Discussing+Comments+Andrew+F 

Narrative WRiting - I agree to the fact that it was not the best title for this piece.I just tried to come up with a title related to the term ' cross country '. And I noticed other comments about some of my major and minor grammar mistakes.

CHaracterization i can clearly see a lot of comments made on my characterization essay. I just want to thank you to start. THe extra spacing between paragraphs were not intended and I still do not know how that happened. I appreciate the fact that you made comments to the content of the essay. Sadly, I admit that I have left out some examples or evidences supporting my ideas and I also believe that was one of the major flaws of this essay. I had to read this essay over and over to recall what I meant when I was writing specific lines since this essay was written a long time ago.