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Pattern 10 1. I put all of my efforts for his project to get this grade : an "A", the grade I really had worked for. 2. Jane is smart : a girl who memorized all the words in 10 seconds. 3. The class elected a man who is clever as treasurer : Jim Rutledge. 4. Gramy award : an award which jane received, the most coveted of all awesome distinctions.

1. If your teacher says to read it twice, if your teacher tells you to write again, or if your teacher says to stop talking, you'd better follow your teacher's wishes rather tan your friend's.

4. Whether you think that you are prettier, or whether you think that you are smarter, you should be nice to Amy.

5. The basketball coach shouted that the referee is wrong, that he is on the side of the other team, that the other team's coach begged him to give more points to their team, and that he should not substitute our best team member, Timmy.

If I planned out more before the party, If Michelle and Rosa came to my party, or If I did not had a fight with my mom, then my birthday party might have been the best.

1. Which would you say is better? Support your answer with specific instances from the text. I think the second paragraph is better than the first paragraph because it sounds better, not complicated and used many styling sentences. 2. With the paragraph you decided wasn't as good as the other, then make at least two changes to that paragraph which would improve it.

Greening buds, patches of mud, scattered puddles, a birth of color -- spring really was on its way. Noel always found this season to be the ripest: knowing of the changes that would soon be thrust upon her made her feel a certain tie to the fruit trees that were just beginning to show their blossoms. She too would be plucked from her current home and shipped off to some far off place. Her endpoint: Lincoln, Nebraska. The plum's endpoint: who knew. It could have been Nebraska or Melbourne or Brittany or Johanesburg. But this was not the first time she had started over on some other side of the world, and it certainly wouldn't be the last. She had learned to look for the small beauties amidst these times of transition, and she knew these harbingers of spring would always find her no matter where she moved. 1. Hardware, software, a modem - all of them are useful devices that benefits people to use computer.

2. Poetry and music, painting and sculpture, drama and dance - which class do you want to take?

3. Shopping, eating, walking, meeting my cousins - these are my spring break plan.

Students should have done the the following : read My Last Duthchess and the book Candide and they should have written 10 page paper.

Page 23, Ex. 3, 4, 5 Walking, smiling, dancing ,the winner left the stadium feeling great. The children gathered around their teacher, eating, dancing, singing.

Page 27 1. Michelle, what kinds of fruit do you want ; Oranges or Peaches or Kiwis or Mangoes? 2. I am going to play soccer in spring, baseball in summer, hockey in winter, football in the fall.