Comments+on+essay-+Austin+Yoo

Dear Ms. Porter,

I totally agree with your comments on my paper. For the character analysis essay, I do have many words that are repetitive. I also think that the intro is strong because I started working hard but slipped. For the Narrative essay, I could not take my time. I had written an essay and during the peer editing session Joshua pointed out that this had nothing to do with a lesson. So, I had to change it in a day. If I had more time I would have fixed it more and made it a better essay.