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Essay Reflection Characterization Essay I agree with the fact that the essay should have been more focused on the nurse when it focused on both the nurse and the friar. This made the essay weaker in terms of following directions and such. Furthermore, if I had put more quotes in supporting my thesis all connected with a good flow, my essay would have been stronger. In conclusion, this time my main error was that I was off topic too much, talking about the Friar a little too much.

Narrative Essay My main mistake for this assignment was that it was turned in late. Other than that, I personally think I could have improved more on my grammar and sentence flow. If I had done that, the essay would have been more easier to read. Lastly, the use of hyperboles, similes and such would have strengtehd the description of my essays by a lot.