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**Part II: Prewriting (post on your wiki page)**
List 5 events of significance in your life. 1. Going through hardships until I recognized the priority in life. 2. Going to America to study abroad 3. Coming back to Korea after studying abroad 4. Going to New York City as a vacation 5. Transferring from Korean School to International School

List 5 moments that last no more than 5 minutes where you had an aha or you didn't realize at the time the significance. 1. Looking at various pictures, drawings, and art work at MOMA in New York City 2. Looking at Andy Warhol exhibition 5. When I saw Columbia University campus in NYC

Choose two of those events and free write for 4-6 minutes about each of them. 1. I went to the Andy Warhol's exhibition. I saw various artwork from him, which inspired me to do my best so that I can achieve my goals. His artwork was just not a artwork. I felt his ambition and effort through his artwork.

2. I used to be effortless and didn't try my best to achieve anything. Therefore I had no goals or dreams. However I faced a climax of my life. I transferred schools because my mom was not satasfied with what I did at that school. I went to international school and went through hardships. However with that hardships I improved.

Choose one of the events and add setting and dialogue. Surrounded by the pop art atmosphere, I felt Andy Warhol's new perspective of art. Art, in his definition was not something that you just draw realistic and hang in the wall; it was a business to earn money. He was a legend. He created the whole new perspective of art back in the period which commonized the art into marketing and advertisement. Just by looking at his artwork, I tasted his sense of art and his perspective towards art. I was forbidden to touch his artwork but I felt its texture like I was actually touching it. His artwork was so strong that I felt like touching them just by looking. Through all the exhibition room entrance, I smelled the cold art conditioning and as I step into the exhibition, I smelled his effort that he put on his artwork; not the effort for working long hours of drawing but his effort in creativity; to break the stereotype of art and create new century of art which is known as pop art.

Choose an event (either the ones you brainstormed with or another one) and answer the following questions: What is the thesis? I believe looking at others success encourage you to achieve your goal.

What is the significance (one sentence)? First time that I wanted to do something and that I want to achieve something.

What is the setting? At the art exhibition

Write one sentence or phrase for each of the senses (taste, touch, smell. . .) Taste: Tasted his sense of art and his perspective towards art Touch: No touching the artwork however I felt its texture like I was actually touching it just by looking at them. Smell: Smell of the air conditional and the effort that he put on his artwork Feel: Felt the desire and ambition from his art work See: Never in my life I saw those beautiful color combination.

1/2 WORD SENTENCE 26 WORDS SENTENCE PATTERN 4 SENTENCE

"X box new model available from today, December 23, 2009!!" "Your X box sucks; it didn't work from last summer, when you stepped on it by mistake!"

Zack shouted to me while reading the game megazine in my room.

Another noise came from the TV, "new X-box game available!" But I couldn't buy the new game since last year summer; I broke my X box by mistake.

Computer games, I have tried, but it's just not fun as X box! Dolls; I will never play with them. Even if my younger sister begs me to play with it together. For my whole entire year in 2009 was so boring and it will be boring if I don't get a new X box.

"GET IT!" yelled Zack. However, I knew that my parents are not going to get me a new X box because of what happened to my old broken X box.

I wish I could get them. Just for christmas present. K-mart probably sells the X box with cheapest price. Lower price than any other stores!

My wish will come true on Christmas.. No matter what, I have to get that new X box! Oh please. Please ! Quickly, I have to GET THEM! Really.. . Summer bad memories can be gone with brand new X box. Tonight, I will wait for my santa claus and reindeers to come to my room, leaving the best and epic present of my whole entire year. Upstairs in my room will be the perfect place for a X box presnt. Vision of X box would not go away! Wishes comes true tonight!!

DISCUSSION (i wasn't there so you told me to write a paragraph for each number)

1. Taking turns in the group, quickly summarize the events. Candide is a honest boy who believes in optimism. He used to work for barons in a amazing castle and fell in love with Cunegonde. However he gets kicked out because he kisses with Cunegonde and he got caught by his master which is Cunegonde's father. So he goes on very long journey with miserable events and also very little good events to meet Cunegonde with a belief of optimisim, "best of all possible world". However when he faces problems he start to doubt a little by little about optimism.

2. Read the Key Question page of the member of the group and discuss. This discussion should last more than a short minute. Expand on the ideas, argue, use other text. I read key question of Sarah Bock's. When I read her answer, it was really good with specific definition of revolution and she stayed on topic based on what she believes to be revolution. She supported her ideas and opinion by examples in Candide. She chose the right example and explained how it relates to her answer. However she could have added more supporting examples. There were a lot of example relate to her ideas when I read the book so she could add some more.

3. Satire -- find a couple more examples as a group. In the book’s introduction, Michael Wood tells us that Voltaire wrote, “Satires don’t correct anyone, irritate the foolish, and make them even more mean” ( xxvi). Do you think this is true? Would a present-day Pangloss, or someone like him, change his way of thinking if he were to read Candide? There are lots of satire in Candide: In page 41, Voltaire use satire to make fun of optimism by Candide being positive when he is about to die. In page 33, Voltaire uses satire of giving miserable events to Candide after when it is okay to criticize religious hipocracy. In page 26, Voltaire uses satire to make fun of religious christian by telling old women's story that even though she was pope's daughter, her life was full of misery and sadness and unhappiness. In page 25, Voltaire writes that old women is pope's daughter to make fun of pope that he can't even take care and save his own daughter from her misfortunes. Through Voltaire's satires in Candide, I agree and think that “Satires don’t correct anyone, irritate the foolish, and make them even more mean” is true because he is not correcting them to do something in correct way, he is making fun of foolish by mentioning what they did wrong. I believe that someone like Pangloss would not change his way of thinking if he were to read Candide because Candide is not so realistic to believe that it will happen for himself too. It is just full of funny and miserable events to prove that it is not "best of possible world", not so realistic though.

4. In what ways does Voltaire’s satire extend beyond his own time? What would Voltaire think of our own age, for example? What aspects of our thought and behavior might he satirize most fiercely? What kinds of political, philosophical, and religious hypocrisy are most prevalent today? If Voltaire existed in our own time period, then he would criticize how christians believe in God that he will do best things for us. Also he would make fun of Korean politics, how they waste citizen's money on useless things. He would still make fun of religious people alive and now that world is more corrupted than his time period, he will state more strongly that life is existing to make us miserable.

5. Near the end of the book, while Pangloss was “being hanged, and dissected, and beaten, and made to row in a galley,” he still holds firm to his original views that this is the best of all possible worlds. “I am a philosopher after all. It would not do for me to recant” (88). What are the dangers in holding beliefs that are impermeable to reality, that do not alter according to actual experience? I believe that Pangloss belief is dangerous and sometimes good because optimism can get people's hopes up too high but when a person is hopeless and want to end life if a person believes in optimism, they won't give up living life believing that it is for the best of all possible world. However it is dangerous when a men's hope range is too high because your standard of hope is "BEST" and too high that it will be

6. Martin tells Candide that Paris is “a chaos, a throng in which everyone pursues pleasure and almost no one finds it” (p. 58). In what ways is this statement also true of nearly all the people we encounter in the novel? To what degree is it true of human beings generally? What are the consequences of this pursuit of pleasure? I believe and agree that everyone pursues pleasure and almost no one finds it because when people gains pleasure they always want more and get greedy, it is just human instinct to desire more and more. Therefore they do pursue happiness however they leave from their pleasure in desire to find more pleasure. So it is true that almost no one finds it at the end however people mostly pursue pleasure once but they lose it later on, it is matter of holding the pleasure long as possible which is very hard to do because human beings desires and ambition.

7. Martin believes that man is equally miserable wherever he lives and that even in cities which are free from the ravages of war, “men are more devoured by envy, cares and anxiety than all the tribulations visited upon a citadel under siege. Private griefs are crueler even than public miseries” (p. 56). Is Martin’s view more accurate than Pangloss’s, or does it simply represent the other extreme? Would you agree that “private griefs are crueler even than public miseries”? I agree that “private griefs are crueler even than public miseries” because it is always better to be with someone than being alone in sadness. People is more upset when they are alone. I believe men's unhappiness is from loneliness. Martin really knows reality of world while Pangloss is just full of hope for the world to get better. However I believe that Martin being totally hopeless is not right but Pangloss is not right neither. I believe you need to face the reality of world but learn to face them and learn how to go through misery because world is not that bad as Martin had mentioned. However Pangloss being too hopeful about this corrupted world is not right. World is too corrupted by people causing crimes and being dishonest. It is impossible for the world to be BEST as Pangloss and Candide believes but you have to keep yourself from becoming one of them.

REFLECTION

We all did a good job acting as our characters. However we could have interpret it in our own way that nobody could have thought of and show the scene to the audience with better understanding of the scene. We could have added more action of each character to show the audience what's going in this scene. However, we did a great job saying the lines with enthusiasm. Also we could have prepared more with the furniture and decoration for the room that we were in for the play. Overall, our play was a success! If a member of our group didn't have so much lines in the play, they did the storyboard and character customs drawings to make all the work equal. Everyone contributed very well. Each member of our group did great job preparing for their own character and also did some work for the group! I did not have much lines in the play. However, I added actions of the Nurse to give the audience better understanding of Nurse's character and what she does in her daily life. Also I prepared most of the customs and also worked on custom drawing and decided what each character's custom was. We could improve on adding more actions for each character's while performing. Also it will have been really good if we memorized our lines! When we played our scenes and practice for the play, I learned what Nurse does in her daily life and how she acts in front of Capulet's family. Also I learned how Lord Capulet is a demanding father. He is very strong with his plans and opinions.
 * 1. Evaluate the performance of your group. What went well? What didn’t go well?**
 * 2. How well did you contribute to your group?**
 * 3. How well did you perform as an individual?**
 * 4. What could have improved your scene performance?**
 * 5.How did the scene performance help you better understand the play.**

Score Key: 5 = Outstanding **4.5 = Strong** 4 = Good 3.5 = Average 3 = More work needed 2 = Very weak 1 = Not acceptable

MISSING REFLECTION FROM THE PLAY. 0/5

QUOTES COMIC

PARAGRAPH OF COMPONENT

Out of all the components, the word category showed Romeo's mental state and contributed the effect of Romeo's final words. The word categories were flag, rocks pilot, lightening, seasick. This group of words made a image of a ship that is about to sink with flag, lightening, and seasick. In other words, it shows Romeo's decision to give up his life and that it was end of everything when there was no Juliet. It showed that Romeo is about to die and his fear of death, and doom of his life. Flag was for giving up and lightening describes how Juliet's death was so sudden and surprising for him and it is something that makes him dies. Also this group of words describes the larger themes of the play. It shows that their fate was something that is unchangeable and they ignored the fact that they can't be together and they tried to take control over their fate which end up to be a doom. I think that one of the point that Shakespeare is trying to show with this scene is that if you try to control over your fate, there will be serious consequences. For Romeo and Juliet, their serious consequence was death.

ACT 5.3 Romeo's final speech

Friar Lawrence

Adviser by Insun Choi

Loving Friar who is Caring for romance of Romeo and Juliet Advised them to chase after who you love Allowing them to see the possibility of marriage Planning the perfect plan with a "potion" Led to death and the end of their love

= = =ACT 4 QUESTIONS= Act IV Questions Answer all questions with only 1-2 sentences. You should already know the answers to most of these and this should be a review.

Know the meaning of the following words:

Lament: a passionate expression of grief or sorrow

Shroud: garment, clothing

Vial: a broad flat container

Melancholoy: a deep, pensive, and long-lasting sadness.

Literary Terms:

What is subtext? an underlying and often distinct theme in writing/conversation. Example? when Juliet lied that she’ll marry Paris, she was actually going to go meet Romeo

What is protagonist? the leading character that goes through lot of changes Example? Romeo and Juliet is the protagonist in the book.

III Questions: Scene 1: Why is Friar Lawrence reluctuant to marry Paris and Juliet? Because he knows how much Juliet loves Romeo and that he knows the real reason why Juliet have been depressed lately; it was all because Romeo was gone and that was why Juliet is melancholy not Tybalt’s death.

How does Paris explain the sudden haste of the marriage plans? Paris says that its not his decision but Juliet’s father’s decision. Even though they are not really in love Paris explains that they did not have time to talk about love when Juliet was depressed by Tybalt’s death so to stop her depression the decision is to rush the marriage to let Juliet have someone besides her when she’s depressed.

What is ironic in the conversation between Juliet and Paris? When Juliet says that if she answer his question about confessing that she loves him, “him” is actually referring to Romeo. Also when she said what she’s saying to her face is not cruel its the truth, she is saying that she loves Romeo and thats the truth.

What are the steps of Friar Lawrence’s plan for Juliet? First say that she’ll marry Paris and she will get Wednesday night alone without her nurse and drink the coffin that will let her look like she’s dead for 42 hours. When bridegroom comes in Thursday morning, she will look dead and she will be sent to Capulet family tomb. While she is getting to family tomb, Friar will tell Romeo about the plan and bring him there and wait for her to wake up and when she wakes up they will go to Mantua.

Scene 2: How does Capulet change the wedding plans after Juliet says she will marry Paris? He said that he will make the wedding happen tomorrow morning.

Scene 3: How does Juliet show her maturity and independence in this scene? When she doesn’t call anyone for help even though she is frightened to death. She deals the problem by herself alone.

If the potion does not work, what will Juliet do? She will have a dagger in her hands to stop it.

What are two fears Juliet has about the potion? that it might be poison suffocate in the tomb

Scene 4: Everyone prepares for the wedding. Does Capulet seem excited or anxious? How can you tell? Capulet seems very excited because Capulet said that he will pay any cost for this wedding and he won’t sleep that night. However he seems bit anxious because he was urging the servingmen to hurry and to everyone else.

Scene 5: What does Friar Lawrence say to comfort the family? He says that if they yell and scream and panic to know why she died that’s not going to solve any problem. He tells the family to calm down because Juliet is in help of heaven.

What do the Capulets prepare for? For funeral.

What’s the deal with the musicans? What are they talking about? Why put them in the play? Musicians are all for the silver(money) and they were planning to go home because it turned into a funeral. They showed in the play to show humor during Juliet’s death. =ACT 4.1 & 4.2 SUBTEXT=

__**ACT 4.1 JULIET'S LINES**__ What must be shall be. -> I think she is actually talking about her love with Romeo is a "must" and R+J marriage will be possible no matter what.

I will confess to you that I love him. -> She acts like she is talking to Friar but she is saying to Paris that she loves Romeo

If I do so, it will be of more price Being spoke behind your back than to your face. -> She is saying that if she loves Romeo it will be better if she just hid that fact to Paris than to just tell Paris that she loves Romeo to his face.

That is no slander, sir, which is a truth, And what I spake, I spake it to my face. -> She is saying to Paris that she saying that she loves Romeo is not a slander and that its the truth.

PARAGRAPH Juliet in Act 4 scene 1 hides many meanings behind her lines. When she said "what must be shall be", I think she is actually talking about her love with Romeo is a "must" and R+J marriage will be possible no matter what. Then, when she said " I will confess to you that I love him", She acts like she is talking to Friar but she is saying to Paris that she loves Romeo. When she said "If I do so, it will be of more price/ Being spoke behind your back than to your face.", she is actually saying that if she loves Romeo it will be better if she just hid that fact to Paris than to just tell Paris that she loves Romeo to his face. Also when she says "That is no slander, sir, which is a truth, And what I spake, I spake it to my face.", she actually is saying to Paris that she saying that she loves Romeo is not a slander and that its the truth.

__**ACT 4.2 JULIET'S LINES**__ When Juliet says, "I met the young man at Lawrence’s cell. I treated him with the proper love, as well as I could, while still being modest.", she is actually referring to Romeo.

=**ACT 3 SUMMARY**=

ACT 3.2 Juliet was waiting for the wedding with Romeo. However Nurse gives her the news that Tybalt is dead and Romeo is hiding in Friar Lawrence's cell but that he soon has to run away from the town. So Juliet sends the nurse with ring to give Romeo so that she can get a farewell from Romeo before he leaves the town.

ACT 3.3 The prince wants Romeo to be gone from the town rather than death. However Romeo feels that running away is same as death because that means he can't see Juliet. So Romeo gets depressed and tries to kill himself but the nurse comes to give him the ring that Juliet sent him. Therefore he takes Friar's advise to go to Juliet and before daybreak they can flee to Mantua.

ACT 3.4 Capulet and Paris thinks that Juliet is depressed because of Tybalt's death and that destroyed Paris's love with Juliet. Capulet allows Paris to marry Juliet and tells him to get married Thursday. Paris agrees to marry Juliet on Thursday and Lady Capulet goes to Juliet to tell the news.

ACT 3.5 Last farewell with Romeo and Juliet before Romeo leaves to Mantua. When her mother sees Juliet, she thinks Juliet's tears are from Tybalt's death when actually it was tears from Romeo's banishment. So her mother tells the news of the marriage of Paris and Juliet on Thursday to cheer her up. However Juliet denies to marry him. Capulet comes in expecting excited Juliet, however Juliet tells him that she can not marry Paris so her father tells her to obey his decision no matter what. Nurse defend didn't work neither so she advises Juliet to obey her father. However Juliet seeks Friar for his advise.

Discussion: Connie Minae Michelle P. Insun C. ACT 2.4 1-37 __Summary:__ Mercutio and Benvolio is talking about Romeo about what happen last night (he didn’t come home) and talk about Tybalt __3 language tricks__ Alliteration: blind bow-boy butt -> Helps you to see the image (descriptive) Reversal: Came he not home tonight? -> It made Mercutio sound like he is worried about Romeo Personification: Stabbed with a white wench’s black eye -> It emphasizes the bad, suffering of Romeo’s love Allusion: More than prince of cats. -> Describes Tybalt’s character. It helps the reader to understand Tybalt better by what we already know __Important line__ “poor Romeo, he is already dead” because it’s a foreshadow of what will happen later on in the book. How their love is going to be ended?

Summary Letter

Prompt Book Comparison

LOVE CONNECTION Nurse is saying something specific about what men do to women. Take another look at the line. 5/5

NICE JOB ON CONNIE'S REVISION SHEET. 5/5

ACT 1, Scene 1, Lines 80-160

Summary:

1. Prince Escalus enters and tell them to stop fighting, penalty of torture. 2. Capulets and Montagues stops fighting. 3. Prince states that whoever destroys the civil peace will be hung and die. 4. Prince leaves with Capulet and Montague to talk privately and Benvolio is left alone with Montague and Lady Montague. 5. Benvolio explains how the fight was like in the beginning to Montague and Lady Montague. 6. Lady Montague asks to Benvolio if he has seen Romeo (son of Lady Montague). 7. Answers that he saw Romeo walking alone through a grove of sycamores outside the city and he seemed to be troubled and upset so Benvolio did not talk to him when he saw Romeo. 8. Montagues tells Benvolio that currently Romeo seemed upset about something but they didn't know the reason of his sadness. 9. Then, Romeo arrives and Benvolio tells the Montagues that he will figure the reason why Romeo is upset and Montagues departs. __**5/5**__

Becoming Shakespeare Elizabethan England THESE ARE YOUR COMMENTS FOR THE BECOMING SHAKESPEARE ASSIGNMENT.

The book that I am going to read during English class for world literature is The Prince by Niccolo Machiavelli. Niccolo Machiavelli was born in Florence, Italy. He was an Italian philosopher, writer and politician. Among all of his jobs he was a Civil Servant of the Florentine Republic. Even though he had his strong opinions, in the last chapter of his book he flattered to people to get a job. Also he has his own word in English, “Machiavellian” which means cunning, and scheming in politics or in advancing one’s career. The reason why I decided to read this book is because the way it was written was interesting. It is a guideline for the prince about what they should do and should not do to maintain their princedom. Also this book is very famous and it was written very long time ago. However still lot of people today use and read this book for their knowledge. I also decided to read this book because it was a short book that hold lot of useful information. __**5/5**__