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Ms. Porter, you have checked all my DOL's and the journal. Accidently, all my entries and DOL's are deleted. Thank you.

Pattern 1 Group 1 The girl looks happy;she has a new car, and her brother has one too.

Group 2 The tiger seems restless; he is really big and he should have more room. Countries in Europe such as England; Ireland and Scotland, are much greener. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; McDonald's is always full of children and there is a playground.(checked by Brendan Ryu)

a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji lackadaisically. 1. //Candide// is philosophical novel; //Harry Porter//, fantasy. 2. //Candide// creates satire; //Harry Porter,// fun.

Patterns 1, 2, 3 help joining two or more sentences by three different ways of punctuating. Pattern 1: Two short related sentences joined by either of semicolon, semicolon and a comma with a conjunction or two semicolons. Pattern 2: Using a same word in both first and second clauses but not mentioning in the second clause. Pattern 3: The second clause demonstrating an idea from the first clause allows to be joined with a colon.

1. The paper assigned was easy: the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: The workers hated to wake up on Monday and complained about that.

1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. Three simple sentences 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. Compound Sentence 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there; and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. Pattern 1 4. The abbe now spoke up: "It's because a imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." Compound Sentence

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion 2. Burger, ramen, taco are my favorite foods.

1. My partner Brendan and I agreed that the sentence on page 21 is bad. There are too much information, prepositional phrases and no transitions. To be more effective, this sentence need to be broken down into several sentences.

"Robert Mondavi's father, Cesare, came from Sassafarento; Sassafarento is located near Ancona, on the Adriatic coast of the Marches. It is not a particularly rich or fertile part of Italy even now, except for Verdicchio, Italy is much of a wine-growing region, and a good deal less so. In 1883, Cesare was born to the large family and was possibly the first member of the family to be able to sign his name" - Cyril Ray, "Robert Mondavi of the Napa Valley

A boy who loved basketball lived in Phoenix, named Peter. Basketball was his life and only thing that he loved. Crossing the street, eating, doing homework, he only thought about the basketball. Dunking and playing in NBA were his dreams. Everyone believed that it is impossible to achieve those dreams. From Phoenix, he watched games of the Suns everyday. Great games followed by the previous games. He hoped to play for the Suns and win the Championship. In contrast, his friends and parents urged him to study without practicing or playing basketball. Joking around with his friends, he told them about his dreams. "Koreans," his friend said, "can't play basketball in National Basketball Association, they can't jump high, shoot well, pass well, most importantly Koreans are short. "Let's See", Peter said. Moving to Cleveland was a great decision for Peter. Nothing changed from Phoenix but there are better high school teams. On the street, he practiced with his teammates and improved greatly. Phoenix was nothing compared to Cleveland. Quitting the dream of playing basketball was unimaginable, but his grades were problems. Report cards mattered a lot for his dream of becoming a NBA player. Strangely, he always got over the minimum GPA for athletics. Teammates helped him to pass the test, finish the homework and get a good grade. Usefully, he passed every subjects and was able to stay in the team. Vigorous person like Peter was the one that team was looking for. Wasting no time, Peter attended the practices. X-Ray test was taken for everyone in the team. "Yes", he said and he passed the health check and played for the team. Zero chance of losing a game when with Peter in the team, so the manager was happy.

Over the winter vacation, I went to Hakwons to study math, English, science(Pattern 4). Not only do I study, but also I played. I played basketball; I improved a lot with my shooting(Pattern 1). I went to Hakwons, but I played with many KIS students at Hakwon; I enjoyed the lunch with my friends(Pattern 1B). We played and learned and studied in Hakwon which was not an exciting experience(Pattern 4A). At the day of Christmas, my family and I went to shopping and play. We had wonderful dinner and enjoyed that day. However, the day before and after the Christmas, I spent more than six hours in Hakwon dreaming about playing. My mom, to make me enjoy the taste of break, gave me a week without Hakwon. I spent all the days playing and sleeping. The day I was supposed to get back to the school, there was huge snow. Thus, I had two extra days of break which I only played and enjoyed.

There was a lot of snow; it was the coldest day in this winter. I had a lot of fun playing with my friends. However my brother and I were sad; we didn't get as many Christmas presents as we wanted to. Playing in PC Bang, sledding, talking are activities that I did during the vacation. Over the break with my friends, I often went to PC Bang to play games. I also went to sled near my house with my families. In addition, I was reconnected with the friends that I haven't talked during the semester.

Brendan doesn't want anything to be returned but //Time// and //Sports Illustrated// are the two magazines that he gave to his students. During the morning, the pipe burst; later during the afternoon, Dad found a plumber to repair it.