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// I would love to donate oranges, peaches, kiwis, mangoes for Haiti being in a devastated state.

The sports I enjoy in each seasons are: soccer in spring and baseball in summer and football in fall and hockey in winter.

Brendan wants everything to be returned, but __Time__ and __Sports Illustrated__ are the two magazines he gave to his students.

The pipe burst during the morning, so during the afternoon Dad found a plumber to get them repaired.

Joe: It was super cold; there was an immense amount of snow trying to swallow my house. I had a lot of fun. However, I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. Living in the PC bong, sledding down the hill, talking with my friends are the wondrous activities that I did during the break. I regret not studying for my hard, intriguing World History test that I have after my break.

sentence 1: Pattern 3 sentence 2: Pattern 1 Group 1 sentence 3: Pattern 2 sentence 4: Pattern 4 sentence 5: Pattern 2

The snow during the break was massive; preposterous; catastrophic; which made me stay at my house for a huge part of my time. Fortunately, the fun, time wasting Xbox 360 let me escape from my boredom. Yelling, my mom turned off the TV when I was reaching the 4th hour playing; on the same position. Getting closer to the termination of the break; I noticed that there was a World History test, OMG.

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion.
 * 2. Hamburgers, pizzas, raymen are my favorite foods.

Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.**// 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. compound sentence 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there; and if you have any diamonds for him; he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) Pattern 1 4. The abbe now spoke up: "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some fookish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ." compound sentence
 * 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. three simple sentences

1. Pattern 1: establish two statements that are associated with each other regarding the equal idea, some statements you should not punctuate into two unique sentences. Pattern 2: It needs to have a distinct word consisted i the first clause alluded, however having no existence in the second clause- thus no ellipse you be present. Pattern 3: requires a second independent clause that emphasizes or verifies the the idea mentioned in the first independent clause. Stay away from using this pattern with a colon unless the second statement is interconnected to the first. 2. Exercises 1 and 2 on page 17**


 * 1 . The math homework was very easy: the students all got A's on their papers.
 * 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they were tired of going to work everyday including Sundays.

1. Read pages 15 and 16, then close the book. Explain to a partner the rule. Partner, listen first (when they are completely finished), correct or add to what the person said. Be prepared to present to the class (it would be the person who didn't share the first time).

a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//.

- Candide is a boy; Cunegonde, a girl; Dr. Pangloss, a man. - She ran into Candide as she entered the castle, and blushed; Candide blushed in turn; she bade him good day in a faltering voice.

The Art of Sentences

The really big tiger seems restless, so he should have more room.

4. ;for the playground, for toys, for family relationships. checked by Sung-woo

3. We should make Norway; checked by Sung-woo

DOL __Romeo and Juliet__, an amazing novel I finished yesterday, had a very intriguing end. Moreover, this is because of the death, death and more death. Romeo had committed suicide because he thought Juliet was dead, and Juliet committed suicide because Romeo had died. This gave me a very weird feeling because; first, it had a devastating ending, second, the main characters had died. In usual novels, the main characters do not die and have a happily ever after ending. However, __Romeo and Juliet__ just messed up my mind by giving these unique endings.

DOL REVIEW. Forcefully, I pushed the door open. Yesterday, I enjoyed the TV show __24__. I don't like baseball. I don't have no money. I love my mom. I love Mom. Are you all right? formal I asked my friend, "Are you alright?" non-formal Regardless of the weather, I played football outside. formal Irregardless of the weather, I played football outside. informal I love you a lot. right I love you alot. wrong Brendan Ryu, a student, loves English class. 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second
 * 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause** write the adverb in the front and put a comma.
 * 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book** underline the name of shows movies, stories, and books.
 * 3. Single vs. double negative** two negative words cannot be in the same sentence or clause.
 * 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom** when mom is without "my" she should be capitalized.
 * 5. all right vs. alright** //**regardless vs. irregardless**// **alot vs. a lot** alright is an improper use of all right.
 * 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first** make sure to put commas around the parts that are regarding or explaining the proper noun.

8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of

1. "Sergeant Spriker, is it all right to assume the fact that most of the Twenty-Seventh Division personnel are from Busan?"

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading __Romeo and Juliet__.

1. "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning the article in the magazine __Outdoor Life__, which is about camping in the Catskills Mountains?"

2. Nobody in my family went to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting, __The Blue Guitarist__.

1. We went to Brendan's house on the Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party.

2. The portrait //Mona Lisa// was painted around 1503, and it is considered the best painting of the many that Da Vinci completed.

1. That dog there has bitten several mail carriers, so his owner would do good job to keep him chained, don't you think?

2. By the way, the boat __Roman III__ sunk two years ago and was not located.


 * 11/10**


 * Romeo**

Today was the day I met my true love Pretty as a deer and graceful as a dove. I thought Rosaline was was my true love But Juliet was one step above. I also had a chance to pray with her lips It was tastier than any kind of chips. I hope to have true love with her And buy her some good mink fur.


 * WOW. BRENDAN, I AM IMPRESSED. FUNNY ABOUT THE MINK FUR. PLUS ONE EXTRA POINT FOR EXTRA EFFORT AND FUN.**

(Sonnet define and example in scene five) Sonnet: a poem of 14 lines using any of the number or formal rhyme scheme, in English typically have 10 syllables per line. (ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14 line, 10 syllables in each line)

In page (57) If a profane with my unworthiest hand This holy shrine, the gentle sin is this: My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much, Which mannerly devotion shows in this; For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss ....

__The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao__

This book is simply amazing. The experiences Oscar has (well some of them) are very similar to mine, so it was very enjoyable to read and think about them. The book does have a lot of inappropriate words and actions, but it is very entertaining to read and get the flow of the story. The book is slightly similar to __The Death of Ivan Ilych__ but more interesting. I hope to enjoy more of the book and love it. **PLUS THE BOOK WOULDN'T BE THE SAME WITHOUT THE "INAPPROPRIATE WORDS." I HAVE A CHANCE TO SEE THE AUTHOR SPEAK IN NOVEMBER, AND I'M PSYCHED.**

1. "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph Richard?" said the teacher.

2. The students sold many pizzas, so the trip didn't cost much.

Brendan was full with choler when he had to augment the amount of chores. **YES**

1. Because you are late finishing the job; you will have to give us, the boys, the video games to take to Hyunsun's house.

2. My sister doesn't always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.


 * coordinating conjunctions

1. "The play __Romeo and Juliet__ was written by Shakespeare," Jinhee stated, "and it is considered one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated with choleric intensity, "must I wait another six months?"

1. Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse, and when no one answered; he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets, but we got off of the bus two blocks too soon.