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** Correct Jane Chyun's writing 1. I got a haircut about 5cm; went to hakwons; went to skiing.(Pattern 4) My haircut was very simple : Not very showing which no one notices.(Pattern 3) My mom, told me to cut more about 10cm below my ears, My brother, said it's same. (Pattern 1)
 * January 8,2010 Fri.**

My hair became about 5cm shorter because I had a haircut. My haircut was simple; it does not show any difference, so nobody even notices it. My mom told me to cut more since I have a better looking with shorter hair; My brother, it's same. Yet, I am satisfied. Not only focusing on my appearance, I studied at academies; went skiing. Overall, my vacation was pleasant, meaningful, amusing. ** __1. Sentence Review -- ON your DOL page, write a short paragraph about snow, your vacation, your new haircut. . . Use four of the sentence structures we've covered in The Art of Styling sentences. Identify the pattern numbers.__
 * January 6, 2010, WED.**

Right after the winter vacation started, I went to ski resort; my pet followed me; unluckily, the goldfish did not get to go. (Pattern 1) The vacation spot was fulfilled with Japanese; Chinese, Korean people(Pattern 2). Anyhow, we spent jubilant time. I was really good at skiing; last year, my ski tutor taught me well.(Pattern 3) There was the moment when I was nearly hurt. Yet, the assistance saved me with courage, intelligence, tension. (Pattern 4)

**December 9,2009** __Create a story with 26 sentences__.

Xypolist named, Yongsoo, inquired to the vacuum cleaner, “What are you talking about?” Vacuum cleaner did not respond to the question at all. Unexpectedly, he started to run toward him, yelling, swearing, spitting. The casatte tape that was in between two people, was turned on due to his sleeve, swapping all around the room. Saco music was on. Rosie, Vaccum cleaner, gracefully danced, according to the beat of the song. Quadrepation was seen in his movement. “Perhaps, we are merely at the end. Oh! Making a maccorroni cheese burger, watching a poketmonster, and shopping in the toy storyage are all cancelled!” Lachrymosely, he stated that he want to break up with the vacuum cleaner by using different kind of words, so that she could understand. Kindness with in the Yongsoo disappeared. Jealousy, created by the vacuum cleaner and his best friend, can’t be seen any more with in Yongsoo’s eyes as well. “ I am sorry,” He cited quietly. “ Go away,” she murmured. “ Fade back, meaning let’s go back to the time when we were spending jubilant time togeter. Elaphant, the dog we were raising, would be sad when he heard of our seperation,” he convinced with the low tone. “ Did you realize how I am having a hardtime, right now? Childish manner, chaotic behavior, and so on are all the things that you have,” He yelled.

1. An essay traditionally has three major parts: introduction, body, conclusion. 2.Tacco, pizza, spaghetti are my favorite foods. 3. Wicked, excited, and thrilled, the winner left the staduium feeling great.
 * December 2,2009**

//Copy and paste the following sentences into your DOL page. The periods are correct. You need to place commas, semi-colons and colons in the proper places. Then explain what kind of sentence it is and why it creates good sentence fluency.// 1. "Three diamonds; each worth three thousand pistoles! Sir, I would lay my life down for you sooner than throw you in the dungeon (simple sentence) ,"
 * Monday, Nov. 30**

Pattern #1 defines the brief explanation at the beginning of the sentence, but then in the second part it illustrates in detail.

2. There are orders to arrest all foreigners hereabouts, but (you) leave it to me. ( two independent clauses ; comma is needed)

3. I have a brother in Dieppem Normandy; I will take you there ;and if you have any diamonds for him( not independent clause) he will look after you as if he were looking after me. (semi-colons as well as a comma or two)

Pattern1

4. The abbe now spoke up, "It's because am imbecile from Arras listened to some foolish talk, (<= additions sentence) which was enough to make him go and commit parricide: not like what happened in May 1610 but like . . ."

patter #3 put additional information on the last part of the sentence. And this sentence is composed of compound-complex.

At the beginning of the class, our class read James' response on key question of Candide. It was well written with remarkable sentences, regarding the content of the book; his writing highlights two main themes of the book which are mentioned in the question. Also, I am in a consent with the idea that signifies one of "the rays of hope"; he suggests the rejoining of Cunacande and Candide.
 * Tuesday, Nov. 27**

1. Read Checkpoints on page 17, then paraphrase. a. Remember, a paraphrase is NOT copying, but putting in your own words. How to do this? Read it, put it aside so you don't see the original, write, then double check to make sure you didn't plagiarize or mess up the meaning. b. Try to use one of the patterns in your paraphrase.
 * Monday, Nov. 23**

I have learned three useful patterns of the sentences from the book, The Art of Styling Sentences. Although the patterns share certain characteristics, it has specialized routine. The apparent similarity that all three sentences was usage on semicolon. Also, they only connect independant clauses and dependant clauses with other when they share relevant ideaes. However, if one goes deeply, there are several differences. For patter #1, it only connects two independent clause that tells similar ideaes. Pattern #2 is the sum of one independent clause in the first part; second part has stuffs mentioned in independent clause. Lastly,the beginning part of Pattern #3 was stating general idea and second part indicates more detailed information.

2. Exercises 1 and 2 on page 17
 * 1. _: the students all got A's on their papers.
 * I think that the teacher only grade her students' paper in terms of participation wise:
 * 2. The dot-com companies have changed the work week: It was annual pattern that had happened since 2000.

1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom language the bud action the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson Thought is the blossom language; bud action; fruit. b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store Yunji lackadaisically. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store; Yunji, lackadaisically.
 * 10/10**
 * November 11 --**

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. "He has been working for Candide all this time, he had found Cunegonde." He has been working for Candide all this time; found Cunegonde. "Candide has gold and diamonsds, and he also has a good appetite." Candide has gold; diamonds; good appetite.

1. The following are Pattern 2 Sentences -- Punctuate them correctly. a. Thought is the blossom lange the bud action the fruit. -- Ralph Waldo Emerson b. Sam walks quickly and sprightly to the store Yunji lackadaisically.
 * November 11 --**

2. Write two sentences of your own original creation using Pattern 2 about //Candide//. What Have we done? We had worked on the sentence structure, basic form of grammar rules, such as nouns, direct object, etc. __P14__ 3) England has green view all over the place; Ireland and Scotland, much greener. 4) All the children want to go to McDonald's for lunch; all the adults, TGI Friday. Jane Sungeun Chyun
 * 26: October 26,2009 **
 * Read page 12 and 13. Do exercises 4 and 3. Then confirm with a neighbor that it looks correct. Put your neighbor's name as a checker at the bottom.**

__P11__ __ Pattern 1B __ Group One: The girl looks happy. She has a new car. Her brother has one two.

The girl looks happy; she has a new car, and her brother has it too.

October 19, 2009 **

Compare movie & Literary text (Act 5)

The movie and literature text have similar settings, ending, which both of the protagonists died, as well as characters' words in lines. However, there were several parts that were totally different in a way; such difference caused audience a different taste. For instance, in the movie, Friar Lawrence seemed to abandon Juliet when he heard others comming in to the tomb. Yet, in the real Shakespeare's written work, he wasn't able to even enter into the tomb because it was locked, which seemed to be more reasonable for Frirar Lawrence, not being capable to prevent Juliet's suicde. Also, the movie dierector took out Paris's dual with Romeo in the grievance,which was the part where he showed innocent individual's death, originated by two house's hatred feeling. As a result of director's deed on getting rid of such significant parts, the movie seemed to be less exciting and well flowed. 23: October 15, 2009 **

__Journal__ a. comma with an introductory clause b. semi-colon c. appositive d. underlining or italicizing or quotation of title**
 * Write a paragraph about what you read last night in Romeo and Juliet. Include in the paragraph at least three of the following:

The last assignments was full of tragic events. Romeo had committed crime again; Paris was killed by sword staggered into his body. Moreover, when after, Juliet finds out that her beloved husband,Romeo, drank the poison, she committed suicide by using the dagger. Consequently, Shakespeare's one of the greatest piece, //Romeo and Julie//t, ended with the scene of both of family's grief.

Day 22: DOL Review -- We've had many, many rules over the last few weeks. Please write the rule and then give an example sentence for 6 of the following. Upload this on your DOL page and label it DOL REVIEW. Comma with an introductory adverbial clause
 * 18: October 13, 2009

The

Underlining (or italicizing) of tv series, tv episode, movie, short story, play, book

Romeo and Juliet, Cinderella, Hamlet (play) Single vs. double negative

Double negative is for using the negative I don’t know no answer

When to capitalize grandma or mom When we use mom without any name before the noun phrase, grandma or mom. Mom, Grandma all right vs. alright regardless vs. irregardless alot vs. a lot Alll right defines the meaning of being satisfactory.

It is allright if you turn the worksheet without the date.

commas with an appositive with the proper noun first

A noun that follows another noun with the comma, which defines the meaning of it.

ex) Jessica, my bestfriend, had been mad at me.

7.commas with an appositive with the proper noun second

A noun that The first president of Untied States, George Washington, had done great job.

Enunciation -- should have rather than should of One of the** **Day 17: October 8, 2009** 1) sgt. spriker is it alright to assume that most of the twenty seventh division personnel are from Busan "Sgt. Spriker, Is it all right to assume that most of the Twenty-seventh division personnel are from Busan?" 2) after you have drew a map showing the route from Coleridge ave to highway 52 you may contine reading romeo and Juliet. After you have drawn a map showing the route from Coleridge Ave to Highway 52 you may continue reading //Romeo and Juliet.//

**Day 16: October 6, 2009**

1) has mother spoke to she and Kevin concerning an article in the magazine outdoor life about caming in the catskills mountains.

"Has Mother spoken to Kevin and her about concerning an article in the magazine, __Outdoor Life__ camping in the Catskills Mountains?"

2) none in my family has never went to the art museum in chicago and aw picassos painting the blue guitarist None of my family has never went to the art museum in Chicago and saw one of Picassos' painting, the Blue Guitarist.

**Day 15: September 18, 2009** we went to brendans house which is located of forty sxith avenue for the october party

We went to Brendan's house on Forty-sixth Avenue, for the October party.

the porfrait mona lisa the portrait that was painted around 1503 is considered the better painting of many that da Vinci completed

The porfrait //Mona Lisa//, painted around 1503, is considered as one of the best paintings that Da Vini completed. is considered best of the many that Da Vinci completed.

Day 14: September 16, 2009 1. that there dog has bit sevral Mail Carriers his owners would do good to keep him chained don't you think. (all one sentence) Don't you think that his owners would do good to keep him chained because his dog bit several mail carriers?

2. the boat roman III by the way sunk to years ago wasn't it located other there By the way, the boat ,Roman lll, sunk two years ago, so it wasn't located on there.

Day 12: September 11,2009 In the evening it was my fist time I ever dedicate to oppose my parents' words, which was marriage with Paris.Because It was my first time meeting my true love, I would not ever meet other guy. His hair seems to be a golden coin and lips were fulfilled with cherish shade. Oh! I can't forget every moment of the encountment with him. Oh! I miss him already. After his prayer to my lips, I was determined to give devotion to only him. And, even if he was the son of our enemy, I am not going to give up my intense feeling of deep affection to him. Oh, the evening was alike to be the best moment of my life. **NICE POINT ABOUT REACTION TO PARENTS. LOVE HOW YOU USE SOME OF THE WORDS OF THE PLAY.**
 * Write a diary entry from the perspective of Romeo, Juliet, or Tybalt about the evening. Take on their personality.**

Day 11: September 9,2009 Sonnet is a poem that consist of 14 lines with 10 syllables within each lines. Its rhymes have specific pattern. For example in the play, Romeo and Juliet, in the act 1.sc 5. it has an example on line 18 to 32! Other example was on page 53, on line 48 when Romeo skipped the servingman. ( Oh she...)

Day 10: September 7, 2009 The book- Life of Pi- that I have read for past few days seems to highlights how the nature works. By explaining about the protagonist's childhood, the author tells about lot of topics that are relevant to the living things on earth that we live on, such as the hierarchy of animals in the wild, their harships on maintainint life as well as the priviledge that the animals had in the zoos. Not only this illustration, the novel tells about the short information about the author's occupations and his past life. These contents that I had read up to were interesting because it corrected my misconception on the animals in nature and zoo and also more about India. Also, I got to learn more about part of the famous author's - Yann Martel's- life. **I FOUND THE INFORMATION ABOUT THE ZOO INTERESTING AS WELL.**

Day 9 (we skipped a day): 1. arent their alot of quoted passages in youre paragraph richard Aren't there a lot of quoted passages in your paragraph, Richard? 2the students had sold many pizzas the trip doesn't cost them too much Two students had sold many pizzas, (because) so the trip don't cost them as much.

Day 7: Write a sentence with choler and augment. The choler from my friend's white lie augmented my temper. **IN THIS SENTENCE IT WOULD BE AUGMENTED SINCE YOU USE THIS AS A VERB.**

Day 6: August 25/26th 1. because your late finishing the job youll have to give we boys the video games to take to hyun suns house

(o) Because you are late finishing the job, you'll have to give ,us, boys the video game to take to Hyunsun's house.

2. my Sister She dont always have have Time to visit us on our Birthdays but She does send Presents

(o) My sister doesn't always have time to visit us on our birthday, but she sends presents.

1) Terry rang the bell at the gatehouse. When Noone answered, "he left in disgust."

2) My sister and I caught the bus at Twenty-Second and Hamilton Street; unfortunately, we got off of the bus two blocks to soon. **SMALL LETTER AFTER THE SEMI-COLON**

Day 5: August 24 1. "The play __Romeo and Juliet__ was written by Shakespeare," Jin Hee stated, "and is considered one of the poet's best." 2. "When will you teach me how to drive?" Austin asked in exasperated choler. "Must I wait another six months?"


 * choler is one of the four bodily humors, identified with bile, believed to be associated with a peevish or irascible temperament/ means anger.