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__Paragraph on animal farm of p.59-60__ May 10th Animal farm deals with one of the events that occurred in reality - Russian revolution. The author adapts the event into the farm and criticizes communism. He uses each animal to represent an important historical figure. For example, Napoleon as Stalin and Snowball as Trotsky and Boxer as working class and Moses as religion play very important roles in Animal Farm. It is amazing how he could fit the whole incident into a much smaller scale.

pg. 55-56 22nd April 1. When I opened my report card, I saw it: an "a", the grade I really had worked for. 2. There is someone I need to call every morning: Eunice Choi. 3.The class elected the most organized person as treasurer: Jim Rutledge. 4. The whole student body waited for the principle to call the person to receive this award, Full scholarship to Stanford university, the most coveted of all other scholarship by huge distinctions.

pg.52 Exercises 1.Your grandmother was right: there is nothing new under the sun, nothing created in this earth, only discovering what had already been made. 2a. But these numbers tell only part of the story, only the exposed part of the whole thing, only the external sides of the story, only one side of the situation. 2b.But these numbers tell only part of the story, part not necessary, part that doesn't hold truth.

3rd March, 2010 The art of styling sentences p.33 1.Hardware, software, a modem- these are all essential parts of building a computer.

2. Poetry and music, painting and sculpture, drama and dance- which type of art are you into?

My own- chocolate or vanilla, banana topping or strawberry topping, chocolate syrup or honey syrup- which type of ice-cream do you prefer?

22 Student should of did the following read my last duchess and the book candide and they should of wrote a 10 page paper.

Twenty-two student should have done the following: read "My Last Duchess" and the book Candide, and they should have written ten page paper.

8th March 2010 The art of styling sentences p.39 2. Odie and Garfield (My dog and cat) started to bite each others head off. 3. My favourite colours- black and white -always attract me to new clothes. 4.Learning new basic skills- tackling and teamwork- will help me suceed in any sport. Learning new basic skills-co-orperation and sportsmanship- will help me succeed in any sport. (don't know if this works) 5. A total break through (plant shutdown) shocked the whole community.

10th March 2010 The art of styling sentences

1. In my opinion, the first one is better than the latter. The second one indeed contains more details and descriptions, however the problem is that there were way too many details that distracted one's focus on the main topic. It often had unnecessary details that blurred the main point ans the flow of the writing.

2. Greening buds, patches of mud, scattered puddles, a birth of color -- spring really was on its way. Noel always found this season to be the ripest: knowing of the changes that would soon be thrust upon her made her feel a certain tie to the fruit trees that were just beginning to show their blossoms. She too would be plucked from her current home and shipped off to some far off place. The plum's endpoint could have been anywhere in the world. But this was not the first time she had started over on some other side of the world, and it certainly wouldn't be the last. She had learned to appreciate spring, and she knew these harbingers of spring would always find her no matter where she moved.