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1. terry rung the bell at the gatehouse when noone answered he left in disgust Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse, but when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. i and my sister catched the bus at twenty second and hamilton streets unfortunately, we got off of the bus too blocks to soon My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets unfortunately, we got off the bus two blocks too soon.

1. The play romeo and juliet was written by shakespeare jin hee stated and is considered one of the poets best "The play __Romeo and Juliet__ was written by Shakespeare." Jinhee stated, "It is considered on of the poet's best."

2. when will you learn me to drive austin asked in exasperated choler must i wait another six months "When will teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler, "Must I wait another six months?"

1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents My sister doesn't always have time to visit us on my birthdays, but she does send presents. Coordinating conjunction

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. The choler mood caused our stress to augment.

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. "Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in you're paragraph, Richard?" "Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?"

2. The Students sold many pizzas, the trip don't cost them too much. The students sold many pizzas, so the trip didn't cost them as much.

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence) "Their dog had bitten several mail carriers, don't you think his owners would do good to keep him chained?" 2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there "The boat __Roman III__ by the way, sunk two years ago wasn't it located over there?" By the way, wasn't the boat ROman III which sank two years ago located there?

Day15: we went to brendans house which is located on Forty-Sixth Aveaue for the October party We went to Brendan's house on Forty-Sixth Avenue for the October party.

the portrait mona lisa the portrat was painted around 1503 is considered the better painting of many that da Vinci completed. The portrait //Mona Lisa// was painted around 1503, and is considered the best of the many painting that Da Vinci completed. (a positive)

After Chusuck: 1. Has mother spoke to her and Kevin concerning an article in the magazine out door life about camping in the Catskills Mountains. "Has Mother spoke in to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine //Outdoor Life// about camping in the Catskills Mountains?" (Correct Answer) 2. Noone(?) of my family has never went to the art museum in Chicap and saw Picasso's painting //The Blue Guitarist.// No one in my family has never went to the art museum in Chicap and seen Picasso's painting //The Blue Guitarist.// (correct answer)

Day18: 1. "Sgt. Spriker, is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?"

2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave to Highway 52, you may continue reading //Romeo and Juliet.//

Day 22: DOL Review

DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause Adverb-describes a verb. -ly words how, when, where [Until morning], I will starve. When you have introductory adverbial clause During summer vacation, I did my school homework.

2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book We use underlining or italicizing for title. Like movie title, book title. //Romeo and Julie// is written by Shakespeare.

3. Single vs. double negative rule: Don't (Bad) use double negative. Example: Don't use no double negative.

4. When to capitalize grandma or mom You would not capitalize when you said "my mom, my dad..". Are you okay, Mom?

5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot Use alright when you accept something or answering yes. All right is when you asking some question. Teacher asked, "Can you solve this answer?" She said, "Alright." "Are you all right?" They don't have word like irregradless because regardless is already negative. So if you put "ir" on there, it would be "without without regard." Alot is not word we should not use this word. A lot is the correct.

6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first

7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second

8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of We have to use should have, should of is not correct. You should finish your work at this time.

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title

The //Romeo and Juliet was// the saddest story I ever read. Even Rome and Juliet were love, it was impossible to tell their parent that they already got married. When Tybalt died; Montague and Capulet decided not be close with them. So it made Romeo and Juliet break up. Juliet, decided to drink sleeping potion, is showing her braveness. However, was it twist of fate? Romeo and Juliet never get talk with each other, because it leads them to death. It was bad timing.

Monday, Nov. 30 //Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. Three simple sentences 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. Compound Sentence

3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there; and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two) Pattern 1

4. The abbe now spoke up: "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." Compound Sentence