Comment+for+Essays(Narrative,Characterization-+JJ)

Comment for the Narrative Essay/ Characterization Essay

Firstly I thought that narrative essay could have been better with word choices. I made the story and when I was keep editing it was getting better and keep on changing. For the Characterization essay I was sure that it was writing about my character... However, I assume that I misunderstood quiet a few things. Maybe I should be more focused and question people or you to know what exactly we are supposed to do. I learned that communication is important.