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5/17/10 Pattern sentences 1. Ivan has a family; however he can't interact with them. 2. For many of the workers, the new leader was good; for others, a pain. 3. Ivan works: he works hard. 4. Ivan works, sleeps, eats. 4a. Ivan works and sleeps and eats. 5. Everyday, Ivan has to work and sleep, eat and talk, help and give. 6. Ivan, Pavlo, Kuziomin - all work in the concentration camps. 7. Ivan learned what he had to do - work, sleep, eat - in the concentration camp. 7a. The sudden burst of light - the spotlight - startled Ivan. 8. Because Ivan is scared, because Ivan is forced, because Ivan is limited, he must work. 9. Ivan lives in the work camp - the concentration camp, the camps of Siberia. 9a. Ivan works in a horrible place, the horrible concentration camps. 10. Ivan has three family members: his wife, son, other son.

1. I really desired it: an "A" grade I really had worked for. 2. I always wanted to be this type of football player when I grow up: Hines Ward. 3. The class elected a malicious decision as treasurer: Jim Rutledge. 4. The Fields Medal award" the math field, the most coveted of all Mathematician distinctions.

Whether you think about playing games every day or whether you think playing sports with your friends, you have to make sure you study first.

The basketball coach shouted that the referee didn't call out a foul, that the other team's coach threw a rock at a player, and that the other team players were keep on fouling.

Even though I went to Spain for the whole spring break, even though I had no time to study for anything, I still have to take the Spanish test tomorrow.

Patterns 1-7:

Both paragraphs listed below incorporate the patterns studied thus far, however, one of them uses the structures more effectively.

1. Which would you say is better? Support your answer with specific instances from the text. The first paragraph is better than the second paragraph. This is due to the concise and simplicity of the paragraph organization. The second paragraph was too descriptive which made the reader a bit in chaos and harder to grasp the main information. "knowing of the changes that would soon be thrust upon her made her feel a certain tie to the blossoming fruit trees.: this is to chaotic for the reader to understand.

2. With the paragraph you decided wasn't as good as the other, then make at least two changes to that paragraph which would improve it.

Greening buds, patches of mud, scattered puddles, a birth of color -- spring really was on its way. Noel always found this season to be the ripest: knowing of the changes that would soon be thrust upon her made her feel the blossoming fruit trees. She too would be plucked from her current home and shipped off to some far off place. Her endpoint: Lincoln, Nebraska. The plum's endpoint: who knew. It could have been Nebraska or Melbourne or Brittany or Johanesburg. But this was not the first time she had started over on some other side of the world, and it certainly wouldn't be the last. She had learned to look for the small beauties amidst these times of transition, and she knew these harbingers of spring would always find her no matter where she moved.

Clifford and Garfield (my dog and cat) were fighting over my love. My favorite colors-- black, blue, and white, always attract me to new clothes. Learning the basic skills-- running, jumping, keeping pace, will help me succeed in any sport Samsung (the pant shutdown) shocked the whole community.

Hardware, software, a modern-- which is the most expensive part in the computer? Poetry and music, painting and sculpture, drama and dance-- are the 3 types of skills I want to attain. Football, swimming, studying-- are my favorite hobbies

Drew Brees, Reggie Bush, Michal Colston, Jonathan Vilma were the key play makers the Colts had to keep an eye on. Pattern 4

Twenty-two students should have done the following: reading "My Last Dutches", and the book __Candide,__ and they should have wrote a ten-page paper.

Pattern 1: I love to swim; especially in the KIS swimming pool. Pattern 2: I love swimming; Justin, playing soccer. Pattern 3: Swimming has four strokes: it includes back, free, fly and breast stroke. Pattern 4: Back, free, fly, breast stroke are the four strokes used in IM's. Pattern 5: Swimming and football, games and TV, books and studying are big parts of my lifes.

I would love to donate oranges, peaches, kiwis, mangoes for Haiti being in a devastated state.

The sports I enjoy in each seasons are: soccer in spring and baseball in summer and football in fall and hockey in winter.