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 * 4 - 22 - 10**

1. Studying for the english and world history test; I strived to get 'an "A", the grade I really had worked for.'

2. Having no life and studying all the time is this boring kid's basic schedule; Calvin Dunn.

3. The class elected not three but one person 'as treasurer: Jim Rutledge'.

4. No one can predict who might get the "Laziest Person in the World" 'award:' 'the most covered of all' is the little boy in the pj's 'distinctions'.


 * 4 - 19 - 10**

1. Your grandmother as right: there is nothing new under the sun, nothing special to share, only dust.

2. a) But these numbers only tell part of the story, only the bones, only boring stuff, only two minutes.

b) But these numbers only tell part of the story, part adventure, part comedy, part boring.


 * 3 - 29 - 10**

1. If your teacher says to read it twice, if your friend says don't read it at all, or if you don't know who to listen to, you'd better follow your teacher's wishes rather than your friend's.

4. Where you think it is under the couch, or whether you think it's in your pocket, you know it is gone.

5. The basketball coach shouted that the referee has no skill in calling for the shots, that the other team's coach is cheating, and that the game should call for a free throw.


 * If I chose to go shopping, chose to read, or chose to even nap I can do all of the above, for it is an awesome vacation in the Philippines.


 * 3 - 10 - 10**

1. The second paragraph is better because it is more interesting and uses the colons to make the paragraph more appealing, like when it says, "Her endpoint: Lincoln, Nebraska. The plum's endpoint: who knew." The first one didn't have a lot of the patterns we have learned.

2. changes ...

"Greening buds, patches of mud, scattered puddles, a birth of color -- spring was on its way. Noel always found this season to be the ripest: thoughts of change and adventure ran through her veins . But what was it that made this Spring more unique ? Perhaps it was the knowledge that she was going to be moving back home at the end of the school year. Or perhaps it was the warming air or extra chatter at home or one of a million other things. Whatever it was, she knew this spring was special; it really was going to be a season of change."


 * 3 - 8 - 10**

2. Causing another mischief (my dog and cat) wrecked my favorite dress.

3. My favorite colors- red and orange - always attract me to new clothes.

4. Learning the basic skills- warming up and running -will help me succeed in any sport.

5. The electricity going out all over the town (plant shutdown) shocked the whole community.


 * 3 - 3 - 10**

1. Hardware, software, a modem - are what the really smart people use to upgrade their computers.

2. Poetry and music, painting and sculpture, drama and dance - are what put the mind at **ease.**

3. YOUR OWN : Bullfighting and hunting, rock climbing and mountain biking, kung fu and target shooting - are for the violent ones looking for excitement.


 * 2 - 10 - 10**

Twenty-two students should have done the following: read "My Last Duchess" and the book //Candide//, and they should have written a ten page paper.


 * 1 - 27 - 10**

1. Especially while doing her homework, my sister loves eating oranges, peaches, kiwis, mangoes.

2. I just love playing sports like soccer in spring or baseball in summer or hockey in winter or football in fall!


 * 1 - 26 - 10**

Art of Styling Sentences Page 23

3. "energized, broken, tired" the winner left the stadium feeling great.

4. The children gathered around their teacher, "hopping, laughing, cheering."

5. ......