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Art of Styling Sentences P.43 #4,5
 * March 29, 2010 Monday**

4. Whether you think it's right or whether you think it's wrong, you have to make a choice 5. The basketball coach shouted that the referee was wrong, that the other team's coach was a fool, and that it is not fair.

If I disagree with my sister, if I complain, if I say anything, then we fight.

Art of Styling Sentences
 * March 10, 2010** **Wednesday**

Patterns 1-7:

1. Which would you say is better? Support your answer with specific instances from the text. I think the second one is better because it included more creative visual vocabularies that helped me to understand and visualize what the writer is saying. Therefore, it is more detailed and elaborated.

2. With the paragraph you decided wasn't as good as the other, then make at least two changes to that paragraph which would improve it.

Greening buds, patches of mud, scattered puddles, a birth of color -- spring was on its way. Noel always found this season to be the ripest: thoughts of change and potential circulated through her body.**(explain more about how her thoughts will be changed)** But what made this spring more anticipated than the last? **Perhaps it was the knowledge that she was going to be moving back home at the end of the school year. Or perhaps it was the warming air or extra chatter at home or one of a million other things.(use sentence pattern that will make it easier to the readers to understand, pattern 4a; first have simpler sentences and in the next sentences you can elaborate which will be easier to understand)** Whatever it was, she knew this spring was special; it really was going to be a season of change.

Greening buds, patches of mud, scattered puddles, a birth of color -- spring really was on its way. Noel always found this season to be the ripest: knowing of the changes that would soon be thrust upon her made her feel a certain tie to the blossoming fruit trees. She too would be plucked from her current home and shipped off to some far off place. Her endpoint: Lincoln, Nebraska. The plum's endpoint: who knew. It could have been Nebraska or Melbourne or Brittany or Johanesburg. But this was not the first time she had started over on some other side of the world, and it certainly wouldn't be the last. She had learned to look for the small beauties amidst these times of transition, and she knew these harbingers of spring would always find her no matter where she moved.

Art of Styling Sentences (p.39 #2-5)
 * March 8, 2010 Monday**

2. Two annoying and loud pets (my dog and cat) woke me up at midnight. 3. My favorite colors- black and white- always attract me to new clothes. 4. Learning the basic skills- running and flexibility- will help me succeed in any sports. 5. The shocking news (plant shutdown) shocked the whole community.

Art of Styling Sentences (p.33 #1,2)
 * March 3, 2010 Wednesday**

1. Hardware, software, a modern- these are parts of computers. 2. Poetry and music, painting and sculpture, drama and dance - these are art of literature, performance, and visual.

Art of Styling Sentences
 * Feb 19, 2010 Friday**

It is a natural human instinct: if you hear something about someone, you spread it. (Pattern 3)

DOL
 * Feb 10, 2010 Wednesday**

Twenty-two students should have done the following readings; //"My Last Duchess//" and the book //"Candide//". Also they should have written a ten- pages paper.

Art of Styling Sentences
 * Feb 9, 2010 Tuesday**

Patter 5: Rainboots and rain, Snowboots and snow; different shoes to wear for different weather.

Patter 4: Rainboots and snowboots and fashionable boots are different boots to wear for different occasions.

Pattern 3: Rainboots and snowboots; rainboots for rainy day and snowboots for snowy day.

Art of Styling Sentences page 27 #1,2
 * Jan. 28, 2010 Thursday**

1. My favorite fruits are orange and peaches and kiwis and mangoes. My favorite fruits are orange, peaches, kiwis, and mangoes.

2. Our school sports are soccer in spring and baseball in summer and hockey in winter and football in fall Our school sports are soccer in spring, baseball in summer, hockey in winter, and football in fall.