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CAN I SUGGEST A COUPLE OF IDEAS? What about one picture where the students are outside, next to rushing traffic, shivering, trying to finish a project. Maybe make the guards and cafeteria ladies and others huge overlarge monsters or dragons guarding the gates of the school like precious treasure. I worry about the last two (understatement) because they seem more to be satirizing projects rather than the policy.

Satirical Comic Project Proposal The after-school policy at our school Fred Harry and Bettie are not happy with the new after-school rules because with the new rules the students cannot stay after school to work on projects with group members/work on homework without teacher supervision. They are also not allowed to come back in after they had left the school, even if they had just left to grab a quick snack, just because a few students were careless last year and got hurt. - Announcement in the morning introduces the new after-school policy - Students get a project from a teacher to complete big project by tomorrow - Some students live in bundang and some in seoul, so they decide to work on it at school in stead of meeting at somebody’s house - They are kicked out of library after being loud because they were discussing their project - The cafeteria ladies kick them out of the cafeteria because they’re not allowed to be there. - They leave the school to grab a snack from the GS25 outside school - The guards do not let them come back into the school because they had left the school - The students not cannot ride the after-school bus home, and must find their own transportation - Students visit principal the day after to demand an explanation Fred, Harry, and Bettie are students doing the project together
 * 1) What do you plan to satirize (idea, organization, person, etc.)?
 * 1) What is the conflict in your story?
 * 1) Briefly outline the plot events (bullet points okay)…
 * 1) Who are the characters? (a limited number is a good idea)


 * 1) State how you will use the following devices (use at least five of the six listed):
 * 2) Allusion

The principal will exaggerate the accidents that happened last year, which is the reason they’re not allowed back at the school. Eg. Girl cracked her head open; boy broke several bones tripping down stairs The librarian says: “You guys are __clearly confused;__ I asked you three to be //quiet!// ” Harry says to the principal: “Oh, of course everyone who stays after school will break their head and die ” - The students are outside, next to rushing traffic, shivering, trying to finish a project. Maybe make the guards and cafeteria ladies and others huge overlarge monsters or dragons guarding the gates of the school like precious treasure. (Ms. Porter's idea) - The whole comic is making fun of the afterschool policy (which is ridiculous) "Students are only allowed to stay after school in the library because you might die. __This will not affect anything at all.__ thank you." It will affect a lot of things but the principal is saying that it's not going to.
 * 1) Hyperbole (exaggeration)
 * 1) Oxymoron
 * 1) Irony (sarcasm)
 * 1) Parody
 * 1) Understatement