Revision

Andrew Park by Justin Ko

1. Clearly write your first and last name at the top of your partner’s paper. 2. Circle the title of their paper. If there is no title, write “Title?” at the top of their paper. 3. Ideas and Content: -Is there a clear focus to the paper indicated in the opening paragraph? Yes -Underline the sentence in the opening paragraph that clearly states the focus of the paper. -Are the supporting paragraphs and details clear? Yes -Do any sections need clarification? the body paragraph could be more specific 4. Organization: -Does the paper have clear paragraphs? Yes - Read the first paragraph again. Does the lead make you interested in reading the paper? Make suggestions as necessary. - Read the last paragraph again: What type of ending does your partner appear to be using. Does the ending work? Make suggestions as necessary. 5. Word Choice: -Are there any words that need to be replaced (or added) for greater clarity in the paper? Write your suggestions on the paper. 6. Sentence Fluency: -Mark any sentences that are awkward (confusing or need to be reworded). 7. Conventions: -Use the editing marks to mark any convention errors (like spelling mistakes, etc.). 8. Citations: -Does the paper properly cite any information that is paraphrased or directly quoted? Mark anything that looks suspicious. Don’t let your partner be a plagiarist! 9. Works Cited page -Is there a works cited page? Are the citations in MLA format? Yes 10. Format -Does the paper follow MLA format? Yes 11. Comments -On the last page or on the back of the paper, explain the three strongest points and the three weakest points of the paper.