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Essay on characterization : reflection

After reading the comments and the in-text reactions, I've realized that I didn't take time on editing the essays. There were too many simple mistakes that I could have paid attention to. Also, I've noticed that there was no title! Having no title would've been better than putting the name of the assignment. Some of the word choices that I've used is very simple. Also, I should have used the help of the thesaurus. When I wrote this essay, I explained the plot of the story which Ms.Porter already knew. Next time, I should put more new ideas.

The Fall : reflection

Although I thought that this narrative essay was a fine piece of writing, I got too carried away with the descriptions. Unlike other essays, this one needed a bit more description than the other ones. Thus, I described the important scenes with care. However, I wasn't paying attention with the main topic: friendship. Next time, I will introduce my important topics a little more, so the readers will understand the flow of the writing.