DOLQ1+Ryan+T.


 * DOL and Journals **


 * Story over the break**

After basketball practice I went to the shower room, got the shampoo and rinse, than I took a warm shower. After the shower I went to the locker room and wore my clothes, went out to the car; my dad was waiting for me. I went home and I brushed my teeth; I went to sleep in my warm bed.

__**Revised**__

I got a haircut about 5cm; went to hakwons; went skiing.(Pattern 4) My haircut was very simple : Not very noticeable.(Pattern 3) My mom told me to cut 10 cm below my ears. My brother, said the haircut looked same as before. (Pattern 1) But to me it looked way different. I thought it was pretty.

A 15 year old kid names James Kang turned on the TV. Before his brother got the remote he took it and turned the channel to NBA channel. Causing his brother to cry. Dad came and bought his little brother an ice cream. Even though his little brother cried James watching NBA. Forgetting about everything he just concentrated on his favorite player play, Kobe Bryant.Getting the Laker's ball that Kobe gave. He was watching Kobe's plays stealing, passing, shooting. It was then when James really wantd to become like Kobe. Just then he turned off the TV and he thought for a second how Kobe played and handled the ball. Kindness which had turned into aggressive James started to play basketball with people that were 5 years. Leading the team he was the best basketball player and learned very fast and was talented in basketball. Missing shots that his teammates shot he would catch it and alley hoop the ball which made the hoop shake. Never putting the team down he tried his best. Often, coaches from different schools came to ask if he wanted to join their varsity teams. Players from all different parts of the world came to the schools that were asking me to join. Q one of his friend told him to go. Running around the court he was thinking if he should go. Suddenly, a coach from NBA had come. Tells James," Can you come to my team?" asked the coach. Unwillingly, James thought that he was not ready. Very Well, the coach said. Well said the coach you are a ball hog and you need to practice more.

Wednesday, November 4 Exercises 1. An essay has three major parts: introduction, body, and conclusion. 2. Hamburger, Pizza, Taco are my favorite books.

Monday, Nov. 30 //Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. Three diamonds; Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. It is a compound sentences. It helps the sentence flow more smoothly. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. It is a command sentence. It helps make the sentence more excitement. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, in Normandy; I will take you there, and if you have any diamonds for him; he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two)

4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk which was enough to make him go and commit parricide; not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ."


 * Key Question (James Kang)

After reading his beautiful key question, I can imagine all the words he had said in my head; but as I was reading his amazing key question I saw couple grammar mistakes.

Art of Sentence(Exercises)**

After you had ;earned all the compound sentences, the difference constructions among the are different; Not simply used, Pattern 1,2, and 3 are simple NOT different ways to punctuate the same sentence. Different functions needs to be performed by different words; the sentence must do different things.

1. My math test was very easy: the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot com-companies have changed the work week: they work on Fridays. 3. I finally know how to program my VCR: I just needed to press start. 4. The reporter asked her the most important question: how old are you? 5. I went to many places: we toured the National Air and Space Museum, the Smithsonian Castle, the Freer Gallery, and the new wing of the National Gallery of Art.


 * Art of Sentence**

a.Thought is the blossom; lange, the bud; action, the fruit.--Ralph Waldo Emerson b.Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.


 * Art of Sentence**

The tiger seems restless, but he is really big; he should have more room.

3. Atlantic is very cold and white; Ireland and Scotland, much greener. 4. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch, teachers want Taco Bell. (Checked by Ian)

Both the movie and the book was sad but it had couple differences in the movie and the book. First of all, in the movie it did not show us where he got the poison but in the play it told us that he bought it. Also, in the movie Paris did not fight with Romeo and Paris had not died.
 * Day 24:**

Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title
 * Day 23:**

In the book //Romeo and Juliet,// in the scene I read last night I read that Romeo had a good dream about him and Juliet; But when he had woke up unfortunately he notice that his dream was just something that will never happen. Balthasar had told Romeo that Juliet was in heaven. After hearing this Romeo had sent a letter and went to Juliet's grave so he can die with her. When he went he saw Paris and they fought. Romeo had killed Paris. Then Romeo drank poison and died. After Romeo has died and laid next to Juliet, she woke up and saw that Romeo had died and Juliet killed herself with the knife. Then Capulet and Montague came in and they became friends.

DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW.
 * Day 22:**
 * 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause**

You are suppose to underline tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play. and book or you may be able to italicize. Ex) I enjoy reading the book //Holes.//
 * 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book**
 * 3. Single vs. double negative**

Need to capitalize grandma or mom when you One is correctly spelled where as one is not. Ex) I am all right. Ex) I have a lot of candies.
 * 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom**
 * 5. all right vs. alright** //**regardless vs. irregardless**// **alot vs. a lot**
 * 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first**
 * 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second**

1. "Sgt Spiker, is it all right to assume that most of the twenty-seventh division are from Busan?"
 * DOL 17**

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to highway 52, you may continue reading __Romeo and Julie__t.

1. "Has Mother spoke to her and Kevin concerning in the article article in the magazine __Outdoor Life__ about camping in the Catskills Mountains?
 * DOL 16**

2. Nobody from my family has ever went to the art museum in Chicago and saw Picassos painting, "The Blue Gutarist".

1. We went to Brendan's house, on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party.
 * DOL 15**

2. The portrait //Maria Lisa//, painted around 1503, is considered the best painting of many that the da Vinci completed.

1. That there dog has bitten several mail carriers and his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think so? (all one sentence)
 * DOL 14**

2. The boat Roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there.


 * 10/10 --FOR PARTICIPATION. RESPOND TO COMMENTS AND CONCERNS AND YOU WILL HAVE FULL POINTS NEXT TIME AS WELL.**

Romeo Point of View My love Juliet after seeing you I was so nervous and horrified to talk to you. However, I never had seen you as a Capulet but only see as my lover of life. I hope that you also do not see me as a Montague but lover of your life. I hope that one day we can have another party like this. **OKAY, GOOD TO BRING IN THE FAMILY CONCERNS**
 * Journal #3**

A sonnet is a type of poem that has has fourteen lines and also has ten syllabus and goes with ababcedcdefefgg. "If I profane with my unworthiest hand."
 * Journal #2**

The book __Life Of Pi__ is about a kid that has lots of faith, very interested in animals and enjoys going to the zoo. However, I think this book is very boring because it only talks about animals and zoos which I am not that interested in. **NEED TO START EXPANDING YOUR JOURNAL ENTRIES.**
 * Journal #1**

1. "Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?"
 * Day 9 (we skipped a day):**

2. The students had sold many pizzas so the trip would not cost them as much.

James doesn't show choler when I call him by his name but when I do call him by his nickname his choler augments. **WHERE DOES THE COMMA GO AND WHAT IS THE RULE? RESPOND FOR WHEN i GRADE NEXT TIME.**
 * Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment.**

1. Because you're late finishing the job, you'll have to give the boys the video games to take to Hyun Suns house.
 * Day 6: August 25/26th**

2. My Sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

1. "The play __Romeo and Juliet__, was written by Shakespeare," Jinhee stated," and is considered one of the poet's best."
 * Day 5: August 24**

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months?"

1. Terry rung the bell at the gatehouse. But when no one answered he left in disgust.
 * Day 4: August 21**

2. Me and my sister caught the bus at Twenty-Second Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks too soon.