Narrative+Essay-jhy

List 5 events of significance in your life. -Development and changes in my life: Experience of being leader -transition in life: 5th to 6th -swimming pool accident -my first time going to summer camp -my first time in 6th grade sleeping at 1 o clock

Choose one of the event and write about it. The biggest transition in my life was experiencing being a leader. I remember the day when the elections were going on. I can never forget the moment that became the starting of my turning point of my life. I was able to feel the atmosphere filled with all the candidate’s nervousness and overwhelmed by this new experience. I looked around, scanning through candidate’s facial expression. Not a single student relaxed themselves; all tensed up, reviewing their speech. What is the thesis? The biggest transition in my life was experiencing being a leader.

What is the significance (one sentence)? The significance is the moment I experienced being a leader and experiencing an unique experience that not everyone could have.

What is the setting? The setting is at school.

Write one sentence or phrase for each of the senses (taste, touch, smell. . .)

Taste: Life is bitter and sometime sweet. touch: I felt touched when I was elected for student council. smell: The smell of victory made me feel fresh. sight: I scanned the audience's facial expression. hear: They were whispering about the candidates.

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