Revision+Justin+K

Revision Justin K

3. Ideas and Content: -Is there a clear focus to the paper indicated in the opening paragraph? Nope needs much more improvement -Underline the sentence in the opening paragraph that clearly states the focus of the paper. Task done -Are the supporting paragraphs and details clear? Not really -Do any sections need clarification? Yes the introductory paragraph 4. Organization: -Does the paper have clear paragraphs? No - Read the first paragraph again. Does the lead make you interested in reading the paper? Make suggestions as necessary. - Read the last paragraph again: What type of ending does your partner appear to be using. Does the ending work? Make suggestions as necessary. 5. Word Choice: -Are there any words that need to be replaced (or added) for greater clarity in the paper? Write your suggestions on the paper. 6. Sentence Fluency: -Mark any sentences that are **awk**ward (confusing or need to be reworded). 7. Conventions: -Use the editing marks to mark any convention errors (like spelling mistakes, etc.). Spelling mistakes were well checked by pages. 8. Citations: -Does the paper properly cite any information that is paraphrased or directly quoted? Mark anything that looks suspicious. Don’t let your partner be a plagiarist! 9. Works Cited page -Is there a works cited page? Are the citations in MLA format? x NOt used to be Now it is. 10. Format -Does the paper follow MLA format? x NO (past) / Yes (present) 11. Comments -On the last page or on the back of the paper, explain the three strongest points and the three weakest points of the paper. done In Verbal from

Wait for your partner to complete the review of your paper and then each partner should share, in a polite and helpful manner, each of his or her responses for questions #1-11.Type in the content of your page here.
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