DOLQ1+Nicole+K.

The pipe burst in the morning; during the he afternoon my dad found a plumber to repair it.

Ryan doesn't want anything returned but //Time// and //Sports Illustrated//, the two magazines that he gave to the students.

I got a new 5cm haircut.(Pattern 4) My haircut is very simple : Not very noticeable, so no one noticed.(Pattern 3) My mom told me to cut more, about 10cm below my ears, my brother, the same. (Pattern 1) Regardless of what they say about my haircut, I still love it.

1. Sentence Review -- ON your DOL page, write a short paragraph about snow, your vacation, your new haircut. . . Use four of the sentence structures we've covered in The Art of Styling sentences. Identify the pattern numbers.

1. I rushed to the airport; it was closed. 2. For me, the pouring snow was a beautiful scenery; for my parents, it was the cause of another disastrous traffic. 3. My Christmas eve was amazing:going to Hagwon. 4. I handled the hot chocolate with great care, patience, vigilance

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion

2. Tacos, kalbi, ice cream are my favorite foods.

1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts; leave it to me. 3." I have a brother in Dieppe in Normandy, I will take you there; if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me," (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) 4. The abbe now spoke up: "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some fookish talk which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ."

After learning all three of the compound constructions, look at their differences. There are more ways, not just patterns 1-3, to punctuate the same sentence. The words and the sentences must do different functions and things.

pattern 1=take a close look at the two statements that you don't want to make in to two seperate ones on the same idea.

Pattern 2= have words from the first cause used that are not in the second one.

Pattern 3- have second independent clause explaining the idea stated on the first independent clause. (not with a colon)

1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom language, as the bud action the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson

b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. Candide is written by a famed French philosopher, Voltaire; Tantide, by an unknown student, Nicole.

Ryan likes basketball; Nicole, singing;Minji, watching tv.

Example 1: Going to carnivals make me happy; Connor hates it. Example 2: Jim Carrey's movies are funny movies that are comfortable to watch with families;violent movies, uncomfortable.

Group Two: The tiger should have more room; he is restless, and big.

The girl looks happy; she has gotten a new car as well as her brother.

Both the movie and the play had different interpretations of Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. The settings were very different in both of them. First the movie was set in the time period

My thoughts about fate have not changed after watching the movie and the play. It is evident that Romeo and Juliet are connected by fate, not by other means such as coincidence. The last moments of Romeo and Juliet in the novel or the film was made possible by fate, not the timing or a coincidence. All the rest of the events in the novel were the fate of Romeo and Juliet and they built up to conclude their love with death.

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title

Last night, Romeo and Juliet has been a thrilling experience; Juliet's death was just the beginning. It was followed by the death of Romeo, her funeral filled with tears, and Paris who did not first realize the situation. Shakespeare gave a happy ending to this book, __Romeo and Juliet__. Friar Lawrence, the one who knew of love between Romeo and Juliet, comforted the family by saying that Juliet has gone to heaven.

1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause However, he did not like cucumbers. 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book //The O.C.// 3. Single vs. double negative He buys his clothing. He didn't not buy his clothing. 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom "Grandma, do you like apples?" 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot alright, regardless, a lot 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first

7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second

8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of She should have slapped him on his face. 1. "Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?"

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Celeridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading __Romeo and Julie__t.

Day 19 1. Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine, "Outdoor Life" about camping in the Catskills Mountains?

2. None of my family has been to the art museum in Chicago and seen Picasso's painting, //The Blue// //Guitarist.//

Day 18 1. We went to Brendan's house, on the Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party. 2. The portrait //Mona Lisa// is considered best of the many that da Vinci completed.

Day 17 1. That dog over there has bit several mail carriers his owners; Wouldn't they do good to keep him chained, don't you think? (all one sentence)

2. The boat, //Roman III,// by the way, sunk two years ago. Wasn't it located over there?


 * 10/10**

O I met my dear Romeo that night. Those eyes so lovely just made me fall for him. I had an amazing evening! I think I love Romeo, and I want to live with him forever. Eternal love! When he kissed me with those lips, I felt like I was melted by his love. I hope he loves me as well, since I love him more then anyone else. It was what I could describe as the "love at first sight"! O how I love you, Romeo. **YOU SOUND SO GUSHY, IT MAKES ME LAUGH A LITTLE. SHE DEFINITELY COULD BE GOING OVER THE TOP LIKE THIS THOUGH.**

What is a sonnet?

A sonnet is a poem with 14 lines with each line having 10 syllables. It is in a form of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.

example: P53 line 50

The Devil's Arithmetic by Jane Yolen has been an interesting and a thrilling book to read. The book first starts off in America where the main character writes about her thoughts in first person. She mainly thinks about her life as a Jewish-American girl who has to celebrate her family's religious celebrations. This has a lot of connection to many of our lives today. When her family sometimes have gatherings, she whines often about how tired she is about the celebrations. She has a flashback of her childhood, when she observes the numbers on her grandfather's wrist, which may represent the numbers engraved by the Nazis in the Jewish Concentrations. But she, not knowing what it is, wrote the same numbers on her wrist. The grandparents got furious at her after seeing the numbers, and this is where I left off. **SOUNDS INTRIGUING.**

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard? 2. The students sold many pizzas, so the trip don't cost them as much. Day 7 He was in choler when he augmented about the evil. **YOUR USE OF THE WORD AUGMENT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE HERE. LOOK AT OTHERS' SENTENCES AND THEN REWRITE THIS.**

1. Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-Second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks too soon.

Day 5: August 24 1. "The play __Romeo and Juliet__ was written by Shakespeare" Jin Hee stated, "and is considered one of the poet's best."

2. "When will you teach me to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months?"

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. Because you're late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My Sister doesn't always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.