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1/14/2010

Brendan didn't want anything returned but his Times and Sports illustrated magazines that he gave to his students. ,

The pipe bursted during the morning; during the afternoon Dad found a plumber to repair it.

1/6/10 It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did.

sentence 1: Pattern 3 sentence 2: Pattern 1 Group 1 sentence 3: Pattern 2 sentence 4: Pattern 4

It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. However, I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. Going to PC room, sledding, talking are the activities I performed.

PC room - it is a noun so it is not an action

Jan. 06 2010

My mom went to work; my dad also went out to work; and I am at home doing nothing. Relax, breathe, eat - these are the only actions I am taking. My homework is done, nothing to do now. I am sleepy; boredom is making me fall asleep.

Friday Dexcember 4th

Sentences for Analysis 1. Robert Mondavi's father, Cesare, came from Sassafarento near Ancona on teh Adriatic coast of the Marches. In 1883, when Cesare was born, the son of a large, simple family and possibly the first member of it, to be able to sign his name."- Cyril Ray, "Robert Mondavi of the Napa Valley"

Wednesday, December 2nd

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: Introduction, body,conclusion 2. Steak, Rice, Chicken.

Monday, Nov. 30 //Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it o me. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe in Normandy; I will take you there, and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) 4. The abbe now spoke up: "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some fookish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ."

1. Read Checkpoints on page 17, then paraphrase. a. Remember, a paraphrase is NOT copying, but putting in your own words. How to do this? Read it, put it aside so you don't see the original, write, then double check to make sure you didn't plagiarize or mess up the meaning. b. Try to use one of the patterns in your paraphrase. Pattern 1 - the statements have to be related to each other Pattern 2 - Second clause should have a word or a phrase from the first that is implied but not stated in second Pattern 3 - Second independent clause should describe the idea shown in the first independent clause.
 * Monday, Nov. 23**

Paraphrase: pattern 1: The two ideas in one sentence should be connected. pattern2: The first clause should be uncomplicated and straightforward. pattern3: The second clause should illustrate things that were not shown in the first clause

2. Exercises 1 and 2 on page 17
 * 1 . The teacher gave us the wrong test: the students all got A's on their papers.
 * 2. The work week has been changed by the car companies: they were tired of going to work everyday including Sundays.

11/11

The tiger seems restless. He is really big. He should have more room.

THe tiger seems restless; he is really big, and should have more room.

Exercise 3 - I am green ; Ireland and Scotland, much greener Exercise 4 - All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; Me, to Subway

Pattern 1 The girl looks happy. She has a new car. HEr brother has one too. THe girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has one too.

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause

b. semi-colon

c. appositive

d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title

While reading Act4 of __Romeo and Juliet,__ it felt like it was a concluding scene of the whole play. Romeo's bride Juliet; fakes her death and her funeral is going on. In act 5, juliet is in the coffin, waiting for Romeo.When Romeo came for a rescue he encounters Paris and has a fight. Eventually killing Paris

DOL- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book 3. Single vs. double negative - 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of DOL REVIEW 1. Until morning, I will starve I will starve until morning 2. Italicize tv series, tv episode,movie, short story, play, book Jay stayed up all night watching //The Office// 3.Cannot use double negative I got no money. vs I ain't got no money. 4. Specific family members are capitlaizes Yesterday,Mom forgot to pick me up at school. 5. I ate a lot yesterday. 6. 7. 8.You should have studied for the English exam.

DOL -" Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?"

After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52 you may continue reading __Romeo and Juliet__

DOL - " Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine __Outdoor Life__ about camping in the Catskills mountains?"

- No one in my family has ever gone to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting __The Blue Guitarist.__

DOL -- on board. (5 minutes, but usually takes longer) we went to brendans house which is located of forty sixth avenue for the october party

We went to Brendan's house, which is located on Forty- Sixth Avenue for the October party.

the portrait mona lisa the portrait that was painted around 1503 is considered the better painting of many that da vinci completed.

The portrait Mona Lisa, that was painted around 1503, is considered the better painting of the many that Da Vinci completed.

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. That dog there, has bitten several Mail Carriers, his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence) Their dog has bitten several mail carriers; Don't you think his owners would do well to keep him chained 2. By the way,wasn't the boat __Roman III ,__ that sunk two years ago, located over there?


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Day 12

Oh it was my honor to see that beautiful girl of Capulet. I cannot forget her now. Rosaline has now disappeared from my head & heart. Now I will live for this girl. It was just gracious to kiss a girl like Juilet. According to the old nurse I was speaking to Juliet was a Capulet ( Even though I mentioned in the first sentence I will just repeat), who are the enemies of my family, Montague. What a miserable irony **LOVE THE LAST LINE.**

Day 11 (Sonnet define and example in scene five) Sonnet
 * one of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe. It has a strict rhyme scheme and specific structure. Also it is clearly shown in Shakespeare poem.(ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14 line, 10 syllables in each line)

Sonnets can be found in pg 53, 57 of Romeo and Juliet

In page (pg.53 and 57) A If a profane with my unworthiest hand B This holy shrine, the gentle sin is this : A My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand B To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much, Which mannerly devotion shows in this; For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss ....

Day 10 The factor that I like the most about this book is that it is clear and easy to understand. Unlike other novels that try to confuse the readers by difficult and different usage of words.

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph Richard?" 2. The Students sold many pizzas, the trip don't cost them too much. The students sold manny pizzas, so the trip didn't cost much Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. I augmented my salary by obeying all the commands from our choler boss **NOTICE THAT YOU USE THE WORD CHOLER (WHICH IS A NOUN) IN THE ADJECTIVE POSITION. IN YOUR SENTENCE IT SHOULD BE CHOLERIC. OTHERWISE, GOOD SENTENCE.**

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My Sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents. **DON'T CAPITALIZE SISTER WHEN IT HAS A PRONOUN OR AN ARTICLE IN FRONT OF IT.**

Day 5: August 24

1. "The play //Romeo and Juliet// was written by Shakespeare" JinHee stated, "is considered one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "must I wait another six months?"