Characterization+Essay+MP

I really thank Ms. Porter for the awesome comments she posted on my Characterization Essay. I really worked hard on my voice (because I think that is one of my weaknesses in writing - I often go on tangents and not to the point) and I guess that hard work paid off! I think I should have spent some more time reading and editing my work, because now that I read it, I also find some errors in my writing. I definitely would have seen them if I had gone over the paper one last time before I handed in my essay. Now I know that I have to work on my time management and my organization skills!