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1. Terry rung the gatehouse bell, but when no one answered, he left in disgust.

2. My sister and I caught the bus at 22nd Hamilton street, but unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks too soon.

 1. Because you’re late finishing the job you’ll have to give the boys the video games to take to Hyun sun’s house. 2. My sister doesn’t always have have time to visit us on our birthdays, but she does send presents.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. Johnny's choler attitude augmented his anger.

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. Aren't their a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard? 2. The students sold many pizzas, so the trip didn't cost them too much.

Dear Diary,
===Juliet is the prettiest girl i have seen! Rosaline is absolutely horrid compared to her. Her presence made me shake and nervous, but flattered at the same time. It's unfortunate that i had so little time to spend with her. But she is a capulet! What do i tell my parents? FUNNY TO MENTION ROSALINE IN SUCH SCORNFUL TONES. NICE VOICE SHOWN HERE. ===

Day 14: copy to DOL page - 1. Their dog has bit several mail carriers so wouldn't you think his owners would do good to keep him chained? 2. The boat __Roman III__ also sunk two years ago but it wasn't it located either.

1. We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth Avenue for the October party. 2. The portrait //Mona Lisa//, painted in 1503, is considered the best that Leonardo da Vinci painted.

Day 18

1. Has mother spoken to Kevin and her concerning an article in the magazine Outdoor Life, about camping in the Catskills Mountains?

2. No one in my family has ever went to the art museum in Chicago to see Picasso’s painting The Blue Guitarist.

Day 19

1. Sgt. Spriker, is it okay to assume that most of the twenty seventh personnel are from Busan? 2. After you have drawn a map showing the route for Coleridge Ave. to Highway 52, you may continue reading Romeo and Juliet.


 * __Day 22: October DOL Review__**

2. Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book Rule: tv series, movies, plays, and books are italicized. An individual episode or short story has quotation marks. Example: I watched the season premier of //House// yesterday.

3. Single vs. double negative Rule: Double negatives reverse the meaning of the sentence and can thus be confusing, so it is better to avoid them. Example: Nobody didn't want to play soccer. (incorrect) Nobody wanted to play soccer. (correct)

4. When to capitalize grandma or mom Rule: When grandma and mom are not followed by words such as My and His, it is a name so it is used just by saying Mother Teresa, etc. Example: Did Grandma tell you to go outside?

5. all right vs. alright //regardless vs. irregardless// alot vs. a lot Rule: All right is when you get "All right" on a test and is rarely used, alright is when you ask if somebody is "alright" or if it is "alright" to go and do something. Irregardless is not a word that exists, and you should never used "alot." Example: "Did you get all right on your test?" "It is alright for me to go outside?" "There is a lot of homework today." "Regardless of whether or not you finish your homework, you still need to go to school."

6. commas with an appositive with the proper noun first Rule: Commas are not used after a pronoun if it comes in front of an appositive. Example: //Knights in Moroco// a imaginary movie is written by Ali Jesus.

8. Enunciation -- should have rather than should of Rule: Should have is the correct form, should of should not be written although it is common to make the mistake because it sounds the same. Example: I should of told them to stop hurting him. (incorrect) I should have told them to stop hurting him. (correct)

DOL 23

I read the rest of Romeo and Juliet. I already know what happens at the end of the book, but it was interesting to read it in the book for the first time. The scene where Paris is finally slain made me happy. He has been an annoying jerk the whole time; him finally being killed by Romeo was nice. Apothecary, the guy who supplies the drugs is a cool guy. He said, "My poverty, but not my will, consents" and this shows he is in the need of money. The tragic death of Romeo and Juliet was an interesting book to read.

Group one

The girl looks happy for she bought a new car; her brother has one too.

pg.11 Group 2

The tiger seems restless, and since he is really big, he should have more room.

3. Japan is a country full of green; Ireland and Scotland, much greener. 4. All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; Lionel, to Wendy's.

1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom; language, the bud; action, the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.
 * November 12 --**

. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. Candide is in love; Cunegonde, too. The King is filthy rich; Candide, not.

**Monday, Nov. 23** 1. Read Checkpoints on page 17, then paraphrase. a. Remember, a paraphrase is NOT copying, but putting in your own words. How to do this? Read it, put it aside so you don't see the original, write, then double check to make sure you didn't plagiarize or mess up the meaning. b. Try to use one of the patterns in your paraphrase. 2. Exercises 1 and 2 on page 17 1. The final exam was amazingly easy: the students all god A's on their papers. 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: now, the workers go less than they used to.
 * 1 . The math homework was very easy: the students all got A's on their papers.
 * 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: they were tired of going to work everyday including Sundays.

Paraphrase: pattern 1: Two statements about the same idea should be put together and not separated into two separate ones. pattern2: Words used in the first clause should not be used in the second pattern3: Provide more detail in the second independent clause than the first. Unless the first and second statements are related, do not use a colon.

Monday, Nov. 30 //Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. Three diamonds! Each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon. This sentence consists of three simple sentences. 2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but leave it to me. Compund Sentence. 3. I have a brother in Dieppe, Normandy; I will take you there; and if you have any diamonds for him, he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two). Pattern 1. 4. The abbe now spoke up: "It's because an imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk which was enough to make him go and commit parricide -- not like what happened in May 1610, but like . . ." Compound Sentence.

Wednesday, December 2nd.

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion. 2. Spaghetti, steak, ramen are my favorite foods.

December 4th, 2009

1. My partner and I, Jenny Kim, decided this sentence needed to be broken up into two. I would put the period after "good deal less so". So it would look like "and a good deal less so. In 1883, when wine-growing region,..."

January 6th, 2009.

** This winter break, I went to a board camp. The camp consisted of nine KIS students and a couple supervisors. These students were: Jin, John, Edison, Taeyoon, Seunghyon, Justin, Austin, Joshua, and I. (Pattern 3) Two of these guys I am meeting in a long time for they study overseas, so it hyped me up for the trip. It was a 3 day 4 night trip.

At the camp, I ate a large variety of things. I ate pork, Chinese food, liver. (Pattern 4) It wasn't all that good, but it was pretty much what I expected, so i was satisfied. (Pattern 1) We went bowling after we ate one day and Joshua bowled a 150! ** Amazing, for sure. (Pattern 2)

1/6/10 It was cold: there was a lot of snow. There was so much snow that the some cars couldn't even properly drive. Even with the downsides, i still had a lot of fun. Christmas was also during our break, although it did not mean much. I am sad; I didn't get many presents, and my brother didn't get much either. PC bong, sledding, talking are activities that I did.

DOL 1/14/10

Brendan didn’t want to anything unreturned except Time and Sports Illustrated, the 2 magazines he gave to the students.

The pipe burst during the morning, and dad found a plumber to repair the burst pipes during the afternoon.