DOLQ1+Ian+C.

August 20th, 2009

1. Terry rung the bell at the gatehouse,but when no one answered, he left in disgust. 2. My sister and I caught the bus at twenty second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off the bus two blocks early.

Day 5: August 24 1. "The play 'Romeo and Juliet' was written by Shakespeare" Jin hee stated, "and considred one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months?"

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. James shouted choler when my augmented knowledge surpassed his capacity.

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in you're paragraph, Richard? 2. The students had sold many pizzas, so the trip doesn't cost them too much

Journal # 1

The Book, //The Demian// is about a child called Emil Sinclair getting enlightened and his extravagant life style. It is quiet boring, but since I chose this book, I have to finish it. This book is very interesting because this book was written by the same author of the book //The Siddhartha//. It is written by Herman Hesse. I really liked how it was different from The Siddhartha. **IT'S FUNNY. I WAS WATCHING YOU READ AND THOUGHT THAT YOU SEEMED TO BE ENJOYING YOUR BOOK. GOOD THAT IT IS DIFFERENT. TOO BAD YOU DON'T LIKE IT. YOU CAN STILL CHANGE. IT IS NOT TOO LATE. MISSPELLING -- QUITE.**

Journal # 2 A sonnet is a type of poem that Shakespeare and other playwrights liked to write. It consists of a rhyming pattern of ABAB CEDCDEFEFGG. Sonnets consists of 14 lines with 10 syllables in each line.

pg 53- Italian Sonnet

O, she doth teach the torches to burn bright! It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night As a rich jewel in an Ethiop's ears- Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear. So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows As yonder lady o'er her fellows shows. The measure done, I'll watch her place of stand. And, touching hers, make blesséd my rude hand. Did my heart love till now? Forswear it, sight, For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night.\

Journal #3

I am just furious about Capulet's decision and the Montague's intrusion in our marvelous party. I do not know why Lord Capulet didn't allow me to take care of that insane Montague family. How dare they come into our party! It is a disgrace to our family. What will happen if everyone in London gets to know about it; it will be humiliating. Everyone will fault me! In addition, how evil it was for lord Capulet to kick me out off his party. It was also embarrassing. I will sharpen my sword everynight until the day I will fight the Montagues. Wait on, Romeo, Montague, Mercutio, and Benvolio for your death. **NICE VOICE. THEY ARE NOT IN LONDON? WHERE ARE THEY?

10/10**

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. That dog has bitten several Mail Carriers and owners would chain him so that he will be good. (all one sentence)

2. The boat roman III sunk two years ago, but wasn't it located over there?


 * Day 15

1. We went to Brendan's house, on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party.

2. The portrait //Mona Lisa//, painted around 1503, is considered the best painting of many that da Vinci completed.

Day 16 **
 * 1. "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine __Outdoor Life__ about camping in the Catskills Mountains?"

2. No one in my family has ever went to the art museum in Chicago and saw Picasso's painting the __Blue Guitarist__. **

Day 17
 * 1. "Sgt. Spriker, is it alright to assume that most of the twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?"

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading //Romeo and Juliet.// **

DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause If you put an introductory adverbial clause before an independent clause, you need to put a comma after it. For example: Reading the book, I felt sympathy.

Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book When you are talking about any title of a TV series, TV episode, Movie, book, short story, play, etc, you are supposed to underline or italicize the title. For example: I am reading The Holes

Single vs. double negative Double negative is a wrong expression. Instead of using double negative, you may just say a positive expression. Single negative is a correct expression. For example: Double negative: I don’t not like ice cream. = I like ice cream. Single negative: I don’t like ice cream.

When to capitalize grandma or mom. If you are referring to a specific grandma or mom, you must capitalize their name. For example: My Mom likes me. Every moms like me.

all right vs. alright regardless vs. irregardless alot vs. a lot Regardless is a formal, correct expression, while irregardless is not. Alot is not a formal expression, while a lot is. All right is a correct expression, while alright is not. For example: Regardless of your talent, you must try your best. A lot of the students are handsome. It’s all right, no problem.

commas with an appositive with the proper noun first A comma need to be added when a proper noun is described with an additional information. For example: Soccer, a famous and fun sport, is played by a lot of people.

commas with an appositive with the proper noun second When the proper noun comes after, a comma is not added. For example: A famous and fun sport Soccer is played by a lot of people.

Enunciation -- should have rather than should of Should have is a better expression to use than rather. For example: I should have done better in the quiz.

Last night, when I was reading the Romeo and Juliet, I felt the most sympathy that I could have felt. As for this book is one of Shakespeare’s great tragedies, I was intrigued to read such book. First of all, Act V began with Romeo in the streets of Mantua. Again, the symbol of “dream” is recognized. Romeo dreamed about Juliet and how she saw him laying dead. I believe this is a sign of foreshadowing. Balthasar comes to visit Romeo in Mantua and tells him how everyone is fine. He tells him how Juliet is in heaven and rests peacefully. He tells Balthasar that he will go back to Verona that day and tells him to tell this news to the Montagues. Romeo goes to a drug seller and buys a poison to commit suicide in Juliet’s tomb. At the next scene, Friar John and Friar Lawrence talks about the letter to Romeo. Friar John says he was stuck in a quarantine and couldn’t sent his letter. Friar Lawrence is worried if Romeo didn’t know about Juliet’s fake death. Then, he sends another letter. At scene III, Paris enters Juliet’s tomb and griefs over her death. This shows Paris’ love. Romeo also enters the tomb and Paris recognizes him. Romeo tells Paris to leave, but he doesn’t. Therefore, they duel and Romeo kills Paris. After Romeo killed him, he drank the potion when he saw Juliet’s body. Juliet, then drinks the potion when she was his body. This book showed a lot of tragedy; however it did contain some humor.

Journal Entry October 19th, 2009

I felt that du ring the play, the characters added more lines so that the play was more humorous. However, they have made mistakes. For example, when the Capulet's and the Montague's were having a sword fight, the sword accidentally flew off to the audience. Luckily, it was a plastic sword. The play didn't actually show the theme of "fate" that well. The movie, on the other hand, showed the theme "fate" by kind of emphasizing it. The timing that Romeo died and Juliet waking up, etc showed the theme of "fate" well.

Pattern 1 page 11

group 1

The girl looks happy; she has a new car; her brother has one too.

November 10, 2009 pg. 11: Group Two The tiger is big, and restless; he should have more room. pg. 14: 3) South Korea is not green//;// Ireland and Scotland, much greener. 4) All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; the teenagers to dinner. Checked by: Ryan Tae and James Kang

November 12th, 2009

1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//.

Candide is well written; My story, poorly. I am good at soccer; peter, bad.

1. Read pages 15 and 16, then close the book. Explain to a partner the rule. Partner, listen first (when they are completely finished), correct or add to what the person said. Be prepared to present to the class (it would be the person who didn't share the first time).
 * Nov. 16,**

November 23rd, 2009

1. The class was very easy: the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they have to do double the amount. 3. I finally know how to program my VCR: I could watch batman now!!!! 4. The reporter asked her the most important question: How was this man killed? 5. In New York, we traveled to a lot of places: we toured the National Air and Space Museum, the Smithsonian Castle, the Freer Gallery, and the new wing of the National Galery of Art.

//Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. "Three diamonds, each worth three thousand pistoles," "Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon." -Simple sentence 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners, hereabouts, but leave it to me. Command form sentence. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe in Normandy; I will take you there and if you have any diamonds for him; he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) This will be the pattern with the three semicolons together. 4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some fookish talk which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." This is a compound sentence with the dash.
 * Thursday, Nov. 26**

December 2nd, 2009 1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: Introduction, Body paragraph, and conclusion. 2. Spaghetti, Kimchi, and raymeon are my favorite foods.

Story December 9th, 2009

A story is supposed to be very entertaining and fun! But my story that I will tell you will be a spooky and a scary one. Cats are one magnificent animal. Dogs are cat's enemies. Even if the cat is strong, the dogs usually eats the cats. Fortunately, cats also have an animal to eat, mouse. Generally, this will be true; however, not in my story. "Home, sweet, home." Intelligent cat shouted with happines. Jubilantly, the cat rested in the sofa, watching the TV. Kevin, the dog in the house asked, "What should I do for you, master?" Luckily, the cat was in a good mood; therefore, he didn't ask for anything. "Master, you are very happy, today." Kevin said. "Nasty little fool, I am watching the TV, please shut up!" Lifting the whip, the cat replied. "Oh, please don't whip me, I am sorry!" Posturing a sorry position, the dog begged. Questioning dogs were the extreme foe of the cat. Radically, the dog took motion. Swords and sling shots were items the dog took. Taking out his sword, he pointed the sword at the cat. Unfortunately, the cat attacked back with his karate moves. "Vendetta, is that what you are looking for?" Waving his hand at the dog (saying bye bye), the cat asked. "XXXXX (Swearing)" The dog replied. Yawning, the cat woke up from his dream. "Zang it! I thought this was a true story!!!!!!!!!!!"

. Sentence Review -- ON your DOL page, write a short paragraph about snow, your vacation, your new haircut. . . Use four of the sentence structures we've covered in The Art of Styling sentences. Identify the pattern numbers.

My winter vacation was full of fun: I went to Young Pyoung to snowboard with my friends. (Pattern 3). We either snowboared or went to PC Bang or chilled. (Pattern 4a) However, the snow in Young Pyoung was in poor condition as we went in the first part of december; the first part of december is not the season of snowboarding; therefore, the snowboarding was not as good as last year. (pattern 1C.) With the snow being in poor condition- we chilled in the condominium for a while. Staying in Young pyoung was fun and was a memorable memory to remember. I went with Joshua Park, John Jo, Michelle Oh, Minae Kwon, and Sumin Lee. I came back home at Wednesday!

January 8th, 2010 I got a 5cm haircut; went to hakwons; went skiing.(Pattern 4) My haircut was very simple : it was not showy and not a lot of people noticed.(Pattern 3) My mom, told me to cut 10cm more below my ears, My brother, said it's same. (Pattern 1) I hope that my haircut could attract some more boys like James Kang.