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__**Writing Improvement Plan**__ Joshua Park 9F

My task: list what I need to improve one, and what will I do to make my writing better

What I can Improve on: - Read out my essay OUT LOUD to see minor grammatical mistakes. - Improve my sentence structure, so it’s much more fluent. - Replace the words that are too vague, and make the words to be exact. - Sometimes, it’s too casual, so it doesn’t sound serious. - Use variety of words - My conclusion has to feel like that the essay is going to end, and sums up ideas. - Proper use of punctuation

Next time I write an essay, I will do all of the followings in the list. Also, Asking someone else for help is a really good tool too. They can give you feed back on how it sounds like. My final draft will be FINAL, proof read by my peers, and edited carefully. Also, I could you a thesaurus to replace my words with a better one. Type in the content of your page here.