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 * August 20th, 2009 DOL**

1. terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left in disgust

Answer 1) Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse; when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon

Answer 2) My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-Second and Hamilton Streets; unfortunately, we got off the bus two blocks too soon.


 * August 25th, 2009 DOL**

1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house

Answer 1) Because you're late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents Answer 2) My sister doesn't always have the time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

1. arent their alot of quoted passages in youre paragraph richard
 * September 2nd, 2009 DOL**

Answer 1) Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?

2. the students had sold many pizzas the trip doesn't cost them too much Answer 2) The students sold many pizzas, so the trip doesn't cost them as much. OR Because the students sold many pizzas, the trip doesn't cost them as much.

** Write a sentence with choler and augment. **

My mom's choler augmented when she heard that I got kicked out of school.


 * September 16th, 2009 DOL**

1. that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think.

Answer 1) That dog over there has bitten several mail carriers;his owners would do good to keep him chained, don't you think?

2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there

Answer 2) By the way, the boat, Roman III sank two years ago. Wasn't it located over there?

"All Quiet on the Western Front" Journal

In the beginning, the German soldiers who just finished a harsh battle finally gets to rest in their camps. The soldiers are enjoying their feast with beef, haricot beans, sausage, and bread. In the book, I felt that the soldiers were extremely enthusiastic and they respected each other. Also they enjoyed gathering around and talking to each other like girls. What I liked about the story until now, was that the story is in a positive mood.

Journal (2009.9.9)

A sonnet is a poem of fourteen lines with formal rhyme schemes and they usually have ten syllables per line. In Act 1 Scene 5 from "Romeo and Juliet" (pg. 53, Line 51~60)

O, she doth teach the torches to burn bright! It seems she hangs upon the cheek of night As a rich jewel in an Ethiop's ear-- Beauty too rich for use, for earth too dear. So shows a snowy dove trooping with crows As yonder lady o'er her fellows shows.

Romeo at the Party Journal

Dear Diary,

My friends Mercutio and Benvolio kept on telling me to forget about Rosaline, the lady whom I loved. They told me to find a new girl that I would like. However, I strongly disagreed with them and decided that I should tell Rosaline, my true feelings about her at the Capulet's mask party. When I got there, I was just thrilled to see her, but that's not what happened. There was only one girl that got my attention. Her name was Juliet. However, I realized that she was a Capulet when the mask party was almost over...


 * October 6th, 2009 DOL**

1. has mother spoke to she and Kevin concerning an article in the magazine outdoor life about camping in the catskills mountains

Answer 1) "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine //Outdoor Life// about camping in the Catskills Mountains?"

2. noone in my family has never went to the art museum in chicago and saw picassos painting the blue guitarist

Answer 2) Noone in my family has never been to the Art Museum in Chicago and saw Picasso's painting, //The Blue Guitarist//


 * October 8th, 2009 DOL**

1. sgt spriker is it alright to assu me that most of the twenty seventy division personnel are from busan

Answer 1) "Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?"

2. after you have drew a map showing the route from coleridge ave to highway 52 you may continue reading romeo and juliet

Answer 2) After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading Romeo and Juliet.

Day 22: DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book 3. Single vs. double negative 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot 6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second 8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of

Journal Entry 10/19/09 Comparing the book and the film, there were few differences. From the book, they showed Romeo buying the poison but in the film, they didn't. Also, from the book, they had Paris in Juliet's tomb first and then had Romeo came in after him. Romeo fought with Paris and Paris died from Romeo. However, in the movie, they just showed Romeo and Juliet alone.

10.26.09 DOL

Combine the short sentences into one sentence that follows PATTERN 1B. If necessary, add, omit, or change words to improve the sentence.

Group 1: The girl looks happy. She has a new car. Her brother has one too.

Answer: The girl looks happy; she has a new car, but her brother has one too.

Group 2: The tiger seems restless. He is really big. He should have more room.

Answer: The tiger seems restless; He is really big, so he should have more room.

Pattern 2 Example

1) Going to carnivals makes me happy; my sister, happy. 2) People usually feel that romance movies are romantic ; violent movies, uncomfortable.

Exercises

3) Most of my classmates thought that most of the places in Guam are green ; Ireland and Scotland, much greener 4) All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; Black Angus, for dinner.

Punctuation Exercise

a. Thought is the blossom ; language, the bud , action , the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store ; Yunji, lackadaisically.

Examples 1) Cunegonde is always gorgeous; the old woman, always ugly.

Paraphrasing the patterns Pattern 1-> Pattern 2-> Pattern 3->

Exercises 1) People thought Ms. Porter's class was the best class : the students all got A's on their papers 2) The dot-com companies have changed the work week : they were all exhausted through the harsh work.

Opinion about James Key Question

He mentioned that Candide does not represent the best of all possible worlds because the world is a "perpetual battle field," and I think I agree with him a lot. I felt that he understood most of the parts of the book .....

Art of Sentences

1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. This sentence is a compound sentence / There's no action. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. There's two independent clauses. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe in Normandy ; I will take you there and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you , as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) Pattern 1 4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some foo lish talk which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610 , but like . . ."

The Art of Styling Sentences pg 23 exercises 1) An  essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body paragraph, conclusion.   2) Noodles, ice-cream, chicken are my favorite foods.

Alphabet Writing DOL

All the classmates yelled at Ethan. But Ethan didn't say anything. Crashing all the furniture, the classmates started to throw chairs and desks at Ethan. "Don't lie, you took our homework!" Ethan was still quiet. Formally, he was an outstanding student and he always behaved. Going to school and studying was what he loved the most. He never broke the school rules and he always helped other people. In the cafeteria, he sometimes cleaned the trashes left over after the students ate their lunch. John, his best friend, always complimented him that he's a really polite and nice student. Katherine, his girlfriend, was very delighted and happy because he would do anything for her. Later on, there was one incident where Ethan completely changed. Monday night, Ethan was at the grocery store because his mother wanted him to buy more carrots. "Nobody's here." Only thing he was saw was black and empty spaces. People were supposed to be walking around the grocery store as usual, but that day, nobody was there. Questioning himself, he was thinking of reasons why the grocery store was so empty and dark.

About the vacation... DOL (using 4 different sentence patterns)

Most of my friends told me that they enjoyed the vacation even if it was short. //Jinhee went to America; Michelle went to Guam; Hyunsun stayed at home.// (Pattern 4) However, I really couldn't enjoy my vacation because I still had some work to do. To me, the whole winter vacation was very quick and was scheduled with lots of events. //There were no homework assigned during the break; however, I had work to do.// (Pattern 1a)

(Jane's edit) I got a haircut about 5cm; went to hakwons; went skiing.(Pattern 4) My haircut was very simple : not very noticeable.(Pattern 3) My mom told me to cut more, about 10cm below my ears, and my brother said the same. (Pattern 1) I also wanted to go somewhere during the break like California or Japan. I always loved California. It's warm, cozy, and comfortable.