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story! Sentences 1. I got a haircut about 5cm; went to hakwons; went to skiing.(Pattern 4) My haircut was very simple : Not very showing which no one notices.(Pattern 3) My mom, told me to cut more about 10cm below my ears, My brother, said it's same. (Pattern 1)
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Writing Story!

1. Xinar lived on the tree since he was a baby 2 Years went by and both the tree and Xinar got old 3 Zealous man came one day and saw the beautiful tree 4 Another man who is the servant of the zealous man brought the saw to knock down the tree and sell it. 5 Birds living on the tree was scared whenever they saw this mischievous man. 6 Crowds who lived next to the tree and spend times singing, dancing and resting under was mad. 7. "Do you know how precious this tree for ours?" said one kid to the zealous man. 8. Eagering complains and their passions to protect the tree was increasing every day. 9 "Fine, I will not sell it." said the zealous man. 10 Girls shouted,danced and did the cart wheels surrounding the tree. 11 Houses hold the party that night, inviting every towns folks, including the zealous man. 12 " I was stupid," 13 "Just being with the precious things is much more worthwhile than killing them for the money and own benefits." said the zealous man. 14 Kind town people smiled back at him and offered him to stay in their town for few days and play with the beautiful tree. 15 Life was peaceful in the town for a while, after the destructing the tree was stopped. M Money was getting short, unfortunately. N No one in the town could have all 3 meals and buy new things. O One day zealous man heard the baby crying to his mother saying, "Mom, I am hungry. We ate same water soup for one week! I am hungry." P Personally, he thought over his properties and moneys that he brought when he arrived at the town. Q Queen of the England's gold that he received was in his pocket. R Running to the house of Xinar, where he stayed, he looked at his baggages. S Slowly, he pull out the money and gold. T Times went by and he was thinking over what he should do. U Unfortunate and desperate sounds of the nice townsfolk was again heard by him. V Vicious man who was the boss of the zealous man called him on the phone saying him to come back. W Without hesitation, he turned the phone off, threw it into the river, ran away to the poor town people. There, he shared all the wealth he has and lived happily after with them for his whole life.

Wednesday, Dec. 1 1. An essay traditionally has three major parts :Introduction, two body paragraphs, conclusion. 2. Meat, Pasta, bread are my favorite foods.

Monday, Nov. 30

1. "Three diamonds ; Each worth three thousand pistoles!" "Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon." (Simple sentence) 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. ( no pattern - simple sentence) 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy ; I will take you there and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (pattern 1 compound sentence) 4. The abbe now spoke up "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide - not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ."

I agree with James' definition of the best of all possible world and the rays of hope. I think it is true that best world can't be where people are all fighting and living for the wealth. Even though it seemed like this book showed the dark side of the world, it has a rays of hope. For example, I agree with James that the example of hope is when Candide met his love, Cunegonde again. Also I think he can add that he got helped from the old woman who made Candide and Cungonde to meet each other.

1. Read Checkpoints on page 17, then paraphrase. Pattern 1,2, and 3 all perform the different functions. Firstly, pattern 1 must make two similar sentences that relate to each other. Secondly, pattern 2 must have a specific words from the first clause. Thirdly, pattern 3 must have a second independent clause that explains the first clause. Also the colon needs to be place after the first clause. (The second and first clause have to relate.) But it is important to not use this pattern with a colon if the second clause is not related to the first.

Exercises 1. Students didn't put all their efforts in it : the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot- com companies have changed the work week : now they have to come during the Christmas week.

Nov. 16, 1. Read pages 15 and 16, then close the book. Explain to a partner the rule. Partner, listen first (when they are completely finished), correct or add to what the person said. Be prepared to present to the class (it would be the person who didn't share the first time). first stance- vague ( expand) after the column - more specific

a. Thought is the blossom lange the bud action the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, is the fruit.

b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store Yunji lackadaisically. Sam walks quickly,sprightly;Yunji, lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. Baron was a wealthy man with fancy castles;Candide was not. Baron told him to banish from the town; Candide's mind, to stay with his love, Conegande.

Combine group two on page 11 using Pattern 1b. Put in your DOL wiki page. Read page 12 and 13. Do exercises 4 and 3. Then confirm with a neighbor that it looks correct. Put your neighbor's name as a checker at the bottom

pg. 11: Group Two The tiger is big, and restless; he should have more room.

pg.12 and 13, exercises 4 and 3 Korea is inscribed with seas; Ireland and Scotland, much greener. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; Jane for the dinner. Minji Kim

Day 26 Pattern 1, pg 11 Group one The girl looks happy because she has a new car; her brother has one too.

Day 23 Compare movie with Book I thought that the book had more details than movie due to the time limits. While watching the movie, I noticed that the movie didn't include the scene where Paris and Romeo fighting and led Paris die. Also in the movie, there was no part when Romeo received a poisonous potion from the man. On the other hand, I think that the movie had more emotion than the book because it showed the audience Romeo and Juliet's love more deeply.

Day 21 Writing a paragraph using the grammar Romeo, a desparate man who was eagered to meet his love, cried out when he heard the news that Juliet was dead. As fast as he could, he ran down to Juliet's tomb. Paris, a man who was in Juliet's tomb first, wanted to fight with Romeo. Regardless of Romeo's refusal, they had a fight and Paris was dead. The vial, posionus which can make people die, was given to Romeo. When Romeo saw Juliet at her tomb, he thought that no woman can not be so beautiful as Juliet. After Romeo dranked the vial and died, Friar Lawrence came to tell Romeo about the truth.

Day 20 DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause Spending the whole night doing homework, Michelle fell asleep in English class. 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book __Romeo and Juliet__ is the book that we are going to read. 3. Single vs. double negative Single negative : She was not a good student. Double negative : She was not the member of any clubs. 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom The Grandma went to shopping. 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot Thank you! I am all right. Take care of your brother, alright?

Regardless of her grade, Jane went out to play with Michelle oh. She has a lot of desks in her room. My mom alloted me the time to finish my homework.

6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first Ernest Hemingway, the most renowned author, wrote many stories.

7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second The famous book, The Old Man and the Sea, was written by Ernest Hemingway. 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of She should have studied for the test.

Day 19 1. "Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume me that most of the Twenty - seventh division personnel are from Busan?" 2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave to Highway 52, you may continue reading __Romeo and Juliet.__

Day 18 1. "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine __Outdoor Life__ about camping in the Catskills Mountains?" 2. No one in my family has never went to the art museum in Chicago and saw Picasso's painting, __The Blue Guitarist__.

Day 15 - on the board 1. We went to Brendan's house, on Forty - Sixth Avenue for the October Party. 2. The Portrait " //Mona Lisa"//, painted around 1503, is considered the best of the many that da Vinci completed.

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. Don't you think that his owners would do good to keep him chained because their dog has bit several Mail Carriers?

2. The boat, Roman III, by the way, sunk two years ago and wasn't located in other places.

Day 13 : In Board. Turned in.

Day 12 **Journal Writing -- Write a diary entry from the perspective of Romeo, Juliet, or Tybalt about the evening. Take on their personality. I got invited to the capulet's birthday. My nurse and my mom made me to look pretty and pursuaded me to accept Paris' love. Also, the nurse said that I should get married if I find someone who I truly love and told me lots of stories. At the party, we had a time to dance. I saw one young man who wanted to kiss me. I didn't know who he was but the nurse said that he was one of the Montague's son. **

Day 11 (Sonnet define and example in scene five) Sonnet
 * one of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe. It has a strict rhyme scheme and specific structure. Also it is clearly shown in Shakespeare poem.(ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14 line, 10 syllables in each line)

In page (pg.53 and 57) A If a profane with my unworthiest hand B This holy shrine, the gentle sin is this : A My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand B To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much, Which mannerly devotion shows in this; For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss ....

Day 10 (Journal Entry) My Book : Kaftka This book is so amazing and fun that I can't stop reading it. It starts with the one ordinary man getting captured by the two strange polices. It was so strange because those two men didn't even know what Katka had committed and said that the Kaftka can't get out of the house but he was allowed to work in his office.It made me scared because it showed that anyone can be captured in one morning without any reason. Also the law officials didn't told him the reason but said that "It is the Law". Kaftka, doesn't know what is going on, went to his office wondering what he had done. **I'M GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS.**

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. arent their alot of quoted passages in youre paragraph richard **CORRECTIONS?** 2the students had sold many pizzas the trip doesn't cost them too much

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. Sarah's choler mood made my temper to augment.

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. Because your late of finishing the job, you'll have to give our boys the video games to take to Hyun sun's house.

2. My Sister doesn't always has time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents.

Day 5: August 24 1. The play romeo and juliet was written by shakespeare jin hee stated and is considered one of the poets best

2. when will you learn me to drive austin asked in exasperated choler must i wait another six months

Day 4: August 21

1. terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left in disgust

2. i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon 6: August 25/26th 1. Because you're late of finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My Sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

August 24 1. "The play __Romeo and Julie__ t was written by Shakespeare," Jinhee stated, "and is considered one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months."

August 20

1. Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty - Second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off the bus two blocks too soon.