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1/14 Brendan doesn't want anything returned but __//Time//__ and //__Sports Illustrated__//, the two magazines that he gave to them students.

The pipe burst during the morning, but in the afternoon, Dad found a plumber to repair it.

1/8 It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did. PC bang is not an activity. -> Playing at PC bang I am sad -> I was sad

It was cold: there was a lot of snow. I had a lot of fun. I was sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. Playing at PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did.

1/6 Snow day On the first day of the school, it snowed really much; therefore it was really cold. I slept in the bus; my family, our house. The school should have informed us beforehand: That the school is closed. It was a dangerous, dirty, disgusting ride.

12/2

1. introduction, body paragraph, conclusion. 2. beef, pork, chicken

11/30 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. -> 3 simple sentences 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. -> Compound sentence 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there; and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. -> Pattern 1 4. The abbé now spoke up: "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." -> Compound sentence with explanatory statement; good because it first states what will happen and then explain the details at the end.

11/23

1. Read Checkpoints on page 17, then paraphrase.

Pattern 1: The statements have to be related which would become a sentence. Pattern 2: The second clause must have a word from the first clause that states ideas. Pattern 3: The second clause should explain or amplify the idea that was in the first clause. Don't use colon if the second clause is not about the first one.

2. Exercises 1 and 2 on page 17

1. The math test was very easy: the students all got A's on their papers. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they will have a week off after this Sunday.

11/12 1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. Candide is adventurous; Cunegonde, timid. Candide is poor; the King, rich.

11/11 The tiger seems restless; he is really big, and he should have more room.

Forest is green;Ireland and Scotland, much greener. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; all the teachers, to Taco bell.

Pattern 1 The girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has one too.

Day 11 (Sonnet define and example in scene five) The Sonnet is one of the poetic forms that can be found in lyric poetry from Europe. It has a rhyme scheme and specific structure. (ABABCDCDEFEFGG structure, 14 line, 10 syllables in each line)

A If a profane with my unworthiest hand B This holy shrine, the gentle sin is this : A My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand B To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much, Which mannerly devotion shows in this; For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.

1. Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse; When no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-second and Hamilton Streets. Unfortunately, we got off from the bus two blocks too soon.

Day 5: August 24

1. The play __//Romeo and Juliet//__ was written by Shakespeare. Jinhee stated, it is considered one of the poet's best.

2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked, in exasperated choler "must I wait another six months?"

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give us boys the video games to take to Hyun Sun's house.

2. My sister doesn't always have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. My choler mood was augmented by my sister's bad behavior. **YEP, THIS WORKS.**

Day 9 1. "Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard?" 2. Because the students sold many pizzas, the trip didn't cost them as much.

Day 10 I read the book called //Utopia//. This book was basically about the island that was separated from the original continent such as Europe and Asia. They had their own law and cultures. Also they could do what the normal people could not. The people who lives there are called Utopians.**IS IT INTERESTING AT ALL?** WORK TO EXPAND YOUR ANSWER A LITTLE.

Day 12 Today, I went to the party. I was excited rather than nervous even if I was a Montague. The only reason I came to the party was to see Juliet. Also, I wasn't alone. I went to the party with Benvolio and Mercutio. I got into the party and after a while, I finally saw Juliet. She didn't know that I was a Montague yet. I held her hand and kissed. I was satisfied. Then it was late, so the party ended. I hope I meet her again because she was even more beautiful that I thought. **PLEASE NOTE THAT HE HAD NOT EVER SEEN JULIET UNTIL THE PARTY.

9/10**

1. Their dog had bitten several mail carriers, so don't you think his owners would do well to keep him chained?

2. By the way, wasn't the boat __Roman III__ which sank two years ago located there?

9/18 1. We went to Brendan's house on Forty-Sixth Avenue for the October party. 2. The portrait //"Mona Lisa"// painted, around 1503, is considered the best of the many painting that Da Vinci completed.

10/6

1. "Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine __//Outdoor Life//__ about camping in the Catskills Mountain?" 2. No one in my family has gone to the art museum in Chicago and saw Picasso's painting __//The Blue Guitarist//__.

10/8 1. "Sgt. Spiker, is it all right to assume that the most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?" 2. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave to Highway 52, you may continue reading __Romeo and Juliet.__

DOL REVIEW 1. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause You need subject and verb after adverbial clause After the test, I fell asleep 2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book __Romeo and Juliet__ 3. Single vs. double negative I ain't got no money vs I got money You shouldn't use double negative 4. When to capitalize grandma or mom Mom doesn't want his son to get bad grades. 5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot

6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first Commas are needed after the proper noun I enjoyed watching the movie __Finding Nemo__, which was about finding Nemo. 7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second

8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of I should have studied for the test instead of playing video games.

Day 23: Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following: a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title

Last night, I read the book, __Romeo and Juliet__. At the last moment, Romeo, the desperate man, killed Paris with the sword and himself with poison. As Romeo died, Friar Lawrence came and found out that now everyone is dead. He thought this happened because of him, so he ran away. However, the prince came and asked what happened. Friar Lawrence told everything about Romeo and Juliet's love.