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Mercutio

5 words -witty -satirical -lascivious -romantic -puns

3 verbs -babbling -jest -energizing

Oh, witty and satirical Mercutio, aches, finally, through his babbling. He is victimized in another’s battle, and shouts his final words, “I am hurt.” This eternal ironic contusion, is a rise of an irreversible friction. 

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Romeo and Juliet Love connection

MOST OF YOUR COMMENTS DO NOT SEEM HELPFUL. DID YOU COMPLETE THE SHEET? YES. NEXT TIME I WILL BE MORE STRICT IN MY EXPECTATIONS. 4/5

ROUGH DRAFT

BECOMING SHAKE

Act 1 until line 155. Sampson and Gregory in the streets argue and flicks the bird at one of the Capulets. The Capulets get angry and starts a fight. The Capulet and the Mantague fights and the Prince stops it. Romeo enters NEED JUST A BIT MORE. WHAT DID THE PRINCE SAY THAT WAS IMPORTANT. WHAT ABOUT BENVOLIO, OR WHAT IS LEARNED ABOUT ROMEO? 2/5

Prologue Paraphrase

The old desires (Rosalyn) is dead, and young new love affects his heir. How fair it was that love wanted bad, now, with Juliet, it is not fair. Romeo loves and is loved again, is bewitched & attracted by one's charming look. But he must lie to his foe, and Juliet steals Romeo's love and mind. As a foe, he may not meet her, to interact & breathe with her, and Juliet loves, she would meet Romeo everywhere and anywhere. Passion allows them to do anything, from bitter things to sweet things.

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Self Evaluation-play NICE JOB WITH THIS, PARTICULARLY IN THE LAST PARAGRAPH.

A story is supposed to be very entertaining and fun! But my story that I will tell you will be a spooky and a scary one. Cats are one magnificent animal. Dogs are cat's enemies. Even if the cat is strong, the dogs usually eats the cats. Fortunately, cats also have an animal to eat, mouse. Generally, this will be true; however, not in my story. "Home, sweet, home." Intelligent cat shouted with happines. Jubilantly, the cat rested in the sofa, watching the TV. Kevin, the dog in the house asked, "What should I do for you, master?" Luckily, the cat was in a good mood; therefore, he didn't ask for anything. "Master, you are very happy, today." Kevin said. "Nasty little fool, I am watching the TV, please shut up!" Lifting the whip, the cat replied. "Oh, please don't whip me, I am sorry!" Posturing a sorry position, the dog begged. Questioning dogs were the extreme foe of the cat. Radically, the dog took motion. Swords and sling shots were items the dog took. Taking out his sword, he pointed the sword at the cat. Unfortunately, the cat attacked back with his karate moves. "Vendetta, is that what you are looking for?" Waving his hand at the dog (saying bye bye), the cat asked. "XXXXX (Swearing)" The dog replied. Yawning, the cat woke up from his dream. "Zang it! I thought this was a true story!!!!!!!!!!!"

**Part II: Prewriting (post on your wiki page)**
List 5 events of significance in your life. List 5 moments that last no more than 5 minutes where you had an aha or you didn't realize at the time the significance.

1. Being born under the care of nice parents. 2. Attending Korea International School. 3. Starting to play soccer. 4. Starting to play tennis. 5. Meeting new friends.

Choose two of those events and free write for 4-6 minutes about each of them. Choose one of the events and add setting and dialogue.

Choose an event (either the ones you brainstormed with or another one) and answer the following questions: What is the thesis? That the first day of school brings confidence, have new experiences, build you as a mature person, and make friends. What is the significance (one sentence)? Without the first day of school, every school day will feel like the first day of school. What is the setting? School. Write one sentence or phrase for each of the senses (taste, touch, smell. . .) I could taste the first lunch at school and I am starting to miss home. I touched the rough textile of the desk that made me think of all the bad memories that could have been here. I smelt the old furniture in the classroom that made me fear. I saw the new teacher with a ruler and she said it will be our best friend Start writing.

Organization
 * Part III: Draft 1: (300 - 600 words)**

Do you remember your first day of school? You are all alone and have to survive all by yourself. I remember my first day of school and when I look back at it, I can’t resist from laughing. Not only does the first day of school make you laugh, but it also enables you to make friends, get confidence, and have new experiences that build you as a mature person. “Ian, wake up, son! Today is your first day of school!” My mom shouted with joy and pride. After my mom spoke those words, a sudden shock struck my head and I thought life couldn’t be more miserable than how it is right now. “Ok, mom, I am dressing up.” I had to lie because I was going through probably my life’s most contemplative moment. I remembered my first day of preschool; making and talking to new friends was a hard task to complete. After I have finished my musing, I decided to comply with my foiled destiny. As 8 years old boy, I was a bright optimist; therefore, I looked at it at a different perspective. Escaping from my mom’s over sufficient care brought me joy and made me forget about all the worries about the first day of school. After I have hurriedly eaten my breakfast, I rode the school bus to the school. I saw the 5th graders who were full of confidence and strength; they were at the top of the food chain and we were at the bottom. Escaping from the upper classman’s cruelty was another problem. At the school bus, I sat next to a student who had a countenance that showed worries, stress, and fear. Those three criteria fitted him perfectly into a 1st grader.

Introduction -- (maybe)
 * attention grabbing statement (dialogue, startling statement, question, quotation)
 * introduce the focus of the paper - change or idea learned
 * establish the narrative POV - 1st person
 * thesis should be the last sentence of this paragraph

Body Paragraphs (or you could start in the middle of the story and then back up to an introductory line)
 * begin telling the story (narrative) of change or idea learned
 * include specific events that caused the change
 * focus on showing not telling

Conclusion (might be several paragraphs)
 * reflect on how you changed or what you learned
 * explain WHY the change or idea learned is significant
 * end with with something for the reader to ponder

Make sure your narrative essay included the following:
 * a narrative tells a story
 * a narrative has a point (aka - a thesis)
 * a narrative focuses on key moments and quickly deals with necessary, but uninteresting information
 * a narrative uses a consistent POV (1st or 3rd)
 * a narrative is rich in detail (that is, important/significant/interesting detail, plus use of the senses)
 * a narrative includes an interesting/creative introduction
 * a narrative includes a conclusion that leaves the reader thinking
 * a narrative essay includes several paragraphs that reflect on WHY the event described is important
 * How did you change? What did you learn? WHY is it significant?