns

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following:

In Act 5 of //Romeo and Juliet// by William Shakespeare, after Romeo figured out that Juliet died, Romeo plans to go back to Verona to her family tomb to see her dead body.In this act it shows the sudden twist of the storyline. It was the ending that I could have never predicted to happen; Juliet was not dead but Romeo thought she was so he kills himself with a poison that he bought from the poor seller. As a result, Juliet saw Romeo's dead body and killed herself with the dagger that she had. Therefore the dagger that she prepared earlier in case of danger, foreshadowed what was going to happen at the end.

DOL Review -- 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause RULE: Put a comma after the adverb clause. EXAMPLE: After Jane called Jenny, Jenny turned around. 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book RULE: Title (TV shows, books, plays, movie) have to be italicized or underlined. EXAMPLE: As a class, we read //Romeo and Juliet//. 3. Single vs. double negative RULE: Don't use double negative. Use single negative. EXAMPLE: Double -> Don't never copy from other's work. Single -> Don't copy from other's work. 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom RULE: Capitalize grandma or mom when the term is used as a name. EXAMPLE: "Joe! Uncle gave this to me, for my birthday present." 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot RULE: Use "all right" when you're asking for permission, "alright" is more like saying "okay?" EXAMPLE: "It's all right if I go to play with my friends, right?" " I am going to go play, alright?" 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first RULE: Put a comma after the proper noun, and appositive. EXAMPLE: Romeo, a boy who's in love, is going to get married. 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second RULE: Put a comma after the appositive but not necessary after the proper noun. EXAMPLE: A boy in love, Romeo is going to get married. 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of RULE: You use "should have" when you are "regretting" or wishing for another outcome. EXAMPLE: I should have never dated him, he dumped me.

Day 15 1.We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party.

2.The portrait "Mona Lisa" painted around 1503, is considered as the best painting out of many paintings that Da Vinci completed.

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence) That dog there has bit several mail carriers, so don't you think his owner would do good to keep him chained?

2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there //The Boat Roman lll//, by the way sunk 2 years ago, it wasn't located there. By the way, The Boat Roman lll which sank 2 years ago located over there?

MISSING YOUR AUGMENT SENTENCE. OTHERWISE, NICE JOB. 9/10

I have met a beautiful woman tonight. I have never felt love before. She is so beautiful with bright and vivid lights around her. I'm very glad and delighted that I met her. Her name is Juliet, small and young but mature and full of beauty. I was impudent to kiss her beautiful lips with my unworthiest lips. However she accepted my kiss. I'm so glad tonight to have her in my life from now on. I want to meet her tomorrow and forever.** **LIKE THE WORD VIVID. AND GOOD USE OF THE LANGUAGE FROM THE PLAY.**
 * Romeo

Day 11 (Sonnet define and example in scene five) Sonnet
 * one of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe. It has a strict rhyme scheme and specific structure. Also it is clearly shown in Shakespeare poem.(ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14 line, 10 syllables in each line)

In page (pg.53 and 57) A: Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand B: Which mannerly devotion shows in this A: For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch B: And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss

DAY 10 REFLECTION ABOUT LITERATURE BOOK THE PRINCE BY NICCOLO MACHIAVELLI

This book contains lot of information about history all over the world. It has help me to get more knowledge about dictators and why they did certain actions. However because it is just a guideline, it's bit dull and lacking interest and its vocabularies are hard to understand. However I know that when I am learning World History, it will help me a lot while learning. So far, it gave me understanding of why certain dictators back then did what they did. **GOOD POINT ABOUT THE WORLD HISTORY. AND YES, SOME OF IT IS VERY DULL AND THEN YOU TURN A PAGE AND FIND SOMETHING VERY INTERESTING AGAIN. :0**



Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?" 2. Because the students sold many pizzas, the trip don't cost them as much.

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house

Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyunsun's house.

2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents

My sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays but she does send presents.

Coordinatinggggggggggggggggggggg

Day 5: August 24 1. The play romeo and juliet was written by shakespeare jin hee stated and is considered one of the poets best

"The play, //Romeo and Juliet// was written by Shakespeare," Jinhee stated, " and is considered one of the poet's best."

2. when will you learn me to drive austin asked in exasperated choler must i wait another six months

"When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler, "must I wait another six months?"

Day 4: August 21 1. terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left in disgust

Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse, when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon

My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off the bus two blocks too soon.